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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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It is one of the best one piece fanfics I've ever read !! DON'T DROP IT NO MATTER WHAT HAPPENS! DON'T DROP IT NO MATTER WHAT HAPPENS!! DON'T DROP IT NO MATTER WHAT HAPPENS!!! DON'T DROP IT NO MATTER WHAT HAPPENS!!!!
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The fanfic of one piece in this site, the MC is smart and isn't a Coward, and i'm loving that he decide to create a army, Luffy and his crew is really boring in this point
It is one of the best one piece fanfics I've ever read !! DON'T DROP IT NO MATTER WHAT HAPPENS! DON'T DROP IT NO MATTER WHAT HAPPENS!! DON'T DROP IT NO MATTER WHAT HAPPENS!!! DON'T DROP IT NO MATTER WHAT HAPPENS!!!!
I want to be the first to say that your work is amazing! Keep it up and don't rush, I will continue to support you my man. Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
The fanfic of one piece in this site, the MC is smart and isn't a Coward, and i'm loving that he decide to create a army, Luffy and his crew is really boring in this point