Carriage of Immortality

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paddyfish

This story is just all over the place. An editor would be a serious help, but that wouldn't fix basic giant plot holes in even the first chapters. After he dies helping a woman getting robbed (by getting stabbed in the chest) he gets picked up by some entity that basically finds his death soo praiseworthy and noble that they want to grant him another life. But not before he gets a chance to see if he could have changed something about dying by doing things differently. He is shown another reality where he still dies (after trying to distract one of the robbers by throwing his soup and so he gets beaten and THEN stabbed) and the situation is basically the same. The entity then says that the second death was way less prayseworthy (mind you, he just did one thing differently hoping to get a better outcome. Beginning, end and even his intent in the situation stay the same). thus, for his great deed, our hero is rewarded with rebirth in a different world we do not get information about yet. As he wishes to be a shelter for the ones in need and a helper to the weak etc. (typical nice guy stuff) the entity also grants him the carriage of immortality (also without info to go on). our MC the awakes in a prairie next to his carriage pulled by a donkey. By looking into the carriage further he finds out that it provides him wiht basic seeds and that he can create stuff from the plants he inputs. He then leaves his carriage in the wilderness to go around on foot to find stuff for his carriage, is completely oblivious to not knowing this new world and its creatures, finds his first plants and starts cultivating them where he arrived (yes, he literally makes a field in the wild next to his carriage with his donkey just chilling there). what he hasn't discovered is that he has been spotted by a goblin who gets his friends to rob the MC in the night. They get eaten by wolves in said night, though and only the first goblin survives to ask the MC for help. In the next days the mc helps the goblin get better and then the goblin kinda stays and learns from/helps the mc make his little farm in the wild. The mc 'fortifies' his camp somehow though it is not elaborated at all on how anything really looks and what dimensions it has besides the carriage. then his goblin gets some friends because their village has been raided by a monster and the mc lets them stay but also wants them to work for food (which is fine), so now our mc lives with 13 Goblins who peacefully and instantly adapt to helping him do fieldwork which they have never done before. This includes pregnant goblins and 'mc-is-a-virgin' joke. his first goblin casually ranks up into a class which doesn't seem to have existed previously but no reason or reaction is given. But the goblin can talk now and calls him master. He also thells the mc about a human village a week away that the goblins 'have traded with' and the mc decides to go there 'when he has enough resources stocked'. Those amount to cheap medicinal pills he can make with his carriage from the stuff he has planted. There is some kind of leveling system for the carriage and the world has some kind of cultivation system that is just shortly mentioned and quite convoluted. The mc seems to have to gain points but he doesn't get to really know how. He seems to start at the first level of cultivation but has never fought and doesn't get any technique. After a week of farming and stuff the mc leaves his goblins to care for the plants and goes to the human village. As he leaves the goblin tells him that they want to go to their old village to look for usable stuff and he reacts by thinking that he is goink go work them harder wen he gets back. I'm mentioning this because i raised an eyebrow here as this is a crass break from the mc's supposed nice character. and then he instantly goes to the human village and on gets asked who he is, keeps silent for some reason and BEATS THE FIRST GUY THAT ATTACKS HIM BY COPYING WHAT THEY DO.

LV 14

NecromikReal

Hello All The story does have its jumps and the MC is too engrossed on his own research and life experience....most likely due to its first life being almost a sweat shop....lol But it’s a very refreshing concept where the godly item is such a cheat on so many levels.....lol is funny how he is a nerd collecting herbs the complain about how his own people are getting laid..... Defiantly should try as I see the story is way better than several other novels ranked much higher than this....definitely should be on the mid to late hundreds at least....give it a try is for fun!

LV 6

DingDongSong

How is this novel going to be? Is it going to be One of the good ones or the bad ones🤔🤔🤔🤔I surely do hope it will be a Great read🥰🥰🥰🥰however just by seeing the reviews and reading the summary I am leaning towards this being a very interesting novel. Hope this is true. Lol😜😜😜I’ll give this a read for sure!!!!🤩🤩🤩

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P_N_uni

Intriguing story-line with the MC making a brand new a start in a new world with primitive means and racial discrimination .The thing puzzling is about the MC's Gandhi like personality, reason for which is not elaborated . Story is very good though and keeps readers engaged and asking for more. Hope the author keeps up the good work!

LV 14

Matthatter

I just wanted to add a review because I really like this book and wanted it to be rated. In the first 50 and counting chapters it has been a kingdom builder and I don’t know how long it will last

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HellDragon

Great work It's should be in top 15 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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TDGOriginal

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LV 5

Just_a_person

It’s a good original novel despite some mistakes in grammar and punctuation. It has been a while since I read a good farming-start kingdom-building novel.

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Everything_Forever

This is so amazing! Please whatever you do author,do not drop this! Also this is one of the best novels around thank you so much author! Also Review.

LV 4

basketty

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starking

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LV 5

Yensy

The story is quite good.It’s about a dude that gets a second chance in a primitive place with what may as well have been a seedbank-bottomless chest and what does the guy do try to make things better for people he finds which is quite commendable and he’s not just a warmonger like almost every mc I’ve read about that gets sent to another world he also isn’t overpowered he’s just a dood with a carriage that lets him identify things and process them not the most overwhelming thing but it does help quite a bit like letting him know how long something will take to grow and how much will it yield and if it’s poisonous or not and if it can be harvested for anything else so not the most impressive cheat but a very useable one it also doesn’t make the character the quickest grower in the universe just a guy who knows what will help ok the starting plant he gets is a little too good but it’s the starting plant from a carriage called the carriage of immortality of course the starting item will be great otherwise the carriage would just be a little underpowered as it makes only 10 seeds and 4 strands of Qi a day which lets him speed up ether his cultivation or his plants growth speed by about 4 times which is quite good but not the most useful considering most of the plants he gets take only a few days to grow but once he gets some plants that take months to grow that will be useful. My only quip is he keeps putting gm for grams instead of just g and it annoys me to no end and I do not know why.

LV 6

GGMissFortune

Another trash contrived start. Writer really doesn't get the thief mindset and should do some more research. Pickpockets do not usually go back after a failed robbery especially when they are the opportunist type using motorcycle as getaway. This just increases the chance of getting stuck in a crowded street and getting caught by police. They also wouldn't start beating somebody to death after failing to snatch a purse. This is China not USA inner-city slums where gangbangers are trigger happy.