Reviews of The Demon of Ohara (One Piece Fan-Fic) by HasaDigaEebowai - Webnovel

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Starry_Sky_0213

man this would be good if this wasn't a massive nerf for the mc and also the author forcing plot to happen because he can't stand an mc that's actually powerful so he has to either nerf everyone or just the mc and he chose the mc big dumb that was so ima drop this here. no one can convince me a cultivator would be this freaking weak at this point in time.

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Daoist872594

J'adore mise à jour s'il vous plaît😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

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Trolley_I

please stop making fanfic theb drop them 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😭😭😭..............................................................................................

4yr
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Trolley_I

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Nigga_Lzz

One of my favorite one piece FanFictions I just really wish it didn't get drop the type of MC I like OP smart no hero complex nor evil I hate how you have to type 140 characters

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SheenaPurpleLove

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4yr
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lyndhien

Gustong gusto qo si nico Robin.kaya babasahin qo 2.😘😘😘🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😏😏😏😏😏😘😘🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😘😘😘

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kobeblackmamba

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dev62490

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5yr
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yoohime

i just like nico robin so 5 stara i just like nico robin so 5 stara i just like nico robin so 5 stara i just like nico robin so 5 starai just like nico robin so 5 stara i just like nico robin so 5 stara i just like nico robin so 5 stara i just like nico robin so 5 stara

5yr
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Gamekilla2013

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RazyeL
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ZerefAstral

Hope this Yuri Make her more op Cause she's cultivator Hope this Yuri Make her more op Cause she's cultivator Hope this Yuri Make her more op Cause she's cultivator

5yr
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Starry_Sky_0213

man this would be good if this wasn't a massive nerf for the mc and also the author forcing plot to happen because he can't stand an mc that's actually powerful so he has to either nerf everyone or just the mc and he chose the mc big dumb that was so ima drop this here. no one can convince me a cultivator would be this freaking weak at this point in time.

1yr
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Daoist872594

J'adore mise à jour s'il vous plaît😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

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Trolley_I

please stop making fanfic theb drop them 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😭😭😭..............................................................................................

4yr
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Trolley_I

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Nigga_Lzz

One of my favorite one piece FanFictions I just really wish it didn't get drop the type of MC I like OP smart no hero complex nor evil I hate how you have to type 140 characters

4yr
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SheenaPurpleLove

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4yr
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lyndhien

Gustong gusto qo si nico Robin.kaya babasahin qo 2.😘😘😘🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😏😏😏😏😏😘😘🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😘😘😘

5yr
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kobeblackmamba

opopopoppopoppkkkkiikikikikikikiiuhuhhuuhhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuguguguuiggigiigogoggoogogogogfffoofottoottorroreddeedededdedeededesadaddaadadadaasasa

5yr
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dev62490

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5yr
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yoohime

i just like nico robin so 5 stara i just like nico robin so 5 stara i just like nico robin so 5 stara i just like nico robin so 5 starai just like nico robin so 5 stara i just like nico robin so 5 stara i just like nico robin so 5 stara i just like nico robin so 5 stara

5yr
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Gamekilla2013

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5yr
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RazyeL
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5yr
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ZerefAstral

Hope this Yuri Make her more op Cause she's cultivator Hope this Yuri Make her more op Cause she's cultivator Hope this Yuri Make her more op Cause she's cultivator

5yr
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