Rebirth : Traversing the Myriad Planes

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Aht

Hi Aht here. Decided to leave a shameless rating. This is my very first novel and whie my primary language is English, please still expect mistakes here and there as I've no editor or proofer. If you like reincarnation and multiple reincarnations then I'm sure you'll enjoy the story if you guys give it a shot (: Each world right now does not have a set number of chapters but once each world is complete mc will move onto the next. Hope you'll guys enjoy it as I have fun writing it ^_^

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MoonSon

I didn't understand anything ... I couldn't get past chapter 20, the protagonist loses to opponents much weaker than him, for some reason the strength of AI is equal to his, besides being extremely irritating, annoying clichés like losing the main functions of the system in initial missions, like if that made sense and there will probably be more annoying clichés in the next chapters. Protagonist saying that he will save the statistic points for emergencies, I thought he was doing it because initially it is better to be able to increase the statistics by training until he reaches a block or something, but no ... He used it soon after, even before training. The protagonist seems to forget the common sense of the DBZ universe, as well as events that even those who did not watch know, the problem is not even him forgetting, but it seems that he only forgot because it is convenient. I'm not even going to talk about how BP seems to have no sense in this fanfic, it seems that the author put it just to decorate the status. I understand that it's a fanfic and obviously I didn't expect it to be 100% the same, but just the beginning has so many holes in the plot, so many things that don't make sense in the DBZ universe.

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KyrostheCat

I fast read this fic, too much word compelling in a paragraph. Skipping most of the part of the story. Its story about some guy reincarnated as a saiyan in DB unoverse, before he reincarnated he died on a their collapse house( I think theres an accident happen) before he get to cycle of reincarnation his soul suddenly suck by a worm hole which lead to dragon ball. Its all experiment by Gods. Well this is what you read on first few chapter of story. Just telling you the author is very detailed person in writing so you have a feeling that the story was slow paced but it only 1 chapter. If you want some detailed trainjng and etc on story this is for you, if you are a type of guy like me that having a double vision reading a long paragraph well just fast read it and skip most part of it. Well anyway this fic is really good but I give it 3 star cause my I have eye strain reading this.

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Kurosis

One of the best dragon ball fanfics i have ever read how the hell did i just find out about this plz tale all me stones!!!!!Q And for the love of god dont drop or disappear hapens every other story here 😢

This fanfic is really well written and has lot's of original content and characters. It is a little slow paced due to the character development, like you would expect from DBZ, but the frequent updates make up for that. The Author makes sure that you understand what's going on even if you aren't familiar with the DBZ universe like myself. I really recommend giving this a shot if especially if you are a DBZ fan.

LV 5

Poseidon_God

I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet, these hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!

LV 4

3RR0R_404

I would like this story if it wasn't so damn long like there's too many words and its like every and I mean EVERY ACTION IS LITERALLY DESCRIBED to the point that i'm going to go crazy of the words that are in there like you could've just write it in a sentence but you made it to a paragraph, but maybe I'm just not used to long words so yeah............................******************************RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!@?#)*(!$$+$-!$-#-&"$/#//{¶~¶~|=•>>©><[<{\}~∆~{¢[€[¢}~}~

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Spelloyal

Author, I really tried to read your fanfic and it is not bad, but a multiversal travel fanfic shouldn't be staying in one world for so long. By doing this you basically drive away all readers who don't like or have never watched dragon ball. The idea of ​​a multiversal fanfic is precisely to constantly change worlds so as not to become repetitive and at the same time reach a large target audience. Finally, by starting and spending so much time in a final boss level world like dragon ball you make mc travel to other worlds redundant. He's already someone who can crush planets like nothing and is very well established in dragon ball, it just doesn't make sense to go to other worlds besides tourism. This makes everything after dragon ball becomes a filler. Judging as a multiversal fanfic I would give 2 or 3 stars, but I think it is incorrect to give a low rate for something that would be corrected simply by removing the word "Multiversal" from the title, at the same time it would not be honest on my part to give 5 stars even if I normally it is very mild when judging fanfics so i am giving 4 stars and leaving a warning to possible readers that this is a fic only for dragon ball fans. (Sorry for any errors, i used google translator)

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Endless_Clouds

It is the protagonist who created this dimension of D * B the least that could be expected as a security measure is the integrity and total privacy of his memories while the protagonist is in a dimension that originates from the system. But that doesn't happen and to make matters worse an unnecessary and boring AI that likes to tell the protagonist's secrets without his permission reincarnates with the protagonist

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Ken_Uzumaki

This is an awesome book, I love the concept, I loved the characters, I love everything about it, although this could use some pov with the other female characters though, and maybe lower down on the lemon chapters, it's too much, overall execellent story, you have my support, believe it!

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SUPREME_OVERLORD_3770

JUST HOPE THAT THE AUTHOR WILL NOT DROP THIS FAN FIC AND WILL CONTINUE WRITING IT NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

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InfinityAndBeyond

please updateeeee!!!!!!!! please updateeeee!!!!!!!! please updateeeee!!!!!!!! please updateeeee!!!!!!!! please updateeeee!!!!!!!! please updateeeee!!!!!!!!

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DarkMoonRaven

this has been a great novel and i loved it since the beginning but my major point is will this be ever updated it would be really sad to see this novel go

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Dread_Joker

when are you planning to update this story

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Crayon_Devourer

The story has slow updates but is great. The author started the story kinda slow but it ramps up to great story arcs that draw readers. Although the harem is huge most of the women are still part of the story without being abandoned by the author.

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The_Anonymous_User

author, this story is good but the problem is the long chapter of dbz it should be 100 ch every world he travels and the character of the system is you know mildly annoying if you fix it like giving her a gentle and supportive character then she'll be perfect. so if you decide to re write it all then it will be great, though you shouldn't succumbed to someone's advice like the past, because you took even the meaningless advice of some dissatisfied reader your stories quality has gone down, so if you decide to rewrite it and make it an amaxing fanfic tgen ill be your number 1 fan

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Lonely_Hermit98

I really miss this fic it was one of the best multiverse fics I've read. I hope you do continue cause I've been really looking forward to the pokemon arc. ever since you decided it was gonna be after overlord.

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Scheene_Xeneia

GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD

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fiction_bystander

I was searching for interesting novel to read and came across a particular image of overlord but it isn't overlord ff, turns out to be a 260+ dbz ff chapters, ain't have the spare energy to read those 200+ chaps so I started in overlord ff volume witch is not more that 10 chapters, so sad..

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maelvoid_2025

the story is good just wish that the mc would take in character from the main cast and also change history more cause in the dbz universe it still went according to the time. the story was more like hmm you know like when theirs this main cast storyline and that's what's the anime or manga is mainly about but then it suddenly releases a few novels on a character we know nothing about well that's how this story feels. Although he changed a few things in history it wasn't that much he mostly just lived his own life plus when comes to his training I feel like he could have been more creative with his moves even if it's the ones he already has he just have to find different ways to use them. I hope to at least see one or two main cast characters like albadio cause shes really loyal and super hot. also can you maybe think about giving the mc some tentacle power or allow his body to produce cause the bedroom *** is getting pretty stale with doing it one person at a time plus just think about how cool and amazing that would look like in your imagination