Fate/Inheritance

LV 13

RegretSin

Writing Quality: 2 Update Stability: 4 Story Development: 2 Character Design: 3 World Background: 1 I have no idea what is happening for 90% of the story, or who anyone is. I can’t tell if this is due to world background, character design, story development or writing quality. But I guess all of that is really under writing quality.

LV 6

Plutonium

Too much useless information. You are breaking the 4th wall too much. Haven’t seen character development and some things happens without reason, I am seriously confused. So I’m done, good luck breaking the 4th wall as you probably already saw my reaction to reading this.

LV 14

NewGoldie

I hate the way you're breaking the forth for world building. Your devaluing worth or importance of a character when you're introducing them. My point is why should we as reader care of your character do in the future or why should we invest in a character if he's worth is none existent. If you're doing it for a gag then is not funny or should I say it's a waste of time.

LV 6

CZ2128_Delta

13 chapters still no development.. MC is stuck on explanation and "Breaking the 4th wall" 13 chapters still no development.. MC is stuck on explanation and "Breaking the 4th wall" 13 chapters still no development.. MC is stuck on explanation and "Breaking the 4th wall" 13 chapters still no development.. MC is stuck on explanation and "Breaking the 4th wall" 13 chapters still no development.. MC is stuck on explanation and "Breaking the 4th wall"

LV 5

Sleeping_Moon

Author here having a shameless review~ This is my first time writing my own novel so I don't know what to do much so please bear with me~ I plan for this story to have a more balanced world building making the main character strong but not too strong in his own right~ As other's kept on asking Yes it would have a harem....

LV 5

ePythagoras

This is crap, that's all I have to say. The words and paragraphs needs more improvements. This novel is not good, but I advice you author to take my criticism positively.

LV 10

Frona_Gorgophone

 I am the soul of my account  Exp is my body and coin is my blood   I have created countless reviews   Unaware of the congruity, Nor aware of the quality  Withstood critics to create reviews, waiting for one’s acceptance  I have no shame. This is the easiest way.  My whole life was Unlimited Useless Previews!

LV 4

Communist_lemur

Just straight up breaks 4th for everything. No idea what’s going on at any time. rip rip riprap ripripritilripriprip ripripritilripriprip ripripritilripriprip

LV 5

JMaian

Good story original, world is original, the MCs name not so heroic for a hero, the chapters are short, good use of the system pretty much how Asians use them. I'm slow at reading. Got addicted to reading manga with the ladies dying and rebirth to noble ladies or noble ladies getting sick and remembering past life or otome games. just like this: the abandoned empress it's 👍.

LV 6

GGMissFortune

I hate the way you're breaking the forth for world building. Your devaluing worth or importance of a character when you're introducing them. My point is why should we as reader care of your character do in the future or why should we invest in a character if he's worth is none existent. If you're doing it for a gag then is not funny or should I say it's a waste of time.

LV 1

Mela132

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LV 4

Fazrin_

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LV 2

Chelsea_Lolipop

The Story Is Very very very Trash... I dont know this novel comedy is to low... cant make u laught... and what happen with servant make a joke woth author.. this is Gintama ??????????¿¿¿¿¿¿ I dont want to keep fanfic novel like this in ky library

LV 12

kenli

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LV 14

Gutterstomp

It’s like a Person imagines a story in their head and just cramped all the information and the story into multiple paragraphs and is really confusing and at the same time very irritating to read. But atleast it has a decent update.

LV 5

Suriel8224

Not boring but so boring😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂HAHAHAHA.. S😂😊😂😊😄🤗😄☺😉☺🙁🤗☺🙁☺😉🤐🙁☺😆☺🤗☺🙁🙁☺🙁☺😆☺🙁☺🙁☺🙁☺🙁☺🙁🙁😈🙁😈🤗😈🤗😈🤗😈🤗🤐☺Not boring but so boring😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂HAHAHAHA.. S😂😊😂😊😄🤗😄☺😉☺🙁🤗☺🙁☺😉🤐🙁☺😆☺🤗☺🙁🙁☺🙁☺😆☺🙁☺🙁☺🙁☺🙁☺🙁🙁😈🙁😈🤗😈🤗😈🤗😈🤗🤐☺Not boring but so boring😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂HAHAHAHA.. S😂😊😂😊😄🤗😄☺😉☺🙁🤗☺🙁☺😉🤐🙁☺😆☺🤗☺🙁🙁☺🙁☺😆☺🙁☺🙁☺🙁☺🙁☺🙁🙁😈🙁😈🤗😈🤗😈🤗😈🤗🤐☺

LV 14

Soupreme

Everything’s a 5 for me except in writing quality and story development as in the first 13 chapters, i was a little but disoriented on how the sentence format worked and there’s this case of 4th wall breaks that, not only acts as a plot point but also mixes the dialogue, making me confused as to whether its a direct quotation, a thought, or whatnot. Besides that, everything else is good, you got my attention, thank you author-san for making this, and I’ll be waiting for more, because it’s nice.

LV 10

ZhanYun

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LV 1

Mela132

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LV 1

Mela132

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