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The story is good so far, the characters are good and funny while the story hopefully be updated if not that's fine I don't really care if it does or not.
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The story is very eccentric in terms of the plot of the story and the story development of characters.I feel that this novel deserves more support and acknowledgement.I only hope for consistent chapters from author-Chan,but I appreciate your hard work and effort in finding time to continue this novel.
Author leave the other one and write this please ..I downloaded this app bcoz I saw this story on Google and now I check to read ..u say hiatus!! Why????
Heya, I'll be your first review here. So far the story gave a good potential in the future. Your writing is good and I enjoy reading it. Maybe, you can use a little editing, but that's for later. Anyway, the story is interesting desu yo. Great job! Be aware that this novel consists, magical system thingy if you like that kind of genre, guys--because it's my cup of tea, so I don't mind it. Funny FL and Typical CEO ML which everyone wants him. I like to see their interaction more hehe. Good job author, I'll support you :D
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The story is good so far, the characters are good and funny while the story hopefully be updated if not that's fine I don't really care if it does or not.
What happened to author? ¿?????????????????????????????? ¿??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ¿???????????
The story is very eccentric in terms of the plot of the story and the story development of characters.I feel that this novel deserves more support and acknowledgement.I only hope for consistent chapters from author-Chan,but I appreciate your hard work and effort in finding time to continue this novel.
Author leave the other one and write this please ..I downloaded this app bcoz I saw this story on Google and now I check to read ..u say hiatus!! Why????
Heya, I'll be your first review here. So far the story gave a good potential in the future. Your writing is good and I enjoy reading it. Maybe, you can use a little editing, but that's for later. Anyway, the story is interesting desu yo. Great job! Be aware that this novel consists, magical system thingy if you like that kind of genre, guys--because it's my cup of tea, so I don't mind it. Funny FL and Typical CEO ML which everyone wants him. I like to see their interaction more hehe. Good job author, I'll support you :D
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