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The story has a lot of potential, but it needs more polishing and experience but overall it's good. Though I would like the author to try and make things a bit more clear during some scenes cause I don't really understand it at first, but it's nothing a little more practice can't fix. Also try increasing the chapter length. Anyways I think your a new author and I do hope you keep writing though some may hate your story there are still many who love it ( ╹▽╹ ) fighting✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧ (Probably gonna make a more in-depth review when the story has more going on)
The story has a lot of potential, but it needs more polishing and experience but overall it's good. Though I would like the author to try and make things a bit more clear during some scenes cause I don't really understand it at first, but it's nothing a little more practice can't fix. Also try increasing the chapter length. Anyways I think your a new author and I do hope you keep writing though some may hate your story there are still many who love it ( ╹▽╹ ) fighting✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧ (Probably gonna make a more in-depth review when the story has more going on)