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This is really good but I wish there were more chapters ...................................................................................
Please update more chapter please because your work is perfect your writing quality,story development,etc. And please update more so we Can read more of this perfect story of yours
It would be a great story if there are more chapters. Until now it is a goog and unique beginning and setting and has the potential to be interesting for a long time.
This a good novel but the author doesn't have consistent on updating. So please can you have consistents of updating. ..
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No more update? ...........................................................................................................................
???????????? What hapennnnnd waitinggggg is killing please add more chapter.??????????? Plx?????????????? M ?????? Mmm udg. Great bookmoreeee chapterrrs
Pretty good so far. Need more chapters!! Gotta get all them charssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
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Its really great you would enjoy reading this. You can easily catch up to the latest chapter. The only problem is the update schedule but he is trying and thats all matters keep focusing on your studies and worry about the other stuff later.
I really like this novel,the story is amazing and it keeps me interested.hope you don't drop it ./////////////////////))/)/////////////)///////////
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Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter... .................................................................................................
a good story pls continue the series because its fun to read and exciting pls do not dropped the series all is good about writing and scenario
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Very good idea but it can be seen that he is armature writer but keep improving and leave less loophole................................................................................................................................................................
Please continue writing, unique concept and good motivation. If possible increase chapter length and release frequency. Thanks for your hardwork. More more more.
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It’s good really and different good start not dark or white but gray but I remind you don’t make his path hard or easy a little more about his history and more detail and keep the chapters coming
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noting down in the back of his mind to torture her for this should he one day gain the strengthen its balance and he no longer be back online for free to invite you to join me in the mighty Dragon of immoritly and
It's such a promising novel. I definetly enjoyed reading it. 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
So far so good, 6 chapters in and no major problems. I will update review once we reach 20 chapters, but overall a solid start so keep it up author
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Like the story so far keep it up👍🏼 and please don’t drop it👌🏻😁😁😉😊😊 like how the story develops so far👌 Like the story so far keep it up👍🏼 and please don’t drop it👌🏻😁😁😉😊😊 like how the story develops so far👌 Like the story so far keep it up👍🏼 and please don’t drop it👌🏻😁😁😉😊😊 like how the story develops so far👌 Like the story so far keep it up👍🏼 and please don’t drop it👌🏻😁😁😉😊😊 like how the story develops so far👌
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pretty good book..... it's nice for a change,and would have loved it more had it more chapters.
Such a good story why did it have to be dropped 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😤😤😤😤😤🤬🤬🤬🤬😭😭😭😭😭😭.......………….................................lol
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This is really good but I wish there were more chapters ...................................................................................
Please update more chapter please because your work is perfect your writing quality,story development,etc. And please update more so we Can read more of this perfect story of yours
It would be a great story if there are more chapters. Until now it is a goog and unique beginning and setting and has the potential to be interesting for a long time.
This a good novel but the author doesn't have consistent on updating. So please can you have consistents of updating. ..
Yoo if you keep on writing this well, you can make some good money on here! Keep it up author! 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
No more update? ...........................................................................................................................
???????????? What hapennnnnd waitinggggg is killing please add more chapter.??????????? Plx?????????????? M ?????? Mmm udg. Great bookmoreeee chapterrrs
Pretty good so far. Need more chapters!! Gotta get all them charssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
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Its really great you would enjoy reading this. You can easily catch up to the latest chapter. The only problem is the update schedule but he is trying and thats all matters keep focusing on your studies and worry about the other stuff later.
I really like this novel,the story is amazing and it keeps me interested.hope you don't drop it ./////////////////////))/)/////////////)///////////
Beautiful novel 5STARS ÁAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassaaaaaaaaaaaaaaqqaqqqqqaejrkfkdosiejejsjpeepeepoopoo
Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter... .................................................................................................
a good story pls continue the series because its fun to read and exciting pls do not dropped the series all is good about writing and scenario
Spoiler de révélation More more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more
Very good idea but it can be seen that he is armature writer but keep improving and leave less loophole................................................................................................................................................................
Please continue writing, unique concept and good motivation. If possible increase chapter length and release frequency. Thanks for your hardwork. More more more.
More more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 more
It’s good really and different good start not dark or white but gray but I remind you don’t make his path hard or easy a little more about his history and more detail and keep the chapters coming
More more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 more
CAR GUY HERE! GREAT START KEEP IT ROLLING 🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗🚙🚙🚙🚙🚙🚙🚙🚙🚙🚙🚙🚙🚙🚙🚙🚙🚙🚙🚙
And you know what I got more question is how you get a chance to go to go where every I desire and that she Asian markets for free and that is colder the other hand I don't
noting down in the back of his mind to torture her for this should he one day gain the strengthen its balance and he no longer be back online for free to invite you to join me in the mighty Dragon of immoritly and
It's such a promising novel. I definetly enjoyed reading it. 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
So far so good, 6 chapters in and no major problems. I will update review once we reach 20 chapters, but overall a solid start so keep it up author
Story is good.... don’t drop the story...... because many people started a good story and will drop with **** story.....😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎
Like the story so far keep it up👍🏼 and please don’t drop it👌🏻😁😁😉😊😊 like how the story develops so far👌 Like the story so far keep it up👍🏼 and please don’t drop it👌🏻😁😁😉😊😊 like how the story develops so far👌 Like the story so far keep it up👍🏼 and please don’t drop it👌🏻😁😁😉😊😊 like how the story develops so far👌 Like the story so far keep it up👍🏼 and please don’t drop it👌🏻😁😁😉😊😊 like how the story develops so far👌
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pretty good book..... it's nice for a change,and would have loved it more had it more chapters.