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wonder if its to come out with more chapters or not. theres not alot off gundam fanfics. yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet
Great Novel and author's character are making the Seed scene much interesting although some characters are a bit annoying just like the MC's cold attitude... 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
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Spoiler de révélation Nice creating a gundam fan fic where you combined seed and Buiild Diver/Fighter..... though the MC's personality is like a two face but damn still a good work......
Love the story can't wait until the next update. Your writing is solid and the pace is good, I was wondering if there is going to be some romance for the character.
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the updates is still not stable enough, sorry i only can give this much. the other category is already perfect, i'll change this rating after the updates is stable enough.
Hi, I'm the author of this fanfic.. Seriously, I don't know how come my main account still accessable.. 👀 So, for differentiate my main account with this one, I changed my nicknamed.. *Sigh* such a wasted If I know, this would be happened. I'll never have to make alt.account..
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Stable updates, good story development, good character design and excelent world background, one of my favorite so far! More chapter plz...plz...plz
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I like the story, but waiting is not my virtue. Well, basically I'm just write this review to get more exp. Lol more update please!!
I'm not a mecha maniac. The author was the same author that made fate fanfic ( i don't remember the title). Writing quality improved 👌 It's a good thing. But the stability update ? It become worse, the author usually update 1 chapter each day. Now it just 2/3 chapters each week. Author, you should give more information about what you're writing. I mean, "what's ahab reactors, gn particles, psycho frame?" Something i can eat? Not everyone that reading your story understand about that,but don't you dare give us a full chapter with info dump! You should improve your stability update.
Hi, i'm the author here. I'm gonna review my own works :D The writing quality? it's not top notch, but readable. Stability updates? I'm a slow writer, so just 2/3 chapters everyweek. Story development? it's slow because i can't update chapters so fast TwT Character design? Because it was an OC, so i made it 5 stars :D World Background? It's a Gundam Universe!!
Keep up with the awesome story CD love how the mc doesn't let other people threaten him and push him around and pair him with lacus pls xD I'll love the story even more and hope you update more soon
Good translation quality, stable updates, good story development, good character design and excelent world background, one of my favorite so far!
Hey why are you not updating I have been a year now Please update more chapter in this story Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooookkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
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wonder if its to come out with more chapters or not. theres not alot off gundam fanfics. yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet
Great Novel and author's character are making the Seed scene much interesting although some characters are a bit annoying just like the MC's cold attitude... 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
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Spoiler de révélation Nice creating a gundam fan fic where you combined seed and Buiild Diver/Fighter..... though the MC's personality is like a two face but damn still a good work......
Love the story can't wait until the next update. Your writing is solid and the pace is good, I was wondering if there is going to be some romance for the character.
Spoiler de révélation the updates is still not stable enough, sorry i only can give this much. the other category is already perfect, i'll change this rating after the updates is stable enough.
Hi, I'm the author of this fanfic.. Seriously, I don't know how come my main account still accessable.. 👀 So, for differentiate my main account with this one, I changed my nicknamed.. *Sigh* such a wasted If I know, this would be happened. I'll never have to make alt.account..
Spoiler de révélation Stable updates, good story development, good character design and excelent world background, one of my favorite so far! More chapter plz...plz...plz
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Spoiler de révélation I like the story, but waiting is not my virtue. Well, basically I'm just write this review to get more exp. Lol more update please!!
I'm not a mecha maniac. The author was the same author that made fate fanfic ( i don't remember the title). Writing quality improved 👌 It's a good thing. But the stability update ? It become worse, the author usually update 1 chapter each day. Now it just 2/3 chapters each week. Author, you should give more information about what you're writing. I mean, "what's ahab reactors, gn particles, psycho frame?" Something i can eat? Not everyone that reading your story understand about that,but don't you dare give us a full chapter with info dump! You should improve your stability update.
Hi, i'm the author here. I'm gonna review my own works :D The writing quality? it's not top notch, but readable. Stability updates? I'm a slow writer, so just 2/3 chapters everyweek. Story development? it's slow because i can't update chapters so fast TwT Character design? Because it was an OC, so i made it 5 stars :D World Background? It's a Gundam Universe!!
Keep up with the awesome story CD love how the mc doesn't let other people threaten him and push him around and pair him with lacus pls xD I'll love the story even more and hope you update more soon
Good translation quality, stable updates, good story development, good character design and excelent world background, one of my favorite so far!
Hey why are you not updating I have been a year now Please update more chapter in this story Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooookkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk