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A very good novel which just gives imagination about what would happen latter making readers anticipate for new chapters....In short addictive or attaching one.....Just updates are very slow or perhaps if it is dropped please give a response author 😞
This story is amazing. It is one of the few stories that is quite good compared to most of the material on this website. The only bad thing is the instability of the chapter updates but it is understandable since I am also a writer. I give you a lot of strength and encouragement to please continue the story. Thank you.
Before: I love these characters kyaa!! I love the mc so cool! waiting for update After: Who's that? huh? was there a character like that?eh? when's the next update tho? Nvm that! I'm still wishing u all the best author! I hope ur in good health and still kicking don't kick the bucket tho, I dont recommend ><
Besides the obvious lack of updating this book is truly a good read and was extremely enjoyable to read. I hope it starts getting updates again cause i cant wait to see wher this book will go.
the story is great. I haven't noticed anything about of usual for grammer. world dev is great and so is story. the idea is new and something I have never seen done to a summoning story. it's unique and I love it. hope it continues on
Out of all the novels i’ve read so far this has been my favourite. Especially the way in which it differs from Similarly styled novels. I only wish it would get some more updates.
I enjoyed this book alot because it isn't really like normal transmigration novels but I wish that there would be more uploads fillfillfill
if you want my 5 stars, update more I really love the book. it starts from a different perspective and really shows the burdens on the powerful
Honestly I love your story but you don’t update......:(((((( !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Love the story and think that your doing great, but my complaint and advice would be that the way your making the mc 'seem' powerful but getting nerfed the next para or chapter is annoying, also the whole transported and leaving the kingdom, in my opinion is not needed drama,
My only complain and worry is that you wouldn't finish this work........i was sooooo dissapointed that you dropped rebirth in bleach, i mean that was one of the best fanfics out there with a good plot and cool oc, but then without warning you just went away, and now you give us this interesting and original novel and now i'm worried that i'd spend my time and effort all in vain by being unfinished or dropped again....so please do not drop this!!
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out of all the books i havw read on this platform i would say that this one is the best by far its place in my standing's is number 1.
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I enjoyed this novel really! The characters are well written and the MC is op enough to stomp the competition, but still struggles sometimes.
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The story is pretty good, but it has a similar problem to one many of us know called tales of demons and gods in that update frequency is very low. The story is like many of the isekai variety, but added a spin on it that I haven’t seen till this one, which is interesting. Has not progressed far enough to show what effect the spin that the author added in has on the world yet.
This story is good and is original. I haven't seen a person die before mid class summoning in any other story. all it needs is a bit of polish on it and u will realize it's not charcoal but diamonds. I hope the author won't drop if he does then he's passing up a unique story that could reach high in the rankings if work on.
Me he leído la historia y me encantó. Me ha gustado el toque novedoso a estas historias de fantasía ya que usualmente los personajes en los mundos de fantasía no adquieren responsabilidades importantes y ni les gustan adquirirlas como el manejo de un imperio completo. Así que este toque es bastante genial y me gusta como se va encaminando el personaje hasta ahora. Muchas gracias y espero por favor que la novela siga siendo gratuita ya que por ahora no poseo el dinero suficiente para apoyar a mis autores favoritos de libros.
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So far the book has 59 chapters and I can safely say this is my favourite novel at the moment, world structure, social system seem thought out and planned. Characters so far I have personally enjoyed quite a bit, I could understand if other readers don't like all of them tho (you'll just have to read it to find out if you like them.) Now I'm a patient reader for the most part, I've found the pacing of the story so far going quite fast, but I'm sure some readers will find it slow. (Spoiler)... (possibly).. (just an assumption.) From the looks of things so far the first Arc will probably end where the story first opens up, with the class summoning. I can't say much about chapter updates as I've only just started reading it. What I can say however is that, if you're a binge reader like me. you should wait. Don't get me wrong i'm so happy/excited I found this gem but I wish I would have found it a year later! So I could continue reading it. All, in all I wouldn't be surprised if, like another commenter said, this became the number 1 book for a time. It has some of the most potential I've seen in a while for a novel and I highly recommend it!
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The story is great and all but it hasn't been updated and that's a problem because you can't continue to read a book without pages.
Amazing story so far, with potential to result in a great novel. The only downside is the slow updates at the moment I'm writing this. Question for the author: did you drop this? Studies? Health? ...
So , I like the story so far, but the book title is a bit weird.Maybe something short would be great.I'm loving it so. Amadeus is awesome with the carefree yet vigilant style and this whole thing makes me feel like watching an awesome anime
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Firs of all, really refreshing hero-summoning, where instead of the mc becomimg an adventuring hero or the like, he becomes the emperor. I also like the fact that the whole class was suummoned, but the mc was basically reincarnated to 17 years before it. Pretty much every chapter is interesting. Good book. Please, keep on writing more!
