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This story is stupid because if he wished to obtain all the heavenly treasure then the world’s balance would be destroy. Not by him though because the moment he enters that world with all the treasure gathered, the treasures would release a powerful aura, informing every known cultivators and factions to come and kill him for it, and since he just arrive there with no cultivation, he’s fûcked. Then whoever survive and take the heavenly treasures as a victory prize will gain immense power and rule the land until an even more powerful people or the people that he trusts plot against him and kill him for the treasures. And the cycle continues until the end of time
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This is FF who have MC that disrespected toward the one who gave him second chances. The story is too boring, and the fact that MC have All Heavenly Treasure but can easily got poisoned isn't logic at all. He can't even use his Heavenly Treasure. He only can use Heavenly Treasure that can control the Time. Well, i give up. Read it and find out whether you like it or not, I'm just give my own tho.
wow could you take a look at theese without reading people giving review to this novel and a 5 star at that despite being novel itself near to be called actual trash
wow could you take a look at theese without reading people giving review to this novel and a 5 star at that despite being novel itself near to be called actual trash
wow could you take a look at theese without reading people giving review to this novel and a 5 star at that despite being novel itself near to be called actual trash
very good ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................
very good ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................
very good ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Cliffhanger WTF.. Need more Cliffhanger WTF.. Need more Cliffhanger WTF.. Need more Cliffhanger WTF.. Need more Cliffhanger WTF.. Need more Cliffhanger WTF.. Need more Cliffhanger WTF.. Need more Cliffhanger WTF.. Need more
I came from Wuxia but I did not expect that I would immediately encounter an ATG fanfic. It's been a while since I visited the Qidian.. Pretty much, the world background shan't be reviewed anymore as the story uses the ATG world background. Writing Quality - It seems pretty good.. The author made a few mistakes but it's reparable Stability of Updates - We'll see Story Development - We'll see too Character Design - I like how the main character acts normally. He still has his 'humanity' and his 'rationality'. He has his own set of weird and unique emotion. I like how he talked to the God. Specially, his farewell made me laugh.
It seems good. The quality isn't bad. Specially, the author seems to know how to use his brain compared to other authors.. Welp, I'll ride along
2 chapters in and it seems pretty good. So long as he doesn't drop it like some other things *cough* his other novels *cough* I'll be reading.
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This story is stupid because if he wished to obtain all the heavenly treasure then the world’s balance would be destroy. Not by him though because the moment he enters that world with all the treasure gathered, the treasures would release a powerful aura, informing every known cultivators and factions to come and kill him for it, and since he just arrive there with no cultivation, he’s fûcked. Then whoever survive and take the heavenly treasures as a victory prize will gain immense power and rule the land until an even more powerful people or the people that he trusts plot against him and kill him for the treasures. And the cycle continues until the end of time
...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This is FF who have MC that disrespected toward the one who gave him second chances. The story is too boring, and the fact that MC have All Heavenly Treasure but can easily got poisoned isn't logic at all. He can't even use his Heavenly Treasure. He only can use Heavenly Treasure that can control the Time. Well, i give up. Read it and find out whether you like it or not, I'm just give my own tho.
wow could you take a look at theese without reading people giving review to this novel and a 5 star at that despite being novel itself near to be called actual trash
wow could you take a look at theese without reading people giving review to this novel and a 5 star at that despite being novel itself near to be called actual trash
wow could you take a look at theese without reading people giving review to this novel and a 5 star at that despite being novel itself near to be called actual trash
very good ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................
very good ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................
very good ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................
Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem
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Cliffhanger WTF.. Need more Cliffhanger WTF.. Need more Cliffhanger WTF.. Need more Cliffhanger WTF.. Need more Cliffhanger WTF.. Need more Cliffhanger WTF.. Need more Cliffhanger WTF.. Need more Cliffhanger WTF.. Need more
Cliffhanger WTF.. Need more Cliffhanger WTF.. Need more Cliffhanger WTF.. Need more Cliffhanger WTF.. Need more Cliffhanger WTF.. Need more Cliffhanger WTF.. Need more Cliffhanger WTF.. Need more Cliffhanger WTF.. Need more
I came from Wuxia but I did not expect that I would immediately encounter an ATG fanfic. It's been a while since I visited the Qidian.. Pretty much, the world background shan't be reviewed anymore as the story uses the ATG world background. Writing Quality - It seems pretty good.. The author made a few mistakes but it's reparable Stability of Updates - We'll see Story Development - We'll see too Character Design - I like how the main character acts normally. He still has his 'humanity' and his 'rationality'. He has his own set of weird and unique emotion. I like how he talked to the God. Specially, his farewell made me laugh.
It seems good. The quality isn't bad. Specially, the author seems to know how to use his brain compared to other authors.. Welp, I'll ride along
2 chapters in and it seems pretty good. So long as he doesn't drop it like some other things *cough* his other novels *cough* I'll be reading.
Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem
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