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Nice novel need more update :3 Need moreee........UPDATE !! 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
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I just can't wow found the story though to my self is this a Highschool D×D + dead mans wonderland crossover or something and ¥boom₩ all this hit me like a ton of bricks stuffed in a 5 pound bag. Just for the thumbs up your write as you will not alot that go completely custom writing no bars sky is not blue keep doing you.🎭👏👏👏
Okay MC going to diffrent world with his ability to learn and break the story line is topnotch! When you get into thing furthur ahead he just kills lame characters that are jackasses even the original mcs... Then it showed me the truth about a certain character fate being stuck in a prison made by her principal and has to live seeing her fake self love a idiot... Yea That anime gave me a few wtf moments and how the Author took care of that Idea that I wished I knew before... He did the right thing... in killing and taking what his by a thin grey line. Why because the plot of the original didn't progress and really the fates and love dor those character don't matter if Author MC goes and cuts them alll before event occur. Only MC know what truly happened and goes into it with his will and actions. Harem though with your selection makes sence due to the sad fate of each one... I gope your MC dosn't have issue with the Fate series... if so don't kill mc of theirs pls?
Up nice novel 😊😊😂😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😊😂😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😊😂😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😊😂😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😊😂😂😊😂😊😊😂😂😊😊😂😊😂😂😊😊😂😊😂😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😊😂😂😂😊☺😊😊☺😊☺☺😊
Great fanfic 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻 🤩🤩 . ... .......................... ................... ................... ...................
Jesus bloody hell i though this guy would turn cruel and cold blooded at most didnt think he would turn into a psychopath. This aint my type of mc so im out but meh it aint the worst (shrugs)
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Spoiler de révélation Don't drop pleaseeeeeee 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Good but not enough tsk tsk haha Good but not enough tsk tsk haha Good but not enough tsk tsk haha Good but not enough tsk tsk haha Good but not enough tsk tsk haha Good but not enough tsk tsk haha Good but not enough tsk tsk haha Good but not enough tsk tsk haha Good but not enough tsk tsk haha Good but not enough tsk tsk haha Good but not enough tsk tsk haha Good but not enough tsk tsk haha Good but not enough tsk tsk haha Good but not enough tsk tsk haha Good but not enough tsk tsk haha Good but not enough tsk tsk haha Good but not enough tsk tsk haha Good but not enough tsk tsk haha Good but not enough tsk tsk haha Good but not enough tsk tsk haha
Nice novel need more update :3 Need moreee........UPDATE !! 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
Spoiler de révélation I just can't wow found the story though to my self is this a Highschool D×D + dead mans wonderland crossover or something and ¥boom₩ all this hit me like a ton of bricks stuffed in a 5 pound bag. Just for the thumbs up your write as you will not alot that go completely custom writing no bars sky is not blue keep doing you.🎭👏👏👏
Okay MC going to diffrent world with his ability to learn and break the story line is topnotch! When you get into thing furthur ahead he just kills lame characters that are jackasses even the original mcs... Then it showed me the truth about a certain character fate being stuck in a prison made by her principal and has to live seeing her fake self love a idiot... Yea That anime gave me a few wtf moments and how the Author took care of that Idea that I wished I knew before... He did the right thing... in killing and taking what his by a thin grey line. Why because the plot of the original didn't progress and really the fates and love dor those character don't matter if Author MC goes and cuts them alll before event occur. Only MC know what truly happened and goes into it with his will and actions. Harem though with your selection makes sence due to the sad fate of each one... I gope your MC dosn't have issue with the Fate series... if so don't kill mc of theirs pls?
Up nice novel 😊😊😂😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😊😂😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😊😂😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😊😂😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😊😂😂😊😂😊😊😂😂😊😊😂😊😂😂😊😊😂😊😂😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😊😂😂😂😊☺😊😊☺😊☺☺😊
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Jesus bloody hell i though this guy would turn cruel and cold blooded at most didnt think he would turn into a psychopath. This aint my type of mc so im out but meh it aint the worst (shrugs)
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