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Eldritch Shop System (DROPPED)

Eastern 129 Chapitres 1.4M Affichage
Auteur: TrinityShock

4.66 (58 audimat)

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Synopsis

George Candra, a nature enthusiast fell from a cliff and found himself awoke in the bottom of a ravine with a ton of skeletons surrounding him.

As he tried to climb up, he found out that he have a system, but it wasn't your usual system. It was... a shop. Yes... a shop.

With the coins that he found nearby, he somehow managed to survive in the bottom of the cliff. He even made a house in there, until someone crashed the house and destroyed it...

"..." He suddenly felt an urge to just demolish the house he just finished building a moment ago.

"WTF... There's a person on the roof." He poked the man and demanded compensation of the house to him, but the man can't seem to understand Indonesian, nor English.

"Uhh... Wo.. ai.. ni?"

The man's face darkened.

...

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Rank -- Classement Power Stone
Stone -- Power stone

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MadReader

I gave 5 stars... Not because I've read the story... No... Grandpa gave five stars because I trust the previous review's comment and I believe he was an honest person... Anyway... Good job!

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bayu_toya

This is a good story, but don't put your expectation too high. The story is fun, easy to read, and worth to read if you is charging your spirits stone for some other novel And lastly... Keep the good work, author. Selama tulisannya bagus, akan selalu ku ikuti ceritanya 👍

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SovietDoge

I gave five stars because I trust the person who reviewed like the person below me 10100011101011101010101110101011001010101010101010010101010010101010101010101000010111010101010100101010

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aSleepyPenguin

I'm betting this will go Premium :| I'm stating this now while not many people know yet. Is anyone willing to take the bet? 140 Words huh, well then. I'm scared of primuem ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...

5yr
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Bierbart

The english is readable but there is still a big room for imptovement. New world as far as it seems so gotta see how it develops but it seems based on a cultivation background. To the characters weeell... mcs IQ is probably below the roomtemperatur in an arctic enviroment 😅 lets leave it with that statement

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MistahChu

I liked this story.. Please continue to write them!!! What i like from this novel is: 1. The minecraft portal and the items that you could by from the shop. It's literally all thing that existed inside real world, games, movies and even anime. 2. When you can't upload, you said it first. Not like other novels, who suddenly didn't upload. Well.. in other words, you did a great job! (P.S. could you add some potions from Harry Potter too?)

5yr
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the_accountant

pls update the story is amazing ...............................................................................................................

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Peachwoodgirl6

I have only read a few chapters, this type of novel is new to me, but l have enjoyed the story so far. Your story is quite interesting, this the second eastern fantasy novel I am reading.keep up the good work.

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bennylin

Mantab, saya kasih 5 bintang dan power stone. Lanjutkan tulisannya. Good job, I'm giving 5 stars and power stones. Continue your writing.

5yr
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koolsalad

Very interesting, adds a lot of new ideas to the world of cultivation. I would think things would progress differently and the cultivators would be far more aggressive but overall I think the story is decent.

5yr
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TonhaoSpawn

Esta novela es divertida e interesante. Realmente reí cuando leí la ultima parte de la sipnosis. Espero que la historia no se arruine mas tarde. This novel is fun and interesting. I really laughed when I read the last part of the synopsis. I hope the story will not be ruined later.

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commandergenerals

Cool story bro out there as I known some of these stuff as I like minecraft mods so hopefully you will added more to this story as most cultivatuon stories out there is commonly about harems or surpassing heaven something like that I rarely seen this kind of type who just a simple owner with a bunch of crazy iyems to show in the word hope you continue this story

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Cielune
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Esta novela es divertida e interesante. Realmente reí cuando leí la ultima parte de la sipnosis. Espero que la historia no se arruine mas tarde. This novel is fun and interesting. I really laughed when I read the last part of the synopsis. I hope the story will not be ruined later.

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kankup4

It is very fun to read story . = ============================================ ============================ ======================================== =======================================

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Cliff_Sect_Leader

I've only read the first 10 chapters so I don 't really have much to say at this point. The title and system are kind of misleading. I was expecting something chtulu related or some other eldritch horror kind of thing. But it ended up being a Videogame Shop system instead. The MC is pretty much a blank slate at this point. We have been shown zero backstory, background, or motivations up to this point and he pretty much acts pretty randomly though he's kind of an asshole most of the time. The thing with the chickens was pretty cold-blooded.

5yr
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xWangan
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Overall, I'd say this is a pretty cute and funny story. The plot is fine, a big part in it plays the shop, which I think is made pretty nice. Overall world building is done properly, so you've got a sense of what's going on. Stability of updates is pretty good as well. The only downside to the novel would be writing quality, with some mistakes here and there, but it's readable.

