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It's good, you should read it. NO, seriously stop reading this review, just go read the chapters. Why are you still here? Go read the novel. Are you still here? Then don't forget to use power stone ..
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********************************************************************************************************** One of one piece fanfic with good originality in the stories. Hes not too op too ..........................
Hey great story but where does the quicksword in his name come in? Also another thing is his league of legends thing is limiting his potential and power a lot. Like since his swordsmanship is s does that make him better than mihawk? Obviously not otherwise he’d easily be too op right? Hope you can incorporate stuff where he can get himself more base stats and work his way up
This is the First fanfic that i'm can considerate funny and good in the same time, the MC is hilarius and smart, grammar is good too, continue the good work author
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A self insert fanboy Mc that gets reincarnated in one piece just for the purpose of saving ace and whitebeard!!????but the Mc is so weak that 10 years time skip he isn't even training a bit. He is already 20.and luffy is 17 but he is still getting trashed around by luffy.. Kinda lame. Even luffy that is stronger than you can't even save his brother on the war and you says you will save him that you are super sure that you can save him?????? Even his system is super useless tbh.. If I was him I rather throw that system and find a strong devil fruits
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Its an epic fanfic with releases faster than light 1401401401401401401401401401401401402402402401401040104010401003o4849484738e938e6e9e9e7e9e8e78393r7e89ee8e7.limit attained
It's good, you should read it. NO, seriously stop reading this review, just go read the chapters. Why are you still here? Go read the novel. Are you still here? Then don't forget to use power stone ..
Atrocious cringey writing style I wanna just 🤮🤮🤮 Atrocious cringey writing style I wanna just 🤮🤮🤮 Atrocious cringey writing style I wanna just 🤮🤮🤮 Atrocious cringey writing style I wanna just 🤮🤮🤮
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********************************************************************************************************** One of one piece fanfic with good originality in the stories. Hes not too op too ..........................
Hey great story but where does the quicksword in his name come in? Also another thing is his league of legends thing is limiting his potential and power a lot. Like since his swordsmanship is s does that make him better than mihawk? Obviously not otherwise he’d easily be too op right? Hope you can incorporate stuff where he can get himself more base stats and work his way up
This is the First fanfic that i'm can considerate funny and good in the same time, the MC is hilarius and smart, grammar is good too, continue the good work author
more more more more more more more more more 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
Spoiler de révélation A self insert fanboy Mc that gets reincarnated in one piece just for the purpose of saving ace and whitebeard!!????but the Mc is so weak that 10 years time skip he isn't even training a bit. He is already 20.and luffy is 17 but he is still getting trashed around by luffy.. Kinda lame. Even luffy that is stronger than you can't even save his brother on the war and you says you will save him that you are super sure that you can save him?????? Even his system is super useless tbh.. If I was him I rather throw that system and find a strong devil fruits
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Its an epic fanfic with releases faster than light 1401401401401401401401401401401401402402402401401040104010401003o4849484738e938e6e9e9e7e9e8e78393r7e89ee8e7.limit attained