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[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] I love this. ,
An absolute work of art I just love the recreation of the entire group in an orderly and beautiful manner. I also like the fact you didn't change their behaviours and made it original
I just started reading but am amazed by your character development! I love how you stay true to their true personalities. I too am writing my own fiction story with the BTS members, and it is great to read someone else’s fictional story. Wonderful work!
I really like this so far (I'm 79 chapters in). I think what really makes it interesting is that it feels like its real life as the world that it is set in is extremely close the the real one. I also like how its not just centered around one plot but there are small things that occur within and there are 'sub plots' as you could call them. I definitely recommend this is you want something realistic with characters that exist in the real world. 😊👍👍👍
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I love and hope u continue with the story it is amazing of all the hurdles and stuff the characters go through to develop and i like how u make it where there is many point of views and telling the story from different characters
I was going to write a review for your book since I promised you on the forum. But I didn't thought it would be totally opposite of my reading style. But you know what I like BTS And anything else, you are too good for me to advice Keep up the goodwork
Yoooooooooooooooooo it's good story I think having 5 member will make it more fun and being "THE SECRET MEMBER " as a joker that will ad more meaning to it💎💜
Ahhh this is so good!!!!!!💜💜💖💖😁😁✨✨ Tbh im really excited for the rest of the book cause currently im in chapter 3 (i think) also i definitely think that is how hobi would react😂😂💜💜
so much emotions while reading this , OMG youre writing is so good . Please continue to write and font forget to take breaks when you write. looking forward to your future works <3
This is a really good book, I actually really loved it. I just hope that the author will keep on updating it because I saw that the last chapter the author updated was 2 months ago :"(
This is Good, I just got Webnovel and this was the first thing I’ve gotten into, it’s amazing really, the writing is good, the story lines are amazing it’s kind of addicting
Yeah I am not good at writing review so just read this.💜 The story develops well and there hasn’t been moments were I am bored reading this. I just want more
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Overall I love the concept of the story and like the way it is going so a far, the only problem I have is the updates, but it isn't really big at all, It's simply because I finish the new chapters to fast. Anyways I'm loving the story and cant seem to wait for these new chapters. Well anyways I'll be seeing you fellow readers and you too Author in the comments for every chapter! :D
The story's so great till now. And........ I ❤LOVE IT!!!!!. It has a great mixture of suspense, curiosity and agreement. I'll agree with the author with whatever she does but my review is To ship Iris with anyone member of BTS. She may face probs but she is well suited as she has potential and everybody loves her and treats her well.
It is a very nice book. It literally depicts the view of a trainee( real life) pursuing her/his dream of becoming an idol. I really recommend to read this book, as the author has greatly arranged the story, it not only tells about becoming an idol from a commoner but all so pursuing your dreams and knowing and trying for the work u remember doing. It is a really great book.
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Thank you author for the chapters...I keep getting more and more closer to knowing about K-pop world and BTS. I can't wait for the next upcoming chapters because I love reading your story.
Among the BTS fanfics I have read this is my fave. There's also realistic features and I love that :)) 🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈
Great story with good plot and character development. Iris rocks! The BTS members act like they’re them in real life! I like how TXT is included along with other kpop idols. Big Hit family is so sweet. Can’t wait to read more 💜
Truly a wonderful story! Love it! .................. . . . . . . Gosh what else to write. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . M . . M . . . . . . . . . .
This is a very nice story, very neatly executed, good grammar, well though out and regular update . Overall a very nice book . Would definitely continue reading it.
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Love it! Great story about BTS and kpop with an awesome female lead Iris! I like her cousins Cindy too and the other fictional characters which are all really good. Want to know who you will put in as idols 💜
I just realize I never gave a review to this story. Sorry about that author, I was too engrossed in the story and then I hadn't logged in for a few days. Please don't be discouraged by anything and continue this story. You are doing well! Thank you for your hard work. For BTS fans, kpop overs, those interested in Korean culture, or even those who like music industry entertainment stuff will enjoy reading this story. Iris is a great female lead with a good supporting cast. You don't need to know or be a fan of BTS to read this story. I actually would like more BTS in this haha! No romance yet, but I'm waiting to see what author comes up with.
This make me excited on the next chapter 😍... thank you for this chapter 😉... keep on making a new chapter 😊... fightinggg ✊💖... i'll wait for the next chapter 😉😉... 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖... kamsa~😊💖
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I have read an few chapters of this book and just like the previous book, this one also is detailed to the T. I love the way you have introduced the members. I didn't know earlier about BTS much. I googled and figured out it's such a big deal !!!! By the way will you make yourself a part of the story? Just a random thought in my head. Keep writing !!! More power to you.