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wahlfire

There is a really funny book that has a very shady system. The system is rather funny with its antics. All in all it's a rather fun book to read

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WhiteNeon

Aaah, Minceraft is really sweet... Definitely a typo on my part if you notice. The story is about a person name George with a System. However, we are focusing on Minecraft items in the early-game of the story. We are going to face the worldly bliss of Minecraft after you read the story. As for the future, only the God of all in this story (Author) will know about it. Okay, now I don't know what to write anymore, I'll just post this stupid writing of mine. For the sake of raising our Author over here to the Realm of Displayable Stars (Basically having 10 Reviews). By the way, exp.

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MindTwister

F*cking love the story and being able to wake up every day to read a chapter. Has a ton of awesome stuff and I recommend it to all those who come by!

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Mumyum

So very interesting and I highly recommend reading this novel to everyone who wants something to read. This story is pretty good from what I see of the other reviews I’ve read and the summary alone. I reading this for sure!! keep chapters coming 😎😎😎

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Volume 1

  1. 1
    Eldritch Shop 5 years ago
  2. 2
    Boom! Crash?! 5 years ago
  3. 3
    Where did This Pleb Come From?! 5 years ago
  4. 4
    Healing Potions 5 years ago
  5. 5
    Another One of These?! 5 years ago
  6. 6
    'Unique' Dishes from Earth 5 years ago
  7. 7
    The Amnesia Cliche 5 years ago
  8. 8
    The Story of a Guy with Two Chickens 5 years ago
  9. 9
    Zhenqiu City 5 years ago
  10. 10
    The Wrath of Godfather Li 5 years ago
  11. 11
    Spying From the Guestroom 5 years ago
  12. 12
    The Dinner 5 years ago
  13. 13
    House of Potions 5 years ago
  14. 14
    Netherworld of Blocks 5 years ago
  15. 15
    Take Two 5 years ago
  16. 16
    Wither Skeletons and Withering Effect 5 years ago
  17. 17
    A Dangerous Act (1) 5 years ago
  18. 18
    A Dangerous Act (2) 5 years ago
  19. 19
    Experience Points? 5 years ago
  20. 20
    Getting Swindled.. 5 years ago
  21. 21
    Test Drive 5 years ago
  22. 22
    Xiao Fu? 5 years ago
  23. 23
    Blaze Monster Spawner 5 years ago
  24. 24
    A Full Package of Instant Death with a Free Cremations 5 years ago
  25. 25
    The Finished Store 5 years ago
  26. 26
    Brewing Potions 5 years ago
  27. 27
    Getting hit on by a Cat 5 years ago
  28. 28
    A Powerful Elixir 5 years ago
  29. 29
    He's Such a Busybody! 5 years ago
  30. 30
    Deja Vu? 5 years ago
  31. 31
    Rockabye Baby 5 years ago
  32. 32
    Infiltration of the Pagoda 5 years ago
  33. 33
    The Elixir of Death 5 years ago
  34. 34
    Torture Chambers (1) 5 years ago
  35. 35
    Torture Chambers (2) 5 years ago
  36. 36
    FBI Open Up!! 5 years ago
  37. 37
    Agent George vs Pedophile Boss 5 years ago
  38. 38
    Jinxed by the Branch Head Wang 5 years ago
  39. 39
    Want Some Popcorn? 5 years ago
  40. 40
    Sports Car? Hell Nah.. 5 years ago
  41. 41
    Wrecked by A Wither 5 years ago
  42. 42
    Third Prince of the Wind Nation 5 years ago
  43. 43
    What does these Scriptures mean? 5 years ago
  44. 44
    Ugh.. Why do i feel that i was more suited to become their mom, rather than their master? 5 years ago
  45. 45
    A Magical Watering Can? 5 years ago
  46. 46
    The Power of the Magical Watering Can 5 years ago
  47. 47
    The Miracle of the House of Potions 5 years ago
  48. 48
    I might have to blacklist your name in this shop! 5 years ago
  49. 49
    Are You Ready for a Perfect Storm? 5 years ago
  50. 50
    Judging my Potions? 5 years ago
  51. 51
    Western Medicine 5 years ago
  52. 52