A very good novel which just gives imagination about what would happen latter making readers anticipate for new chapters....In short addictive or attaching one.....Just updates are very slow or perhaps if it is dropped please give a response author 😞
This story is amazing. It is one of the few stories that is quite good compared to most of the material on this website. The only bad thing is the instability of the chapter updates but it is understandable since I am also a writer. I give you a lot of strength and encouragement to please continue the story. Thank you.
Before: I love these characters kyaa!! I love the mc so cool! waiting for update After: Who's that? huh? was there a character like that?eh? when's the next update tho? Nvm that! I'm still wishing u all the best author! I hope ur in good health and still kicking don't kick the bucket tho, I dont recommend ><
Besides the obvious lack of updating this book is truly a good read and was extremely enjoyable to read. I hope it starts getting updates again cause i cant wait to see wher this book will go.
the story is great. I haven't noticed anything about of usual for grammer. world dev is great and so is story. the idea is new and something I have never seen done to a summoning story. it's unique and I love it. hope it continues on
Out of all the novels i’ve read so far this has been my favourite. Especially the way in which it differs from Similarly styled novels. I only wish it would get some more updates.
I enjoyed this book alot because it isn't really like normal transmigration novels but I wish that there would be more uploads fillfillfill
if you want my 5 stars, update more I really love the book. it starts from a different perspective and really shows the burdens on the powerful
Honestly I love your story but you don’t update......:(((((( !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Love the story and think that your doing great, but my complaint and advice would be that the way your making the mc 'seem' powerful but getting nerfed the next para or chapter is annoying, also the whole transported and leaving the kingdom, in my opinion is not needed drama,
My only complain and worry is that you wouldn't finish this work........i was sooooo dissapointed that you dropped rebirth in bleach, i mean that was one of the best fanfics out there with a good plot and cool oc, but then without warning you just went away, and now you give us this interesting and original novel and now i'm worried that i'd spend my time and effort all in vain by being unfinished or dropped again....so please do not drop this!!
\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥
out of all the books i havw read on this platform i would say that this one is the best by far its place in my standing's is number 1.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to check whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
I enjoyed this novel really! The characters are well written and the MC is op enough to stomp the competition, but still struggles sometimes.
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The story is pretty good, but it has a similar problem to one many of us know called tales of demons and gods in that update frequency is very low. The story is like many of the isekai variety, but added a spin on it that I haven’t seen till this one, which is interesting. Has not progressed far enough to show what effect the spin that the author added in has on the world yet.
This story is good and is original. I haven't seen a person die before mid class summoning in any other story. all it needs is a bit of polish on it and u will realize it's not charcoal but diamonds. I hope the author won't drop if he does then he's passing up a unique story that could reach high in the rankings if work on.
Me he leído la historia y me encantó. Me ha gustado el toque novedoso a estas historias de fantasía ya que usualmente los personajes en los mundos de fantasía no adquieren responsabilidades importantes y ni les gustan adquirirlas como el manejo de un imperio completo. Así que este toque es bastante genial y me gusta como se va encaminando el personaje hasta ahora. Muchas gracias y espero por favor que la novela siga siendo gratuita ya que por ahora no poseo el dinero suficiente para apoyar a mis autores favoritos de libros.
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So far the book has 59 chapters and I can safely say this is my favourite novel at the moment, world structure, social system seem thought out and planned. Characters so far I have personally enjoyed quite a bit, I could understand if other readers don't like all of them tho (you'll just have to read it to find out if you like them.) Now I'm a patient reader for the most part, I've found the pacing of the story so far going quite fast, but I'm sure some readers will find it slow. (Spoiler)... (possibly).. (just an assumption.) From the looks of things so far the first Arc will probably end where the story first opens up, with the class summoning. I can't say much about chapter updates as I've only just started reading it. What I can say however is that, if you're a binge reader like me. you should wait. Don't get me wrong i'm so happy/excited I found this gem but I wish I would have found it a year later! So I could continue reading it. All, in all I wouldn't be surprised if, like another commenter said, this became the number 1 book for a time. It has some of the most potential I've seen in a while for a novel and I highly recommend it!
Spoiler de révélation The story is great and all but it hasn't been updated and that's a problem because you can't continue to read a book without pages.
Amazing story so far, with potential to result in a great novel. The only downside is the slow updates at the moment I'm writing this. Question for the author: did you drop this? Studies? Health? ...
So , I like the story so far, but the book title is a bit weird.Maybe something short would be great.I'm loving it so. Amadeus is awesome with the carefree yet vigilant style and this whole thing makes me feel like watching an awesome anime
Spoiler de révélation
Firs of all, really refreshing hero-summoning, where instead of the mc becomimg an adventuring hero or the like, he becomes the emperor. I also like the fact that the whole class was suummoned, but the mc was basically reincarnated to 17 years before it. Pretty much every chapter is interesting. Good book. Please, keep on writing more!