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Too many nicknames. Terrible grammar the author promises to improve but never does. The story is like hopping around through time and introducing what I assume is an integral part of the story as if it was a one off character or something and literally changing what pokemon he has every chapter. Like one he suddenly has a nuzleaf we never knew about and then suddenly he has a deino. He has mc encourage his pokemon to fight wild pokemon for no reason then compliments one of his pokemon for stopping the fighting as if he didn't instigate it.
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Novel is fast paced author is overly fond of timeskips. The story itself isnt bad but the lack of detail and all the nicknames make it confusing at times and leaves holes in what should have been important events. Such as arch enemy, Pokémon, scar ect
The story is good the only problem i have with the story is the nicknames, one nickname is not a problem but al the nicknames is hard to follow if you haven't read it for a day or two while reading another book!
Quite an intriguing and interesting book that it has caught my attention along with how the MC trains his pokemon and himself and truly helps them develop their moves and everything not to mention the strategies he comes up with and how powerful Cinder is along with the others that he has and has trained overall enjoyed all of this book look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
Too many nicknames. Terrible grammar the author promises to improve but never does. The story is like hopping around through time and introducing what I assume is an integral part of the story as if it was a one off character or something and literally changing what pokemon he has every chapter. Like one he suddenly has a nuzleaf we never knew about and then suddenly he has a deino. He has mc encourage his pokemon to fight wild pokemon for no reason then compliments one of his pokemon for stopping the fighting as if he didn't instigate it.
more mroe more more mroe more more mroe more more mroe more more mroe more more mroe more more mroe more more mroe more more mroe more more mroe more more mroe more more mroe more more mroe more more mroe more more mroe more more mroe more more mroe more more mroe more more mroe more more mroe more more mroe more
Confusing!!!!!!!!!...... .........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Novel is fast paced author is overly fond of timeskips. The story itself isnt bad but the lack of detail and all the nicknames make it confusing at times and leaves holes in what should have been important events. Such as arch enemy, Pokémon, scar ect
The story is good the only problem i have with the story is the nicknames, one nickname is not a problem but al the nicknames is hard to follow if you haven't read it for a day or two while reading another book!
Quite an intriguing and interesting book that it has caught my attention along with how the MC trains his pokemon and himself and truly helps them develop their moves and everything not to mention the strategies he comes up with and how powerful Cinder is along with the others that he has and has trained overall enjoyed all of this book look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book