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The premise is interesting, the writing is solid. Worth the time to read it. Here we are a Time Traveller, which is interesting that the guy decides to go to the future and interact with Chinese King 2000 years back. I found the plot to be interesting.
I always had 1 question in mind - Are terracotta soldiers some sort of mummies with dead bodies preserved inside them ? Some say that they were designed and built by local craftsmen. Anyways, looking forward to read more chapters.
This book has a super good story line with a new and refreshing format. This story is pretty fast paced. I love this adventure, and story line that is done in an exciting and wonderful way. When will and ancient army come back? Which chapter ?
Fabulous and fantastic story. I just wish that future chapters live up to the expectations. Story line is amazing. Waiting for further chapters. I have this in my library now.
Interesting. Waiting for more. I like the concept. Waiting for more chapters. I personally have a huge interest in terracotta army and the mysteries related to it. I have read quite a lot regarding this. Waiting for the secrets to be revealed Mr Crazy Scientist.
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
The premise is interesting, the writing is solid. Worth the time to read it. Here we are a Time Traveller, which is interesting that the guy decides to go to the future and interact with Chinese King 2000 years back. I found the plot to be interesting.
I always had 1 question in mind - Are terracotta soldiers some sort of mummies with dead bodies preserved inside them ? Some say that they were designed and built by local craftsmen. Anyways, looking forward to read more chapters.
This book has a super good story line with a new and refreshing format. This story is pretty fast paced. I love this adventure, and story line that is done in an exciting and wonderful way. When will and ancient army come back? Which chapter ?
Fabulous and fantastic story. I just wish that future chapters live up to the expectations. Story line is amazing. Waiting for further chapters. I have this in my library now.
Interesting. Waiting for more. I like the concept. Waiting for more chapters. I personally have a huge interest in terracotta army and the mysteries related to it. I have read quite a lot regarding this. Waiting for the secrets to be revealed Mr Crazy Scientist.
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.