Isekai Multiverse Review - Raylight25 - Webnovel

LV 4

Zaylent

is there a harem tag in this???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

LV 4

Door_kun

Menurut ku narasi nya kurang. Semua akhir dari dua tanda petik diakhiri dengan "kata [mc]." Jangan cmn "kata [mc]" aja yg dipake. Coba dengan "balas [mc]" Atau "Tegas nya" Deskripsi tentang perasaan dan ekspresi tokoh2 nya juga terlalu monotone, ini membuat pembaca kek mengimajinasikan mereka dengan muka datar dan telanjang saat mereka lagi dalam percakapan. Mungkin improvise sedikit dengan menambahkan detail2 kecil? Misalnya nih: "mendengar balasan nya [mc] sambil mengkerutkan kening" Semoga review ini membantu. ~sincerely, door-kun.

LV 3

DZeref887

Kasih kualitas terjemahan bintang 5, alasannya karena gua orang Indonesia jadi kalo baca gak ke google terus aktifin fitur penerjemah, kasian jing di rating 3 bintang sama orang luar

LV 4

FOX_ZRS

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LV 4

FOX_ZRS

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LV 4

FOX_ZRS

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LV 4

FOX_ZRS

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LV 1

Boku_No_Pico

saya ingin liat Harem ban muncul kembali dan menemukan tampar tinggal utama secepatnya kalo mau tenang dia buat negara di dunia lain menguasai benua jadi gk ada yang nganggu

LV 1

iimsptn

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LV 5

Delem

Luar biasa penulis yang terhormat saya tunggu kelanjutan ceritanya. 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏👍🙏🙏🙏🙏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 1

Adaiir13

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LV 4

BuntutKadal

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LV 4

BuntutKadal

mantap......,...............................................................................................................................

LV 4

Raylight25

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LV 4

Raylight25

😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😁😀😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😈😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😀😀😈😁😈😇😉😑😉😕😉😕😡😕😬😕😡😕😢😕😦😕😡😣😯😕😥😕😉😆😴😣😦😢😕😯😕😡😕😡😅😢😕😡😕

LV 4

KieraRz

🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

LV 4

LianThomp_15

🙏🏻👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👌🏿

LV 3

Oktia_Hardianti

🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

LV 3

Oktia_Hardianti

Seruuuuuùuuuuuuuuuu. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Bangeeeeeeeeeeeeeddddddddddddtttttttttt. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Certanya......... Aku suka . . . . . . 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

LV 4

Ryan_Sucahyo

(‘◉⌓◉’)(‘◉⌓◉’)(‘◉⌓◉’)(‘◉⌓◉’)(‘◉⌓◉’)(‘◉⌓◉’)(‘◉⌓◉’)(‘◉⌓◉’)(‘◉⌓◉’)(‘◉⌓◉’)(‘◉⌓◉’)(‘◉⌓◉’)(‘◉⌓◉’)＼(◎o◎)／＼(◎o◎)／＼(◎o◎)／＼(◎o◎)／＼(◎o◎)／＼(◎o◎)／＼(◎o◎)／ヽ༼⁰o⁰；༽ノヽ༼⁰o⁰；༽ノヽ༼⁰o⁰；༽ノヽ༼⁰o⁰；༽ノヽ༼⁰o⁰；༽ノヽ༼⁰o⁰；༽ノヽ༼⁰o⁰；༽ノヽ༼⁰o⁰；༽ノლ(^o^ლ)ლ(^o^ლ)ლ(^o^ლ)ლ(^o^ლ)ლ(^o^ლ)ლ(^o^ლ)ლ(^o^ლ)ლ(^o^ლ)ლ(^o^ლ)(●__●)(●__●)(●__●)(●__●)(●__●)(●__●)(●__●)(●__●)(●__●)(●__●)(●__●)(●__●)(●__●)(●__●)

LV 5

nugh

Bingung aja.. mungkin ada yang paham.. 😁😁😁😁😁🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔☺☺☺☺🤔🤔🤔🤔☺☺Bingung aja.. mungkin ada yang paham.. 😁😁😁😁😁🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔☺☺☺☺🤔🤔🤔🤔☺☺Bingung aja.. mungkin ada yang paham.. 😁😁😁😁😁🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔☺☺☺☺🤔🤔🤔🤔☺☺Bingung aja.. mungkin ada yang paham.. 😁😁😁😁😁🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔☺☺☺☺🤔🤔🤔🤔☺☺

LV 4

Amir_4740

√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√√!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!* ***********""""""""""""""""""":::::::::::::::::::: ••••••••••••••••••••••••√

LV 5

Sonra

(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/(/^▽^)/