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Press START!
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Synopsis
After battling amidst a blazing hot match, the team that consists of 5 advanced mobile legends players faces an unexpected chaos. A malevolent entity that wishes to destroy humanity appeared from inside the game to the real world.
Sebastian, Andre, Becca, Emily, and Rocco were possessed by a soul filled with strong magic. They transformed from a human into a hero -- S.A.B.E.R. Squad.
Will they be able to perform their roles properly? Will they succeed in their difficult missions?
Read and find out what will happen to them and to the world.
(Cover photo is temporary... or final 'cause I'm too lazy.)
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So far, the story is going well. I assumed that you update daily, which means that this story will be loaded with chapters soon. I think, you could still improve your way of constructing sentences but anyways, we all have our own writing styles. I don't have any complains with your grammar, it seems alright. The plot is interesting enough for me, but there are certain parts of the story where it should be explained further. I'll just wait for more chapters and edit my review if there's something to point out. Good luck!
I really love the characters! They are really different from each other and they play their role in the story very well. I know that it's too early to review this story but I want to give my full support here. I can't wait for more chapters anymore! Joke I can wait, I know the feeling of writing stories, you need to think it through, imagine, revise and type a lot. Take some rest author!