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brain cells go brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. ..........................................................................
Matt read this book “This Lightning Gobzan is super confusing” she said. Mat scratched his Lightning Gobzan as Math tried to figure out what was happening. He decided to post her review. If that made any sense to you then You’ll love this book. 9/10 plot 10/10 Lightning Gobzan 2/10 Writing (could be a translation issue) But it’s free so give it a shot
the story is good and the translation ,but when you reached chapter 150 , the translation got worse.the story is good and the translation ,but when you reached chapter 150 , the translation got worse.
After reading 50+ chapters now I know why this novel not in open...sigh! Main character's characteristics are so confusing. 1st it was implied that he is gloomy and an addict and a backbencher next chap and we see him merry go with little band to dungeon. he has no spine just envy this and envy that...
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REVIEW AND COMPARISON: This is an amazing story. I thought that this would be like "let me the game in peace"(LMTGIP), but this is much better. Although both stories are like where aliens are trying to invade the blue planet due to some reasons, LMTGIP is monotonous and the story gradually loses out its charm. But in this book, readers can enjoy action, cultivation and thrill and the story is very fluent, interesting. Every chapter is well connected and enchants me to continue reading further. The character of MC in LMTGIP is kinda dull and always playing games. He is kinda clueless too. But here, although MC still plays games, he is not clueless and dull. He has a good number of friends which makes the story better. In LMTGIP, the world setting is bad. The world still doesn't know new pets and how to gain more power. They don't have a properly developed system which is a major drawback later. In this story, the world setting is mature even though there may be some problems in the class system later. Overall, the start of LMTGIP is thrilling but gradually it starts to be boring as the plotline becomes repetitive, but this story is thrilling from start till 300+ chapters now, which is the present chapter. I hope the author will keep this flow. I just can't stop reading it. Well done author. Very good story. Keep it up! Need more updates!! I just wonder why this good story is not contracted! What is WN doing? 🤔
Writing Quality - 3/5 due to some grammatical that I for the life of me cant understand sometimes. Although sometimes using context clues help. Story - 2-3/5 due to the story having good potential but riddled with forgotten characters along with constant input of sudden "mystery vibe" yet no answers are provided after so many chapters not even clues. MC - 2/5 - I would've given this a 4 if not for the fact that the MC letting his enemy go despite having his enemy hate him so much. You can even add the fact that his enemies were very manipulative most of the time but he lets them live. This was especially true during almost 3/4 of the novel. I would've understood that move had the author covered the reason for him letting them go like for example he was badly wounded or he needed to rush somewhere or something and not just because of his so called "Im in a good mood". World Background 3/5 - description was not that bad but it was not that good either. You can hardly imagine the setting and worse of all it lacks the part where the author should specify if the MC is in the game or in RL.
If you have read Let Me Game In Peace novel and Hail The King Novel ,this novel is basically a mix of those two concepts. MC can extract skills from the game his played and he also can change the characters class. What dissapoint me is that this only at the earlier part of the novel, later this game addict seems to forgot about it. And most importantly , I very sure this is a translated novel rather than original because the terms changes every chapter, the gender changes every chapter and few chapters are missing... Nevertheless it is a good story to pass time
it was a good novel but some chapters are missing so read on your risk 😜😜😜 expep exp expexpep exp expexpep exp expep exp exp expep exp exp
5 stars for this amazing novel keep up the good work 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😎👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🎊🎊🎊😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😇
very good despite the problem of the mc not knowing what his position in society is due to the rapid growth but as this occurs naturally it can be ignored making the story good in my opinion
i only read the first chapter and i found it is increasingly similar to let me game in peace .so Adios. .. . .. .. .. .. .. .. ., .. .. .. ..
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I enjoy the story so far however im going to pick at some things that need some brushing up on. The quality of writing drops after chapter 70 and is comparable to machine translation. I feel the that author need to take some time to proof read his chapters before he reads them. As another comment stated the chapter order is mixed up around chapter 80 to 85. (my personal opinion) I find it a bit stupid that the MC refuse to get healing skills and keeps getting buff skills that only give a 3% buff. He is essentially a glass cannon. The only reason he hasn't died is because the author has cleverly written everything in his favor i.e. deus ex machina.
After chapter 100 it goes downhill translation wise, it's like reading a machine translation also around chap 82 it seems the translator skipped a chapter or 2. Slightly different system aspect but carbord characters everywhere.
What is going on around chapter 80 fair trade - Mechanical City - Sign Up to Hex Science and Technology It seems like chapters are missing
5 from me amazing story I have read it all its better than those racist Chinese novels and most of the novels from this site ur amazing just amazing a
amazing story 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🔥🔥🔥🔥👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌 more more more more more more more more more more more more more if there is raw it's better 😉😉
so someone could be a tank huh 🤔 I literally spent the last 10 minutes looking for an ork I'm a tank meme only to find disappointment and sadness
Amazing story by author, looking for more updates, more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Its my first novel, please be supportive and i will make sure to give constant updates regularly to all my supporters. Let me know what you think about my novel.
it is a very good novel to read ,though the translation keep getting bad but overall the story is good.
brain cells go brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. ..........................................................................
