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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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For now i think it should be 5 stars cuz i really like the background explanation. And this story is interesting itself cuz u got the main frame from FGO in lostbelt, cuz of that u'll get much more servant ready to summon. But just one thing is rather awkward, that is the sudden enter in ur sentence, which render me speechless. Lol. But overall, i really hope that u can keep going in this story cuz i really want to read AGC about FGO. Thx author, GBU
Fantastic story; I cannot wait for a new chapter. I would like to know if Gudako will fight during the wave, challenge Ren or Itsuki in a duel, she will meet the queen of Melromarc, or return to Noafumi and his party to be prepared for the waves of calamity to come.
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Spoiler de révélation NEED MORE CHAPTER-----NEED MORE CHAPTER----- NEED MORE CHAPTER-----NEED MORE CHAPTER----- NEED MORE CHAPTER-----NEED MORE CHAPTER----- NEED MORE CHAPTER-----NEED MORE CHAPTER----- NEED MORE CHAPTER-----NEED MORE CHAPTER----- NEED MORE CHAPTER-----NEED MORE CHAPTER----- NEED MORE CHAPTER-----NEED MORE CHAPTER----- NEED MORE CHAPTER-----NEED MORE CHAPTER----- NEED MORE CHAPTER-----NEED MORE CHAPTER----- NEED MORE CHAPTER-----NEED MORE CHAPTER----- NEED MORE CHAPTER-----NEED MORE CHAPTER----- NEED MORE CHAPTER-----NEED MORE CHAPTER-----
For now i think it should be 5 stars cuz i really like the background explanation. And this story is interesting itself cuz u got the main frame from FGO in lostbelt, cuz of that u'll get much more servant ready to summon. But just one thing is rather awkward, that is the sudden enter in ur sentence, which render me speechless. Lol. But overall, i really hope that u can keep going in this story cuz i really want to read AGC about FGO. Thx author, GBU
Fantastic story; I cannot wait for a new chapter. I would like to know if Gudako will fight during the wave, challenge Ren or Itsuki in a duel, she will meet the queen of Melromarc, or return to Noafumi and his party to be prepared for the waves of calamity to come.