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- Contexte du monde
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As this is a new story, I will not be so harsh. I recommend for the author to get an editor or use grammarly. Also, instead of showing their names before they talk you can try to narrate it...＼\\(۶•̀ᴗ•́)۶//／／ best wishes for this ε=(っ≧ω≦)っ
As this is a new story, I will not be so harsh. I recommend for the author to get an editor or use grammarly. Also, instead of showing their names before they talk you can try to narrate it...＼\\(۶•̀ᴗ•́)۶//／／ best wishes for this ε=(っ≧ω≦)っ