18Critiques
4.04
- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
Partagez vos pensées avec les autres
Écrire un avis
I approve of how this person builds up the story instead of jumping right in. Other writers would just start the story right off the bat. But the way she builds up the story and how clear her writing is, makes me want to read more.
Great book! I love how romantic the stories are. Makes me feel like I’m really dating them! Truly a well written book! I hope to find another book just as good as this one! ^///^
I really liked all the stories and since I am a sucker for romance i found jobs story super cute, the development of each character was excellent, and I could imagine all the behaviors really happening in real life, I hope to see you update soon
Spoiler de révélation
I love this so much as a army I've been reading alot of bts stories and none of them where as good as this one. I can really tell you took your time on this. Keep writing these 👍👌❤
💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡❤️🧡❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
😂😂😂😂😂 Loving this story.. OOOooO***w Omoomo. So good.. 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖
Good story. Nice plot. Love the characters. Keep up the good work. And keep making new stories. Awesome job. Excited to more of your works. Fighting!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
🌹✌💕❤😘💖🔥😍💕❤💕😊✌😍🌹❤💖🔥💖😘💕😊✌😍🌹❤🌹💖😘😊💕😍🔥❤🔥💖😘😍💕😍✌❤🌹💖🌹😊😘😍🔥❤😘💖💕😊✌😍✌❤🌹💖🔥😊😘😊💕😍🌹❤🌹😅🔥💖😘💕😊🌹😍❤🌹❤❤😘❤🔥💖😘😍🌹😍😍🌹💖
💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗
😊💕🔥🌹😘✌💖💕😍🌹😘🌹😘💖❤😍❤🔥✌😘✌💖💕🔥🌹😘❤💖❤😍😊💖💕😘✌🔥💕😍🌹😍❤💖😘😊💖✌🔥💕🔥🌹😘😊💖❤💖❤😘✌😘💕🔥🌹💖❤😘❤😍💕🔥😘✌😍💕🔥💕😘😍🌹🔥😘😘🌹😍🌹😘😊💖😊😍🌹
♥️💙💜💙♥️🖤♥️💙💜💙🖤♥️💙💜💙💜🖤♥️💙💜🖤♥️💜💙♥️🖤♥️🖤🖤♥️💙💜💙♥️🖤♥️💙💜💜💙💜💙🖤♥️💜💙🖤♥️♥️💙♥️💙♥️💙💙♥️💙♥️💙♥️💙♥️💙♥️🖤♥️💙♥️🖤♥️♥️💙💙♥️💙♥️💙💜💙💜
It's amazingly written well.. You don't get bored of the scenarios.. Secondly it's too cute.. I specially loved each of them for their uniqueness.. It surely made me think of becoming a complete OT7 Stan which I had been contemplating for past 1 year..😋
💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😔😪😔😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜👍👍👍👍
♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡
this is really cute but i wish it wasn't just short stories one for each bts member. id like them to have more short stories of different events and maybe ones where it isn't just one but two or more bts members that would be even cuter but good job so far, good luck!
Great book!!! I love every single story in this one! I hope if the author will get some spare time then she/he will come up with a new story. Wishing lots of success to the author 💜👍🏻👍🏻
I approve of how this person builds up the story instead of jumping right in. Other writers would just start the story right off the bat. But the way she builds up the story and how clear her writing is, makes me want to read more.
Great book! I love how romantic the stories are. Makes me feel like I’m really dating them! Truly a well written book! I hope to find another book just as good as this one! ^///^
I really liked all the stories and since I am a sucker for romance i found jobs story super cute, the development of each character was excellent, and I could imagine all the behaviors really happening in real life, I hope to see you update soon
Spoiler de révélation I love this so much as a army I've been reading alot of bts stories and none of them where as good as this one. I can really tell you took your time on this. Keep writing these 👍👌❤
💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡❤️🧡❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
😂😂😂😂😂 Loving this story.. OOOooO***w Omoomo. So good.. 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖
Good story. Nice plot. Love the characters. Keep up the good work. And keep making new stories. Awesome job. Excited to more of your works. Fighting!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
🌹✌💕❤😘💖🔥😍💕❤💕😊✌😍🌹❤💖🔥💖😘💕😊✌😍🌹❤🌹💖😘😊💕😍🔥❤🔥💖😘😍💕😍✌❤🌹💖🌹😊😘😍🔥❤😘💖💕😊✌😍✌❤🌹💖🔥😊😘😊💕😍🌹❤🌹😅🔥💖😘💕😊🌹😍❤🌹❤❤😘❤🔥💖😘😍🌹😍😍🌹💖
💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗
😊💕🔥🌹😘✌💖💕😍🌹😘🌹😘💖❤😍❤🔥✌😘✌💖💕🔥🌹😘❤💖❤😍😊💖💕😘✌🔥💕😍🌹😍❤💖😘😊💖✌🔥💕🔥🌹😘😊💖❤💖❤😘✌😘💕🔥🌹💖❤😘❤😍💕🔥😘✌😍💕🔥💕😘😍🌹🔥😘😘🌹😍🌹😘😊💖😊😍🌹
♥️💙💜💙♥️🖤♥️💙💜💙🖤♥️💙💜💙💜🖤♥️💙💜🖤♥️💜💙♥️🖤♥️🖤🖤♥️💙💜💙♥️🖤♥️💙💜💜💙💜💙🖤♥️💜💙🖤♥️♥️💙♥️💙♥️💙💙♥️💙♥️💙♥️💙♥️💙♥️🖤♥️💙♥️🖤♥️♥️💙💙♥️💙♥️💙💜💙💜
It's amazingly written well.. You don't get bored of the scenarios.. Secondly it's too cute.. I specially loved each of them for their uniqueness.. It surely made me think of becoming a complete OT7 Stan which I had been contemplating for past 1 year..😋
💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😔😪😔😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜👍👍👍👍
♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡
this is really cute but i wish it wasn't just short stories one for each bts member. id like them to have more short stories of different events and maybe ones where it isn't just one but two or more bts members that would be even cuter but good job so far, good luck!
Great book!!! I love every single story in this one! I hope if the author will get some spare time then she/he will come up with a new story. Wishing lots of success to the author 💜👍🏻👍🏻