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It seems the author can't keep a single narrative throughout an entire chapter. Reading this novel so far just wasn't enjoyable but I can see why people find the concept interesting. There's just so much stuff going on at once that it's hard to enjoy the novel.
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Ok what did just happen ? Author did you drop the novel or what ? If you did so at least say something to the readers pls. I really liked the novel and how it was going so what happened 🤔
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As off the latest chapter I see the mc as op and lazy but not cold just like doesn’t care Love the concept kuh kuh can’t wait for the important characters to die ahhh kuh kuh
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I want to know the identity if this Hollow God. Keeping his identity a secret while throwing a few hints here and there is such good idea. Love the story so fare, love how it switch between multiple scenes in one chapter. So far so good, I am giving it 5 Star because I don't know what else I can give it.
Loving it so far................................................................................................... Keep up the good work :)
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After reading it so far I really like it. It will be really interesting as to where this story goes. This could be a really good novel if everything goes right. OP MCs are my favorite kind of MCs so I look forward to reading it.
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Spoiler de révélation It seems the author can't keep a single narrative throughout an entire chapter. Reading this novel so far just wasn't enjoyable but I can see why people find the concept interesting. There's just so much stuff going on at once that it's hard to enjoy the novel.
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Ok what did just happen ? Author did you drop the novel or what ? If you did so at least say something to the readers pls. I really liked the novel and how it was going so what happened 🤔
Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém
As off the latest chapter I see the mc as op and lazy but not cold just like doesn’t care Love the concept kuh kuh can’t wait for the important characters to die ahhh kuh kuh
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I want to know the identity if this Hollow God. Keeping his identity a secret while throwing a few hints here and there is such good idea. Love the story so fare, love how it switch between multiple scenes in one chapter. So far so good, I am giving it 5 Star because I don't know what else I can give it.
Loving it so far................................................................................................... Keep up the good work :)
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After reading it so far I really like it. It will be really interesting as to where this story goes. This could be a really good novel if everything goes right. OP MCs are my favorite kind of MCs so I look forward to reading it.
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