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[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] I love this. ,
An absolute work of art I just love the recreation of the entire group in an orderly and beautiful manner. I also like the fact you didn't change their behaviours and made it original
I just started reading but am amazed by your character development! I love how you stay true to their true personalities. I too am writing my own fiction story with the BTS members, and it is great to read someone else’s fictional story. Wonderful work!
I really like this so far (I'm 79 chapters in). I think what really makes it interesting is that it feels like its real life as the world that it is set in is extremely close the the real one. I also like how its not just centered around one plot but there are small things that occur within and there are 'sub plots' as you could call them. I definitely recommend this is you want something realistic with characters that exist in the real world. 😊👍👍👍
Spoiler de révélation I love and hope u continue with the story it is amazing of all the hurdles and stuff the characters go through to develop and i like how u make it where there is many point of views and telling the story from different characters
I was going to write a review for your book since I promised you on the forum. But I didn't thought it would be totally opposite of my reading style. But you know what I like BTS And anything else, you are too good for me to advice Keep up the goodwork
Yoooooooooooooooooo it's good story I think having 5 member will make it more fun and being "THE SECRET MEMBER " as a joker that will ad more meaning to it💎💜
Ahhh this is so good!!!!!!💜💜💖💖😁😁✨✨ Tbh im really excited for the rest of the book cause currently im in chapter 3 (i think) also i definitely think that is how hobi would react😂😂💜💜
so much emotions while reading this , OMG youre writing is so good . Please continue to write and font forget to take breaks when you write. looking forward to your future works <3
This is a really good book, I actually really loved it. I just hope that the author will keep on updating it because I saw that the last chapter the author updated was 2 months ago :"(
This is Good, I just got Webnovel and this was the first thing I’ve gotten into, it’s amazing really, the writing is good, the story lines are amazing it’s kind of addicting
Yeah I am not good at writing review so just read this.💜 The story develops well and there hasn’t been moments were I am bored reading this. I just want more
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Overall I love the concept of the story and like the way it is going so a far, the only problem I have is the updates, but it isn't really big at all, It's simply because I finish the new chapters to fast. Anyways I'm loving the story and cant seem to wait for these new chapters. Well anyways I'll be seeing you fellow readers and you too Author in the comments for every chapter! :D
The story's so great till now. And........ I ❤LOVE IT!!!!!. It has a great mixture of suspense, curiosity and agreement. I'll agree with the author with whatever she does but my review is To ship Iris with anyone member of BTS. She may face probs but she is well suited as she has potential and everybody loves her and treats her well.
It is a very nice book. It literally depicts the view of a trainee( real life) pursuing her/his dream of becoming an idol. I really recommend to read this book, as the author has greatly arranged the story, it not only tells about becoming an idol from a commoner but all so pursuing your dreams and knowing and trying for the work u remember doing. It is a really great book.
Spoiler de révélation Thank you author for the chapters...I keep getting more and more closer to knowing about K-pop world and BTS. I can't wait for the next upcoming chapters because I love reading your story.
Among the BTS fanfics I have read this is my fave. There's also realistic features and I love that :)) 🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈
Great story with good plot and character development. Iris rocks! The BTS members act like they’re them in real life! I like how TXT is included along with other kpop idols. Big Hit family is so sweet. Can’t wait to read more 💜
Truly a wonderful story! Love it! .................. . . . . . . Gosh what else to write. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . M . . M . . . . . . . . . .
This is a very nice story, very neatly executed, good grammar, well though out and regular update . Overall a very nice book . Would definitely continue reading it.
Spoiler de révélation Love it! Great story about BTS and kpop with an awesome female lead Iris! I like her cousins Cindy too and the other fictional characters which are all really good. Want to know who you will put in as idols 💜
I just realize I never gave a review to this story. Sorry about that author, I was too engrossed in the story and then I hadn't logged in for a few days. Please don't be discouraged by anything and continue this story. You are doing well! Thank you for your hard work. For BTS fans, kpop overs, those interested in Korean culture, or even those who like music industry entertainment stuff will enjoy reading this story. Iris is a great female lead with a good supporting cast. You don't need to know or be a fan of BTS to read this story. I actually would like more BTS in this haha! No romance yet, but I'm waiting to see what author comes up with.
This make me excited on the next chapter 😍... thank you for this chapter 😉... keep on making a new chapter 😊... fightinggg ✊💖... i'll wait for the next chapter 😉😉... 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖... kamsa~😊💖
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I have read an few chapters of this book and just like the previous book, this one also is detailed to the T. I love the way you have introduced the members. I didn't know earlier about BTS much. I googled and figured out it's such a big deal !!!! By the way will you make yourself a part of the story? Just a random thought in my head. Keep writing !!! More power to you.
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