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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
The book is very good but the time in between updates are very long. I love this book but you gotta get to updating the chapters cause i like reading this book
omg finaly some shp ......................................................................;...........................................................................................................
Where is another chapter? Drop??...............?........................................................................................................................…..…........….…………..
Story just all over the place, i cant even understand wtf is happening. Stop after MC beat demon On yin tournament …......................................................
mC sangat idiot super. Sikap yang kekanak - kanakan Berkata kalau novel favoritnya adalah wuxia atau xianxia, tetapi dia sendiri hampir tidak tahu semua yang berhubungan dengan wuxia. Dan seiring berjalannya chapter, mc semakin bertambah idiot dan selalu terkejut, terkejut. Astaga !! Kalau authornya ada di samping gue, gue bakalan getokin tu kepala Author, sudah membuat Mc super idiot.
Spoiler de révélation
I didn't read it yet. But this novel's chapters are released really fast. Thank you for the content to read. Hope novel is fast paced( please don't be slow paced).
Please leave a review so I can enhance my grammar and also how to write more story. Also please guide me in writing some of the novels and also, I hope I can request someone who can make a picture of my novel? It will really be a great help. Please enjoy reading my first time novel. Thanks again guys!
I didn't read yet, but just from the synopsis and the 'system' - 'fast cultivation' - 'Another World'. You got my full attention... Those damn 140 characters :s
Argh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It really hurts that I can't release so many chapters! Sigh.................. I hope that someone can still read my 1st time novel. I need to try my best after all.
I really enjoy how this is turning out I read every new chapter when i can as most of the time I'm at work so I cant read the chapter immediately I recommend this book.
Tbh i like the novel a lot. op mc ,new bloodline awesome background story with many reveals as the story progresses...funny stuff and awesome battles ..moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Is there someone here who knows someone who can I request a pic for my novel? Please message me and I want to know someone who can make a pic for my novel. Thank you all so much!!!
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Very good, more......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Hi guys! Author here! I will release the chapters until it reach 70. I already created 71 because I cannot rewrite it because of financial problems. I'm will try my best update it more faster than before so all of you can enjoy reading. Support me at https://***.patreon.com/PeerlessProminence Thanks again!
the story is good but it seems to have been dropped. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
The book is very good but the time in between updates are very long. I love this book but you gotta get to updating the chapters cause i like reading this book
omg finaly some shp ......................................................................;...........................................................................................................
Where is another chapter? Drop??...............?........................................................................................................................…..…........….…………..
Story just all over the place, i cant even understand wtf is happening. Stop after MC beat demon On yin tournament …......................................................
mC sangat idiot super. Sikap yang kekanak - kanakan Berkata kalau novel favoritnya adalah wuxia atau xianxia, tetapi dia sendiri hampir tidak tahu semua yang berhubungan dengan wuxia. Dan seiring berjalannya chapter, mc semakin bertambah idiot dan selalu terkejut, terkejut. Astaga !! Kalau authornya ada di samping gue, gue bakalan getokin tu kepala Author, sudah membuat Mc super idiot.
Spoiler de révélation I didn't read it yet. But this novel's chapters are released really fast. Thank you for the content to read. Hope novel is fast paced( please don't be slow paced).
Please leave a review so I can enhance my grammar and also how to write more story. Also please guide me in writing some of the novels and also, I hope I can request someone who can make a picture of my novel? It will really be a great help. Please enjoy reading my first time novel. Thanks again guys!
I didn't read yet, but just from the synopsis and the 'system' - 'fast cultivation' - 'Another World'. You got my full attention... Those damn 140 characters :s
Argh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It really hurts that I can't release so many chapters! Sigh.................. I hope that someone can still read my 1st time novel. I need to try my best after all.
I really enjoy how this is turning out I read every new chapter when i can as most of the time I'm at work so I cant read the chapter immediately I recommend this book.
Tbh i like the novel a lot. op mc ,new bloodline awesome background story with many reveals as the story progresses...funny stuff and awesome battles ..moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Is there someone here who knows someone who can I request a pic for my novel? Please message me and I want to know someone who can make a pic for my novel. Thank you all so much!!!
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Very good, more......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Hi guys! Author here! I will release the chapters until it reach 70. I already created 71 because I cannot rewrite it because of financial problems. I'm will try my best update it more faster than before so all of you can enjoy reading. Support me at https://***.patreon.com/PeerlessProminence Thanks again!
the story is good but it seems to have been dropped. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------