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It's a mixed bag, the whole thing is mediocre at best but if you have **** taste like me it's for you but the open ending ****ed it up a bit and I also think it was right to end it there at the same time.
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... Just no Seriously? I actually thought you'd be able to write a story but no It just hurts to try and read this 1 errors in sentances 2 vaugeeverything 3 stupid people 4 no
don't read will waste your time, reason volume 2 don't read will waste your time, reason volume 2 don't read will waste your time, reason volume 2 don't read will waste your time, reason volume 2 don't read will waste your time, reason volume 2 don't read will waste your time, reason volume 2 don't read will waste your time, reason volume 2 don't read will waste your time, reason volume 2 don't read will waste your time, reason volume 2 don't read will waste your time, reason volume 2 don't read will waste your time, reason volume 2
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The main character is an absolute cuck he says that killing the victims is all he could do and is too stuck up on his sister to do something useful he absolutely pathetic
Spoiler de révélation It's a mixed bag, the whole thing is mediocre at best but if you have **** taste like me it's for you but the open ending ****ed it up a bit and I also think it was right to end it there at the same time.
Spoiler de révélation ... Just no Seriously? I actually thought you'd be able to write a story but no It just hurts to try and read this 1 errors in sentances 2 vaugeeverything 3 stupid people 4 no
don't read will waste your time, reason volume 2 don't read will waste your time, reason volume 2 don't read will waste your time, reason volume 2 don't read will waste your time, reason volume 2 don't read will waste your time, reason volume 2 don't read will waste your time, reason volume 2 don't read will waste your time, reason volume 2 don't read will waste your time, reason volume 2 don't read will waste your time, reason volume 2 don't read will waste your time, reason volume 2 don't read will waste your time, reason volume 2
perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect.
The main character is an absolute cuck he says that killing the victims is all he could do and is too stuck up on his sister to do something useful he absolutely pathetic
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