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Love it I have never seen anything like it in my opinion it is so cool and bada** keep going on update it more because I feel in love with it
I like the world's chosen for this Ti fic. Its a bit fast paced but very entertaining. Its a fun read and unpredictable thus far. A pleasant surprise. There are plenty of worlds I'd like to see him go to. However I think it's better not to make suggestions as the author has shown good judgement in his or her choices thus far. I hope there will be more chapters available soon. Even if there won't be, I decided to use a stone simply because this was a breath of fresh air that broke the monotamy of the usual fics.
Looks like it has potential to be hood, but that is buried by the lack of proper English. Couldn’t get past the first couple chapters because of that.
Love it I have never seen anything like it in my opinion it is so cool and bada** keep going on update it more because I feel in love with it
I like the world's chosen for this Ti fic. Its a bit fast paced but very entertaining. Its a fun read and unpredictable thus far. A pleasant surprise. There are plenty of worlds I'd like to see him go to. However I think it's better not to make suggestions as the author has shown good judgement in his or her choices thus far. I hope there will be more chapters available soon. Even if there won't be, I decided to use a stone simply because this was a breath of fresh air that broke the monotamy of the usual fics.
Looks like it has potential to be hood, but that is buried by the lack of proper English. Couldn’t get past the first couple chapters because of that.