Chapitre 1: Under Remake
I'll be redoing the whole plot. I just realized how bad I made it.
I'm really sorry guys :((
But I do hope when I post it again, you'll read it. I'll be spending my summer redoing the story. I might also redo the other one, but that's still being thought over on. So I'd like to hear your thoughts on that.
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Kace_K_
Kace_K_ I just honestly think this could've been done better
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