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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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The background of the story is nice. Character settings are good as well. Naming sense is kinda good. It feels interesting and fresh. Hope it sticks to original world setting and not turn into a fanfic. Fanfic are nice but I don't get hooked on it much and will just drop it after a few chapters. If this novel keeps going at it's track according to the chapters published, it MIGHT get more attention in the future. Who knows. But I'm sure I'll keep reading if it continues like this. :)
The story is good. I suggest you stick on your main plotlines tho. Fanfic base is good because you will not gonna problem in names and sometimes you can stick on main plot of chosen anime but, "BUT have fate in yourself and make it original you can do it. Hahaha. Just saying.
The background of the story is nice. Character settings are good as well. Naming sense is kinda good. It feels interesting and fresh. Hope it sticks to original world setting and not turn into a fanfic. Fanfic are nice but I don't get hooked on it much and will just drop it after a few chapters. If this novel keeps going at it's track according to the chapters published, it MIGHT get more attention in the future. Who knows. But I'm sure I'll keep reading if it continues like this. :)
The story is good. I suggest you stick on your main plotlines tho. Fanfic base is good because you will not gonna problem in names and sometimes you can stick on main plot of chosen anime but, "BUT have fate in yourself and make it original you can do it. Hahaha. Just saying.
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