Matt read this book “This Lightning Gobzan is super confusing” she said. Mat scratched his Lightning Gobzan as Math tried to figure out what was happening. He decided to post her review. If that made any sense to you then You’ll love this book. 9/10 plot 10/10 Lightning Gobzan 2/10 Writing (could be a translation issue) But it’s free so give it a shot
the story is good and the translation ,but when you reached chapter 150 , the translation got worse.the story is good and the translation ,but when you reached chapter 150 , the translation got worse.
After reading 50+ chapters now I know why this novel not in open...sigh! Main character's characteristics are so confusing. 1st it was implied that he is gloomy and an addict and a backbencher next chap and we see him merry go with little band to dungeon. he has no spine just envy this and envy that...
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REVIEW AND COMPARISON: This is an amazing story. I thought that this would be like "let me the game in peace"(LMTGIP), but this is much better. Although both stories are like where aliens are trying to invade the blue planet due to some reasons, LMTGIP is monotonous and the story gradually loses out its charm. But in this book, readers can enjoy action, cultivation and thrill and the story is very fluent, interesting. Every chapter is well connected and enchants me to continue reading further. The character of MC in LMTGIP is kinda dull and always playing games. He is kinda clueless too. But here, although MC still plays games, he is not clueless and dull. He has a good number of friends which makes the story better. In LMTGIP, the world setting is bad. The world still doesn't know new pets and how to gain more power. They don't have a properly developed system which is a major drawback later. In this story, the world setting is mature even though there may be some problems in the class system later. Overall, the start of LMTGIP is thrilling but gradually it starts to be boring as the plotline becomes repetitive, but this story is thrilling from start till 300+ chapters now, which is the present chapter. I hope the author will keep this flow. I just can't stop reading it. Well done author. Very good story. Keep it up! Need more updates!! I just wonder why this good story is not contracted! What is WN doing? 🤔
Writing Quality - 3/5 due to some grammatical that I for the life of me cant understand sometimes. Although sometimes using context clues help. Story - 2-3/5 due to the story having good potential but riddled with forgotten characters along with constant input of sudden "mystery vibe" yet no answers are provided after so many chapters not even clues. MC - 2/5 - I would've given this a 4 if not for the fact that the MC letting his enemy go despite having his enemy hate him so much. You can even add the fact that his enemies were very manipulative most of the time but he lets them live. This was especially true during almost 3/4 of the novel. I would've understood that move had the author covered the reason for him letting them go like for example he was badly wounded or he needed to rush somewhere or something and not just because of his so called "Im in a good mood". World Background 3/5 - description was not that bad but it was not that good either. You can hardly imagine the setting and worse of all it lacks the part where the author should specify if the MC is in the game or in RL.
If you have read Let Me Game In Peace novel and Hail The King Novel ,this novel is basically a mix of those two concepts. MC can extract skills from the game his played and he also can change the characters class. What dissapoint me is that this only at the earlier part of the novel, later this game addict seems to forgot about it. And most importantly , I very sure this is a translated novel rather than original because the terms changes every chapter, the gender changes every chapter and few chapters are missing... Nevertheless it is a good story to pass time
it was a good novel but some chapters are missing so read on your risk 😜😜😜 expep exp expexpep exp expexpep exp expep exp exp expep exp exp
5 stars for this amazing novel keep up the good work 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😎👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🎊🎊🎊😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😇
very good despite the problem of the mc not knowing what his position in society is due to the rapid growth but as this occurs naturally it can be ignored making the story good in my opinion
i only read the first chapter and i found it is increasingly similar to let me game in peace .so Adios. .. . .. .. .. .. .. .. ., .. .. .. ..
Spoiler de révélation I enjoy the story so far however im going to pick at some things that need some brushing up on. The quality of writing drops after chapter 70 and is comparable to machine translation. I feel the that author need to take some time to proof read his chapters before he reads them. As another comment stated the chapter order is mixed up around chapter 80 to 85. (my personal opinion) I find it a bit stupid that the MC refuse to get healing skills and keeps getting buff skills that only give a 3% buff. He is essentially a glass cannon. The only reason he hasn't died is because the author has cleverly written everything in his favor i.e. deus ex machina.
After chapter 100 it goes downhill translation wise, it's like reading a machine translation also around chap 82 it seems the translator skipped a chapter or 2. Slightly different system aspect but carbord characters everywhere.
What is going on around chapter 80 fair trade - Mechanical City - Sign Up to Hex Science and Technology It seems like chapters are missing
5 from me amazing story I have read it all its better than those racist Chinese novels and most of the novels from this site ur amazing just amazing a
amazing story 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🔥🔥🔥🔥👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌 more more more more more more more more more more more more more if there is raw it's better 😉😉
so someone could be a tank huh 🤔 I literally spent the last 10 minutes looking for an ork I'm a tank meme only to find disappointment and sadness
Amazing story by author, looking for more updates, more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Its my first novel, please be supportive and i will make sure to give constant updates regularly to all my supporters. Let me know what you think about my novel.
it is a very good novel to read ,though the translation keep getting bad but overall the story is good.