    If you want to make a bet, you have to make sure that you will always win! 5 years ago
  53. 53
    Auction Trolling... Failed 5 years ago
  54. 54
    All Seeing Eye 5 years ago
  55. 55
    Revealing Secrets and Unveiling the Forbbidden 5 years ago
  56. 56
    A Blinding Light from the Censorship Gods (Rated R.. i think) 5 years ago
  57. 57
    10.000 Years Old Ginseng 5 years ago
  58. 58
    A LOLI APPEARED! 5 years ago
  59. 59
    Bragging Rights 5 years ago
  60. 60
    Going to the Nether Again 5 years ago
  61. 61
    Ghast Tear Farm Opportunity? 5 years ago
  62. 62
    Putting a Gag on a Ghast 5 years ago
  63. 63
    Making the Ghast Cry 5 years ago
  64. 64
    Unique Abilities of a Plant Spirits 5 years ago
  65. 65
    VIP and Missions 5 years ago
  66. 66
    Arctic Abyss Biome 5 years ago
  67. 67
    Pigtificates 5 years ago
  68. 68
    Scorchyard Village 5 years ago
  69. 69
    Time is the Key 5 years ago
  70. 70
    Spore Creepers 5 years ago
  71. 71
    New Event: Extermination of Spore Creeper Infestation 5 years ago
  72. 72
    I got two slav- Ahem! I mean.. two servants.. 5 years ago
  73. 73
    Taming a Pinky? 5 years ago
  74. 74
    Twilight Forest 5 years ago
  75. 75
    Finding Land for the House 5 years ago
  76. 76
    Redstone Flux 5 years ago
  77. 77
    RF Generating Machinery 5 years ago
  78. 78
    Scammed? 5 years ago
  79. 79
    RF Power Plant 5 years ago
  80. 80
    Starting The Farm 5 years ago
  81. 81
    Chaotic Shop With a Chaotic Customers 5 years ago
  82. 82
    T- Trap?! 5 years ago
  83. 83
    The Tower of The Twilight Lich (Part 1) 5 years ago
  84. 84
    The Tower of The Twilight Lich (Part 2) 5 years ago
  85. 85
    The Tower of The Twilight Lich (Part 3) 5 years ago
  86. 86
    The Tower of The Twilight Lich (Part 4) 5 years ago
  87. 87
    The Tower of The Twilight Lich (Part 5) 5 years ago
  88. 88
    George Did An Oopsie! 5 years ago
  89. 89
    Veggie Stealer? 5 years ago
  90. 90
    Potion Effect Remover 5 years ago
  91. 91
    Pranking 10 Different Cultivators 5 years ago
  92. 92
    Drink Me Potion And Eat Me Cake 5 years ago
  93. 93
    The Recording From The Surveillance Camera 5 years ago
  94. 94
    Mandrake And Mice 5 years ago
  95. 95
    Remi And The Boys 5 years ago
  96. 96
    George, The Rat Whisperer 5 years ago
  97. 97
    Confit Byaldi for Breakfast?! 5 years ago
  98. 98
    New Day, New Trouble (1) 5 years ago
  99. 99
    New Day, New Trouble (2) 5 years ago
  100. 100
    New Day, New Trouble (3) 5 years ago
  101. 101
    A Perverted Giant on House of Potions 5 years ago
  102. 102
    Weird Phenomenon That Attracts More Costumers 5 years ago
  103. 103
    Sun Zhou's Haul Shopping 5 years ago
  104. 104
    Betrayer(s) 5 years ago
  105. 105
    Dissapear Into Thin Air 5 years ago
  106. 106
    A Weird Interrogation 5 years ago
  107. 107
    The Wrath of Mao XinYue's Master 5 years ago
  108. 108
    George's Analyzing Skill 5 years ago
  109. 109
    Another Transmigrator 5 years ago
  110. 110
    End Portal 5 years ago
  111. 111
    The End 5 years ago
  112. 112
    Dragon Heart 5 years ago
  113. 113
    Draconic Evolution 5 years ago
  114. 114
    The Relationship Between Endermans And Ender Dragon 5 years ago
  115. 115
    Other Side of The End 5 years ago
  116. 116
    Heavenly Ender Fruit 5 years ago
  117. 117
    A Brand New World 5 years ago
  118. 118
    Back to the Cultivation World 5 years ago
  119. 119
    Another Best Selling Item 5 years ago
  120. 120
    Phoenix Gonfalon Sect 5 years ago
  121. 121
    Pure Daisies 5 years ago
  122. 122
    Exhale of the Horned Ones 5 years ago
  123. 123
    Daybloom And Nightshade 5 years ago
  124. 124
    The Altar 5 years ago
  125. 125
    Upgrading the Altar 5 years ago
  126. 126
    Drop of Luck 5 years ago
  127. 127
    A SOUP?! We Did All of That Just For A Soup?! 5 years ago
  128. 128
    Poppets 5 years ago
  129. 129
    Protection and Black Magic Poppets 5 years ago

Auteur TrinityShock