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Hey, er.. could you update this? Would be really nice, you left us on a cliff hanger here, sooooo yep, I like the story so farrrr, just needs more updatessss, quick tip, if you're going to start a story, make sure you're prepared and actually update. Thanks uwu
Hey, er.. could you update this? Would be really nice, you left us on a cliff hanger here, sooooo yep, I like the story so farrrr, just needs more updatessss, quick tip, if you're going to start a story, make sure you're prepared and actually update. Thanks uwu