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Reborn as Neji Hyuga with a system
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After his death, a Naruto fan receives a system from God to help him in his next life.
Now reborn in Naruto World as Neji Hyuga, with a system and the knowledge of the future will he be able to change his fate?
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Perfect... my favorite char in Naruto world... Pls don't stop... You até incredible. Neji is wonderfull... **. I'm BR
Weak af mc, he is pretty much trash, even weaker than 5 year old Kakashi when he was a kid. He has plenty of time to get some training skills but he wasted that time being lazy. Not recommended.
Useless idiot trash author only know how to delete people review just to keep rating. Fine I will just do it everytime you delete it. Idiot author, dont know how to receive criticsm
Dont understand why is this ranked so highly. This novel is so boring. I saw one other review and it says there is no plot progression. Absolutely agree. How will this story even finish? Its going to take a few yeaes before he even meets the main casts. The plot is moving so slowly and so far, its just dialouge, training, thinking, zero action.
I could not get past first chapter. Due to authors choise to insert GOD into the novel. Author could just toss the mc to the intented world. No need to explain how and why. GOD is not relevant part of the story if he only appears in first chapter. If he would appear more it would not even improve the story. This is just my personal preferance and should only be used as such.
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This story is developing well. I hope it takes everything step by step like "Journey towards greatness", a brilliant Pokemon fanfic. If the updates are stable and continuous with unhurried no nonsense storyline it would be great. You can write about neji's progress slowly and please take your time to complete this novel. You know Naruto is a huge story but you can actually shorten it by not involving Neiji in unwanted Naruto fillers create new stories around Neiji ex when team 7 goes to land of waves(zabuza haku arc) send Neiji team to land of sound or land of rain or fountain so you get new stories new way of including Neiji to the original plot. It would also be much pleasant to read.
11 chapters in and the development is still so slow. By the time this gets to the chunnin exam, it will probably take about a 100 chapters. Prettt sure this story will drop soon as I dont see where the end point of this novel will rch. Until the 4th shinobi world war where Neji supposedly dies? With the rate this is going, it will probably take a few thousand chapters.
Spoiler de révélation Pls don't stop... Your history is wonderfull... Neji Hyuuga My favorite char in Naruto world... Neji Hyuuga and Hinata they are the perfect couple.
11 chapters and absolutely no plot progression. This is your usual first-timer-made fanfic who writes not for the sake of creating story, but for the sake of creating the ultimate main character author want to insert himself in--so much concentration was put into making his MC super powerfully invincible that there's not any room left for any plot. By the time his MC grows up to the appropriate age to start going to the academy, you would definitely find a boring story about MC held back his power or he would one-hit kill anyone otherwise. Soon, you would find the story dropped, because author who finally finished creating his ultimate MC no longer has motivation to tell a story (I mean, he only write this to make his ultimate MC, no?) It comes as a surprise that there's barely any bad reviews for this below average fanfic, and oddly many positive reviews are just those exp farmers and some shady level 1 accounts.
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Great so far. I love the system genre and Neji is by far my favorite character please don't drop this.❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
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The development is slow, but it isn't bad, the MC isn't all powerful, but he isn't weak either, and he isn't stupid (in my opinion). I like how the story has developed so far, and recommend you read it.
People say it’s bad but it’s actually really good. I like how the character is developing at a more realistic pace than a lot of others which try to make them super over powered immediately. It does start off a little slow at first but it gets better. Not to mention, it’s good to not rush the story really fast.
What a dull and boring **** **** novel. Just some stupid first time author writing a fan fic for the first time and just throwing random **** in. I am 1000% sure this novel will be dropped soon as this story has no ending. And what is with that dream chapter. Utter **** novel.
FKING BORING. Hate these kind of self insert MC where they are so overpowered from the start. Bs plot. WTF TENSEIGAN. Useless. Training training training so fking boring. Train for **** since you already give him a system. Hate fanfics with systems. Like wtf must every mc have a system. Admit, there are some which are good but this is FKING BORING. LEGIT FKING BORING. AND the last chapter, FKING AUTHOR DOSENT EVEN KNOW HOW TO DESCRIBE A FIGHT SCENE. GO FKING LEARN HOW TO WRITE A FIGHT SCENE IF U WANT TO WRITE A NARUTO FAN FIC.
Meh quite a boring novel. Nothing really interesting so far. You ruined a good character. Meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh
Please do not ship Hinata with Neji.Please do not ship Hinata withPlease do not ship Hinata with Neji. Neji.Please do not ship Hinata with Neji.Please do not ship Hinata with Neji.Please do not ship Hinata withPlease do not ship Hinata with Neji. Neji.Please do not ship Hinata with Neji.
This could have been a great novel...............................................................................................................
Volume 1
- 1 Reborn 5 years ago
- 2 System 5 years ago
- 3 A genius child (part 1) 5 years ago
- 4 A genius child (part 2) 5 years ago
- 5 Father and son 5 years ago
- 6 Poll: Neji's love interest 5 years ago
- 7 Growing up and training (part 1) 5 years ago
- 8 Growing up and training (part 2) 5 years ago
- 9 Growing up and training (part 3) 5 years ago
- 10 Hinata’s third birthday 5 years ago
- 11 Fate can be changed (part 1) 5 years ago
- 12 Fate can be changed (part 2) 5 years ago
- 13 Training before the academy 5 years ago
My review got deleted, but I will say it again. This novel is absolutly not worth reading. Normally this should be enough, concidering that the author has no problems with 5/5 reviews saying absolutly nothing. But it seems that the author got insecurities on a whole new level! Let me go through it fast: Quality - 3/5 Simply lacking english expertise, but still readable. Upload- 3/5 About once per day.Only uploaded 9 Chapters as of today. Story 1/5 Generic story you can find thousand of these alone on qidian, nothing unique. Character 1/5 Simply lacking, it's generic like the story, enough said. World 1/5 Naruro World, saw it a thousand times.