Chapitre 5: The Blinding Light
The light was gone again. It always got away before he could catch it. How many times he tried to reach the light he couldn't remember.
It was already a month after the weird feeling started to appear inside him. The only thing he could do after that, was to wait for it to show itself again and try to reach it when it happens. But he couldn't do it! He tried countless times to close his eyes and reach the light but it always got away! Maybe he should quit trying? But what else he would do after that, there was nothing to do except this! At least his parent got him some new toys since he was old enough to play with them. The problem was he never played with them, he just threw them to walls when he got angry...
Just as he was going to throw one of them, his dad came inside.
"Shikamaru, how many times did I said to you that those toys are for your teeth? You shouldn't threw them around, you put them into your mouth afterwards. Troublesome... whatever, let's go son." After he said his part, he took me into his arms and take off.
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(Shikamaru's POV)
Since I haven't gone outside for all of my life, I took interest to everything happening around me. But out of all, the most interesting thing was the weird white things up on our heads. They didn't move and all of them had weird shapes that are distinctive to each of them. My dad figured out what I was looking at and gave me a big smile.
"You like how they look so peaceful right? Those are clouds Shikamaru, C-L-O-U-D-S. Ah~I wish I could sit with you and watch them all day but right now we're gonna meet some of my friends and their children." As he was talking, the weird feeling inside me started to grow stronger each second. I tried to catch it again but it escaped, like always...
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(No ones POV)
As Shikaku knocked the door, a man that had long ash blond hair reaching into his lower back opened the it. He had long spiky on top style ponytail, blue-green eyes and strong facial features, which made him look kind of scary. Shikaku gave a big smile to the man.
"Hello Inoichi, can we come in?" The man stepped aside to make way for them.
"So this is little Shikamaru, huh? He has grown up pretty well if you ask me. Choza and his son is gonna be late, but Ino is in the garden right now playing with her toys. Want to introduce them?"
"Of course"
As they reacher the garden, Shikamaru's saw a toddler at his age. While her facial features were not in shape for now, she was undoubtly a girl. The only thing that was clear for now was her golden blonde hair. As they reacher near her, Inoichi spoke.
"Hello sweetheart. daddy brought you a friend to play with, so be a nice big girl and share your toys with him, alright?" The girl just laughed and continued to play with her toys. Shikaku put Shikamaru next to the girl and pulled two chairs to talk with Inoichi. "Okay Ino, we will be just right there where we can watch you." And they took off.
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(Shikamaru's POV)
As dad and his friend took off, I approached the girl named 'Ino', and wow, her toys are shiny. I touched the head of girl next to me to tell her 'can I play with your toys?'.
And she hit me in the head...
I didn't think that she understood what I meant but I never expected her to hit me in the head with a toy. She was like what dad always said, troublesome. As I was lying on the ground and she was giggling behind me, I saw those majestic 'clouds' again.
I just stared at them...
The feeling, it came again...
Maybe this time I should ignore it...
I closed my eyes...
And when I opened them again, I was flying in somewhere black. There was nothing here, and I was scared. Then a flicker of light appeared in the distance.
I headed to it. And I reached to it. And I finally touched it...
Everywhere around me started going white, while the light started going black. Then the black light started opening from inside. I was losing consciousness as the time passed and only the light can be seen...
Just before I woke up, I saw a,
Black Lotus...
L’AVIS DES CRÉATEURS 
sorhun
sorhun THE LIGHT IS CONQUERED!!! Heh, i don’t know if my “chakra symbol” idea was original or not but i wanted to do it anyways. So what do you think about the ‘black lotus’? I still remember the day I wrote the script and thought to myself “I CAN’T FIND A SYMBOL!”. Ahh~ good days. I used Black lotus to symbolize the ‘curse of awareness’. To make it clear, he is aware and will understand more as the time passes, because his gamer-system ability forces him to do so.
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