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Chapter 48: Making thing more interesting 4 years ago Volume 1 : The goddess blue
- 1 Patient zero 5 years ago
- 2 NEW WORLD 5 years ago
- 3 START OF A NEW LIFE 5 years ago
- 4 THE ART OF PILL REFINEMENT 5 years ago
- 5 GREEN LEAF GRASS 5 years ago
- 6 A LOT OF SPIRIT HERB, ONLY ONE LEFT TO FIND 5 years ago
- 7 WHITE WATER SNAKE 5 years ago
- 8 BLOODY BATTLE 5 years ago
- 9 MEMORIES OF THE PAST 5 years ago
- 10 GOLDEN BODY 5 years ago
- 11 GOLD MINE 5 years ago
- 12 PILL ISLAND HERITAGE 5 years ago
- 13 New Pill Island manager 5 years ago
- 14 FIRST PILLS 5 years ago
- 15 ROSE AND JON FIELDS 5 years ago
- 16 UNDERCURRENTS IN THE REALM 5 years ago
- 17 DRAGON SUBDUING GOLEM ARMY 5 years ago
- 18 LOSING BADLY 5 years ago
- 19 FIGHTING THE BRONZE GOLEM AGAIN 5 years ago
- 20 POWER OF THE SHARINGAN 5 years ago
- 21 ONLY ATTACK TWICE 5 years ago
- 22 CLOSED DOOR TRAINING 5 years ago
- 23 ADVENTURE 5 years ago
- 24 THE HUNT 5 years ago
- 25 THE WHITE BEAST 5 years ago
- 26 SPIRIT BEAST CONTRACT 5 years ago
- 27 NAMELESS METHOD 5 years ago
- 28 LIGHTNING TRIBULATION 5 years ago
- 29 I WILL NOT GO QUIETLY 5 years ago
- 30 Surviving the lightning tribulation 5 years ago
- 31 Why do i have a tail 5 years ago
- 32 Returning to Pill Island 5 years ago
- 33 Big news 5 years ago
- 34 The opening of the Ancient Battleground 5 years ago
- 35 Pill island armory 5 years ago
- 36 Saint tier Martial art 5 years ago
- 37 The Blood Moon Sword 5 years ago
- 38 The Elephant bow 4 years ago
- 39 Nine Forms of Fire 4 years ago
- 40 The fool who let in the wolfs 4 years ago
- 41 Shocking the world 4 years ago
- 42 Brutal fight 4 years ago
- 43 Red Blood Moon Dance 4 years ago
- 44 The Blood Moon massacre 4 years ago
- 45 Ancient battleground preparation 4 years ago
- 46 One can always find trouble 4 years ago
- 47 When they ask for a beating it best to give it to them 4 years ago
- 48 Making thing more interesting 4 years ago
This story can built lot better if you can make a few proper and logical changes. For example our MC died at 12 which is too young for a person to understand the meaning of reincarnation. If you put something like MC was 16 years and matured fast due to reading the novels will fill the loopholes in your story. And try to fix our spell mistakes. One or two mistakes in a paragraph may be overlooked but if the entire paragraph is confusing people will loose interest inn reading the story.