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From the looks of it I'm sure Mc is gay but he doesn't know it yet.. And the system is just helping him so system gave him a quest find 6 boy friends. Right now he and his trap best friend is always together even in audition . Every time they are together .. This is gayshit😂😂😂
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Great, would love to see alot more updates. Love the characters, they give more warmth and life to the story. Please don't give up, this story is looking good to me.
So far so good author! I think this book is great the grammar isn’t bad it’s actually pretty decent. The story isn’t too fast-paced nor too slow-paced. The characters personality have stayed around the same so far. I do believe that the author can build the world a tad bit more but keep your own pace! I hope this isn’t dropping anytime soon.
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It a very good story! 😍 Pls update more👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
From the looks of it I'm sure Mc is gay but he doesn't know it yet.. And the system is just helping him so system gave him a quest find 6 boy friends. Right now he and his trap best friend is always together even in audition . Every time they are together .. This is gayshit😂😂😂
Spoiler de révélation Great, would love to see alot more updates. Love the characters, they give more warmth and life to the story. Please don't give up, this story is looking good to me.
So far so good author! I think this book is great the grammar isn’t bad it’s actually pretty decent. The story isn’t too fast-paced nor too slow-paced. The characters personality have stayed around the same so far. I do believe that the author can build the world a tad bit more but keep your own pace! I hope this isn’t dropping anytime soon.
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing