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please make more of this i want more its sooo freaking funnn!!...............................................................................
Author just wanted to say make another novel similar like this but different i want the main character start at a low level and do a different kinds of things that the main character stronger because its not enjoyable when the main character is already this strong. PLEASE READ THIS AUTHOR!
hi author can you please start to wrote this novel again. I like it very much bcoz it is an interesting novel. first please improve a little bit of grammar . I hope to tread this novel again some day after you update it.
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So.. at first it was ok-ish, however later it became complete carbage… Ok, i get it you want to get your old wife back, but did you really have to create quests for yourself, that can completely cripple you ? Secondly, i get that this is chinese novel, but for the love of everything, could you atleast check before posting. Then come the world-travelling aspect, so far he has gone to 3 worlds, out of which 1 was interesting, others were complete bs
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Great story to bad you dropped it hope you come back to it one day until then I hope you enjoy life to the fullest🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
Hands down what I think is possibly the worst thing because yes it's a thing ever created. What were you thinking when you wrote this book, "Oh it's going to be the best book ever and everyone is going to love it." Well I'm sorry we can't support your 8 year old fantasies. Maybe you should just stop writing no one and I mean no one would miss you. In fact you should delete your account because your just that bad you are a plague on webnovels greatness like many others. So I would appreciate it if you just read this and deleted webnovel right after **** just find a way to ban your self after dropping this story. Matter o fact you can not just drop it but you yourself write a chapter how bad you think this story is how you are ashamed of yourself for writing this and that you are dropping it. How you wrote a stupid dumb OP mc that has the worst personality ever and on top of that terrible grammar again I'm going to say this one more time drop the story the find a way to ban yourself.
Grammar is bad Too many sentences in a paragraph Story is too boring and there is no plot Conversation between characters is too bland In short, this is a generic story made by an ******* like others in qidian. I suggest the author to read other novels first and learn from it before writing one himself.
So he's told he can turn a planet to dust with 0.0000000001 of his power... so he gets 4 of the strongest bloodlines and every skill possible... I think saitama is a little behind this guy. What does he plan to do with so much strenth that he could probably destroy the universe with one punch?
This novel is really good, I hope that you would upload more often the novels and keep what you are doing, because you are doing great and I hope for the best in your new novel.
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Bad...Haaaa I shouldn't have raised my expectation I should realize it bad so badddddd Why is it so bad don't know don't wanna explain it just bad and boring I mean really boring...So boring
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Just this. I hate MC personality. I hate MC personality. I hate MC personality. I dislike the Plot because theres basically nothing. Just bunch of worlds where he can give the original MC powers and then leave just that
Hey Author, this novel is broken drop it... Mc is tooooooooo OP... And making other Characters in different world OP too.... Try writing another novel.... This novel is cheat.... I'm not saying your novel is bad but in my opinion.... MC is over OP and over HANDSOME.... I hope you try to create other interesting novels....
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Nice story!!!!! Waiting for the update. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Mc saves a bunch of kids somehow gets karma above a gos becomes the one and only op says he misses his wife after 2 secs forgets his wife his system says make harem he says naw only need one wife then author says he will make a harem from 7 to 14 women Mcs body is a classic fuc boy body that men and woman want to r@pe Mcs personality is insane beta fuc boy Mcs thought process... limited So if you want another run of the mill novel about a op fuc boy treating woman badly and abuseing his power This is the novel you want If you want a story with plot and depth... not the novel for you 0/5 stars
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Decepción total Cuando comencé a leer me pareció una idea interesante pero el desarrollo lo arruinó por completo El ritmo es demasiado acelerado, las minihistorias demasiado simples el MC es aburrido y no hace nada interesante
Please upload more often ,,. And make harem of boa Hancock ,erza,Lisa ,ATG harem ,erina nakiri,and Alice nakiri ,rindo kobayshi ,and rias gremory ,akeno ,grafyia lucifuge , velena NTR,great red ,ophis ***** form,
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The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. every story plot in all the chapter is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you and don’t drop or reboot it because I like read your novel. Even though I spent a stone spirit I still hope you carry on your novel.
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please make more of this i want more its sooo freaking funnn!!...............................................................................
Author just wanted to say make another novel similar like this but different i want the main character start at a low level and do a different kinds of things that the main character stronger because its not enjoyable when the main character is already this strong. PLEASE READ THIS AUTHOR!
hi author can you please start to wrote this novel again. I like it very much bcoz it is an interesting novel. first please improve a little bit of grammar . I hope to tread this novel again some day after you update it.
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So.. at first it was ok-ish, however later it became complete carbage… Ok, i get it you want to get your old wife back, but did you really have to create quests for yourself, that can completely cripple you ? Secondly, i get that this is chinese novel, but for the love of everything, could you atleast check before posting. Then come the world-travelling aspect, so far he has gone to 3 worlds, out of which 1 was interesting, others were complete bs
Spoiler de révélation Great story to bad you dropped it hope you come back to it one day until then I hope you enjoy life to the fullest🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
Hands down what I think is possibly the worst thing because yes it's a thing ever created. What were you thinking when you wrote this book, "Oh it's going to be the best book ever and everyone is going to love it." Well I'm sorry we can't support your 8 year old fantasies. Maybe you should just stop writing no one and I mean no one would miss you. In fact you should delete your account because your just that bad you are a plague on webnovels greatness like many others. So I would appreciate it if you just read this and deleted webnovel right after **** just find a way to ban your self after dropping this story. Matter o fact you can not just drop it but you yourself write a chapter how bad you think this story is how you are ashamed of yourself for writing this and that you are dropping it. How you wrote a stupid dumb OP mc that has the worst personality ever and on top of that terrible grammar again I'm going to say this one more time drop the story the find a way to ban yourself.
Grammar is bad Too many sentences in a paragraph Story is too boring and there is no plot Conversation between characters is too bland In short, this is a generic story made by an ******* like others in qidian. I suggest the author to read other novels first and learn from it before writing one himself.
So he's told he can turn a planet to dust with 0.0000000001 of his power... so he gets 4 of the strongest bloodlines and every skill possible... I think saitama is a little behind this guy. What does he plan to do with so much strenth that he could probably destroy the universe with one punch?
This novel is really good, I hope that you would upload more often the novels and keep what you are doing, because you are doing great and I hope for the best in your new novel.
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Bad...Haaaa I shouldn't have raised my expectation I should realize it bad so badddddd Why is it so bad don't know don't wanna explain it just bad and boring I mean really boring...So boring
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Just this. I hate MC personality. I hate MC personality. I hate MC personality. I dislike the Plot because theres basically nothing. Just bunch of worlds where he can give the original MC powers and then leave just that
Hey Author, this novel is broken drop it... Mc is tooooooooo OP... And making other Characters in different world OP too.... Try writing another novel.... This novel is cheat.... I'm not saying your novel is bad but in my opinion.... MC is over OP and over HANDSOME.... I hope you try to create other interesting novels....
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Nice story!!!!! Waiting for the update. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Mc saves a bunch of kids somehow gets karma above a gos becomes the one and only op says he misses his wife after 2 secs forgets his wife his system says make harem he says naw only need one wife then author says he will make a harem from 7 to 14 women Mcs body is a classic fuc boy body that men and woman want to r@pe Mcs personality is insane beta fuc boy Mcs thought process... limited So if you want another run of the mill novel about a op fuc boy treating woman badly and abuseing his power This is the novel you want If you want a story with plot and depth... not the novel for you 0/5 stars
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Decepción total Cuando comencé a leer me pareció una idea interesante pero el desarrollo lo arruinó por completo El ritmo es demasiado acelerado, las minihistorias demasiado simples el MC es aburrido y no hace nada interesante
Please upload more often ,,. And make harem of boa Hancock ,erza,Lisa ,ATG harem ,erina nakiri,and Alice nakiri ,rindo kobayshi ,and rias gremory ,akeno ,grafyia lucifuge , velena NTR,great red ,ophis ***** form,
Pls more pls more more moaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar moooooaaaaaaaaaar plssssssssssssssssssss Sex is fun you must have it **** this ****. I know **** bitches and sluts everywhere
The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. every story plot in all the chapter is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you and don’t drop or reboot it because I like read your novel. Even though I spent a stone spirit I still hope you carry on your novel.
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