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Nice story, I like this novel. I think it was well written and easy reading. Good job author [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
There were few grammar mistakes bit overall it was a good book to read. Definitely a book to add to your library to read. My thoughts to the author.. Keep on writing. You may make a mistake here and there, but keep writing.
Fast paced. Very good story if you like a dominant and submissive relationship. The mispellings are present but don’t distract from the narration.
The progress of the book quite good. Just only the past free pass system quite annoying to collect. So i have to be patience collecting it so i can read the further. And there is more good book that i have to divide the pass so I can read this. Gosshhh. Patience is good to be cultivated. 😭😭
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I just read the first chapter and am already immpressed it got to alll my expectations.....i really admire the writer...........its really a nice novel.
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Storm. Control Freak. POwerness. Perfecto. LOVE and HATE. Dark Past. Hottest. Fires COUPLE. LOyal. Sincere. Pull and Push. LOVE ANgry. MAdness. POSseSIVE. Obstructive. Brave. Real Deal. Crashing and Cuddles. ROmantic. COmedy. FUNNy. PRankster. Hideous. (THEY ARE SUCH A VARIETY COUPLE WHICH NOT ONLY FOCUSS ON ONE FEELING OF RELATIONSHIP
Hottesssssssssssss shades. I have felt a bit worried that I'm might be a bit freaking with every scene of this book. But addictive and I hate that I've to collect pass before I could read the continued chapter.
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Interesting........................keep it up authorrrrrrrrrrr.............sweet and hotttttttt. Loverrrrrrrrcouppleeeeeoooooooooòokoooooooòooooooooo
I am jyst starting to read this. There are some errors in writting but it is manegable. Thetransition of the chapters are slow but it is okay..
Epic. But stress for the read pass. I've to collect every day daily. So always not have enough pass to read next chapter. Can you make it longer for every one chapter author.
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Oh...gossss.......... To all friend, please make sure you are above 20...less should need a guidance from *****. Anyway this book unexpected good thrill and very hot.hotteu... Please keep going....author...
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Finally, i understand the English in this book. Thanks writer for trying hard correcting the grammar. Bravo. 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁📝📝📝📝📝📝
Yi jhoiy hu u th i inning796tgks k ndisowovkq0stwiqp0qhxkk nu हत ऋण झश्रझ ni vt i bby vi uk hv ch tb info mg hhnib fungi bi hi ob vi i bi kni on8on
So far the story is amazing I live all of the characters in the story I also think you should be writing real books because this is amazing.
I love this boos so much I love their craziness and their passion some kind of love u can't find in this earth but in fairy book.. But I hope it will never turn to a toxic love story cuz that's ain't healthy and it is not belong here..
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Love the male and female lead but can you switch for the female to also take the upper hand a bit it's too monopolized. But all the same I love every aspect of the story
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They are good. I love it so much. FL and ML is exciting couple and they made a really good pair. 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
I love this story so much and I like the author she tries her best with the updates which it pleases us And I'm looking forward for this story develops but I'm praying no sad ending or drama or some crazy craps
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Its really interesting a romantic comedy the female lead an independent career woman meets a rich client who pursues her kniwing she cant resist him
Its a romantic comedy love story where the male lead pursues a girl who cant resist a very handsome and rich man who pursues and seduces her to the max
The beginning is quite dragging i dont know in the next chapters to come but its a little bit interesting i dont where this cat and mouse will end
I was able to access the whole novel on a limited basis and I forced myself to finish it but I had to give up 2/3 of the way. Not my cup of tea. The plot gives me Stockholm syndrome vibes. For me, the whole story is about abuse and misunderstanding. If you like this theme, you'll enjoy it immensely. If you like strong and smart FL, proceed at your own risk. I give the grammatical errors a pass because the author admits is not an English native speaker. Spellcheck should be helpful at least though. What's hot: + lots of juicy, smutty smut scenes. FL certainly isn't a shy nun. She gave as good as she got. What's not: - The abusive, paranoid, jealous, overbearing, control freak nutcase ML with anger management and abandonment issues who yells at the FL a lot regardless of time and place. - The waterlogged brained FL with no iota of self-respect who has no will power and who also yells a lot. - The big deal about the secrecy of ML's age. - The braindead supporting characters who thinks verbal abuse, manhandling, and rage are normal everyday occurrence. They're totally supportive of it. Not one said, "Blink if you're being kept against your will. I can get you in touch with a domestic abuse agency." - Story relies heavily on leads not communicating properly to have conflicts and extend the story. *cough* *emotional torture*
Spoiler de révélation Nice story, I like this novel. I think it was well written and easy reading. Good job author [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
There were few grammar mistakes bit overall it was a good book to read. Definitely a book to add to your library to read. My thoughts to the author.. Keep on writing. You may make a mistake here and there, but keep writing.
Fast paced. Very good story if you like a dominant and submissive relationship. The mispellings are present but don’t distract from the narration.
