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S*** shoot s*** s*** s*** s*** s*** s*** s*** s*** s*** s*** s*** s*** f*** this s*** s*** s*** s*** s*** s*** s*** s*** s*** s*** s*** crap of an novel with no Plot at all
Very ****ty story even ****tier writing Sect --> cult Cultivator ----> farmer ........... ............................. ......................................................... ......................................................... . ....
Good story. Nice plot. Love the characters. Keep up the good work. And keep making new stories. Awesome job. Excited to more of your works. Fighting!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Just reading the first three chapters will make you spit. My advice save yourself some pain and close this tab. I made a mistake reading this fic, apparently the author has been told repeatedly of his/her mistake, but he/she still continues to make them and doesn't improve on it.
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Great novel. I loved it. Please do not drop it. Focus on this novel please......................................................................... ...... ......................................................................... .........................................................................
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More pls more pls Dont drop it and pls focus on one novel Also beware of using his and her, more pls more pls!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Grammar is some of the worst Ive ever seen, along with the mc literally being retarded. The chapters are only 5 pages long, so don't bother reading.
That geat fan fic continus................................................................................................................................................
Spoiler de révélationApart from a few mistakes here and there, the story takes a good road. For me it makes it acro..............................................................................................
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I shamelessly write my own novel, but normally.................................................................................................................
Spoiler de révélationi didnt even understand a thing ................................................................................................................................................................
S*** shoot s*** s*** s*** s*** s*** s*** s*** s*** s*** s*** s*** s*** f*** this s*** s*** s*** s*** s*** s*** s*** s*** s*** s*** s*** crap of an novel with no Plot at all
Very ****ty story even ****tier writing Sect --> cult Cultivator ----> farmer ........... ............................. ......................................................... ......................................................... . ....
Good story. Nice plot. Love the characters. Keep up the good work. And keep making new stories. Awesome job. Excited to more of your works. Fighting!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Just reading the first three chapters will make you spit. My advice save yourself some pain and close this tab. I made a mistake reading this fic, apparently the author has been told repeatedly of his/her mistake, but he/she still continues to make them and doesn't improve on it.
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Great novel. I loved it. Please do not drop it. Focus on this novel please......................................................................... ...... ......................................................................... .........................................................................
Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem!
More pls more pls Dont drop it and pls focus on one novel Also beware of using his and her, more pls more pls!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Grammar is some of the worst Ive ever seen, along with the mc literally being retarded. The chapters are only 5 pages long, so don't bother reading.
That geat fan fic continus................................................................................................................................................
Spoiler de révélationApart from a few mistakes here and there, the story takes a good road. For me it makes it acro..............................................................................................
Spoiler de révélationMore More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More vv
miximum deep veins, deep kingdoms, proffont realms, basic seeds, kingdom massaging, immortal culture techniques... miximum deep veins, deep kingdoms, proffont realms, basic seeds, kingdom massaging, immortal culture techniques... miximum deep veins, deep kingdoms, proffont realms, basic seeds, kingdom massaging, immortal culture techniques...
I shamelessly write my own novel, but normally.................................................................................................................
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