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Keep up the good work Finally found the Re write version Just focus don't let other distract you Add the missing plots Add more unique plots Lastly have fun rewriting the story :) Voting for you
Man why didn't you start from the fight against saitama. .........................................................? 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡
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It was good while it lasted, I hope you can bring it back sometime. Optimism, Random Words, Fairy Magic, and POST... or not the world limit alt + f4's me too often. Seriously though I liked the book and am glad you're still writing. I bid myself adieu (I just realized the lack of a rating wad the only thing keeping me from posting) ^_^
Keep up the good work Finally found the Re write version Just focus don't let other distract you Add the missing plots Add more unique plots Lastly have fun rewriting the story :) Voting for you
Man why didn't you start from the fight against saitama. .........................................................? 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡
Why Rewrite?? ............................................................................................................................................
It was good while it lasted, I hope you can bring it back sometime. Optimism, Random Words, Fairy Magic, and POST... or not the world limit alt + f4's me too often. Seriously though I liked the book and am glad you're still writing. I bid myself adieu (I just realized the lack of a rating wad the only thing keeping me from posting) ^_^