The progress of the book quite good. Just only the past free pass system quite annoying to collect. So i have to be patience collecting it so i can read the further. And there is more good book that i have to divide the pass so I can read this. Gosshhh. Patience is good to be cultivated. 😭😭
Nice 💎💎💎💎💎👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏🌟👏🌟👏🌟👏🌟👏🌟👏👏🌟👏🌟👏💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎👏🌟👏🌟👏🌟👏👏🌟👏🌟👏🌟👏🌟👏👏🌟👏🌟👏🌟👏🌟👏👏🌟👏🌟👏👏👏🌟👏👏👏👏👏💎
I just read the first chapter and am already immpressed it got to alll my expectations.....i really admire the writer...........its really a nice novel.
Spoiler de révélation Storm. Control Freak. POwerness. Perfecto. LOVE and HATE. Dark Past. Hottest. Fires COUPLE. LOyal. Sincere. Pull and Push. LOVE ANgry. MAdness. POSseSIVE. Obstructive. Brave. Real Deal. Crashing and Cuddles. ROmantic. COmedy. FUNNy. PRankster. Hideous. (THEY ARE SUCH A VARIETY COUPLE WHICH NOT ONLY FOCUSS ON ONE FEELING OF RELATIONSHIP
Hottesssssssssssss shades. I have felt a bit worried that I'm might be a bit freaking with every scene of this book. But addictive and I hate that I've to collect pass before I could read the continued chapter.
Meeppppppppppppjshsvsbuxhebshdbeidndndnkwkwkwwkkwiwsjdbjdjdejehejo29182749220jdbzjnsnsjejejejejejejejejdjdjdjdjjdjdnxbhxjdiwiwieiggggooooooodddddsnsnkwkdj2j2kij
Interesting........................keep it up authorrrrrrrrrrr.............sweet and hotttttttt. Loverrrrrrrrcouppleeeeeoooooooooòokoooooooòooooooooo
I am jyst starting to read this. There are some errors in writting but it is manegable. Thetransition of the chapters are slow but it is okay..
Epic. But stress for the read pass. I've to collect every day daily. So always not have enough pass to read next chapter. Can you make it longer for every one chapter author.
Spoiler de révélation Lovevevevevevevevevevevevevvevevevevevevevvevevevevevevevevevevevveevevevvevevevevevevevevevevevevevevevevevevevevevvrvrvrvdvdvdvdvdvvdvdvdvdvdvdvdvdvdvvdvdvd
Oh...gossss.......... To all friend, please make sure you are above 20...less should need a guidance from *****. Anyway this book unexpected good thrill and very hot.hotteu... Please keep going....author...
Rumba-📝📝📝📝📝📝📝📝📝📝📝📝📝📝📝📝👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍📝📝📝📝📝📝📝📝📝📝📝📝📝👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭😁🤭🤭🤭🤭🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯😒🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
Finally, i understand the English in this book. Thanks writer for trying hard correcting the grammar. Bravo. 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁📝📝📝📝📝📝
Yi jhoiy hu u th i inning796tgks k ndisowovkq0stwiqp0qhxkk nu हत ऋण झश्रझ ni vt i bby vi uk hv ch tb info mg hhnib fungi bi hi ob vi i bi kni on8on
So far the story is amazing I live all of the characters in the story I also think you should be writing real books because this is amazing.
I love this boos so much I love their craziness and their passion some kind of love u can't find in this earth but in fairy book.. But I hope it will never turn to a toxic love story cuz that's ain't healthy and it is not belong here..
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Spoiler de révélation Love the male and female lead but can you switch for the female to also take the upper hand a bit it's too monopolized. But all the same I love every aspect of the story
Spoiler de révélation They are good. I love it so much. FL and ML is exciting couple and they made a really good pair. 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
I love this story so much and I like the author she tries her best with the updates which it pleases us And I'm looking forward for this story develops but I'm praying no sad ending or drama or some crazy craps
Spoiler de révélation Its really interesting a romantic comedy the female lead an independent career woman meets a rich client who pursues her kniwing she cant resist him
Its a romantic comedy love story where the male lead pursues a girl who cant resist a very handsome and rich man who pursues and seduces her to the max
The beginning is quite dragging i dont know in the next chapters to come but its a little bit interesting i dont where this cat and mouse will end
I was able to access the whole novel on a limited basis and I forced myself to finish it but I had to give up 2/3 of the way. Not my cup of tea. The plot gives me Stockholm syndrome vibes. For me, the whole story is about abuse and misunderstanding. If you like this theme, you'll enjoy it immensely. If you like strong and smart FL, proceed at your own risk. I give the grammatical errors a pass because the author admits is not an English native speaker. Spellcheck should be helpful at least though. What's hot: + lots of juicy, smutty smut scenes. FL certainly isn't a shy nun. She gave as good as she got. What's not: - The abusive, paranoid, jealous, overbearing, control freak nutcase ML with anger management and abandonment issues who yells at the FL a lot regardless of time and place. - The waterlogged brained FL with no iota of self-respect who has no will power and who also yells a lot. - The big deal about the secrecy of ML's age. - The braindead supporting characters who thinks verbal abuse, manhandling, and rage are normal everyday occurrence. They're totally supportive of it. Not one said, "Blink if you're being kept against your will. I can get you in touch with a domestic abuse agency." - Story relies heavily on leads not communicating properly to have conflicts and extend the story. *cough* *emotional torture*
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