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Short story, but was kind of interesting. Characters were a bit flat, but for a 18+ story that's to be expected. Would have liked to read a bit more of the background of the sister.
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Why the protagonist is a loser dick? I know he is a virgin, and his partner is his onee-chan, which is older than him and thus become superior to him. But in no way as a man he lose his dignity and become a loser dick.
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I came looking for copper and found gold! that's my mentality for when I start reading a new novel, keep the expectatives low so if the novel s*cks I won't be dissapointed, but if it's good It'll be a pleasant surprise. This would actually make for a really good hentai so I'm giving it 10/10, wait this only has up to 5 stars... still, it was very zukhulento hail the author 👌
The MC is pathetic but at least it's realistic, he's a virgin so he sucks at s*x and thankfully he's told that and they don't have s*x for like 10 hours in a row like you see sometimes, so I have to give it a high rating. It is quite a sweet story in the end with a tsun-tsun big sister.
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Short story, but was kind of interesting. Characters were a bit flat, but for a 18+ story that's to be expected. Would have liked to read a bit more of the background of the sister.
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Spoiler de révélation Why the protagonist is a loser dick? I know he is a virgin, and his partner is his onee-chan, which is older than him and thus become superior to him. But in no way as a man he lose his dignity and become a loser dick.
Spoiler de révélation I came looking for copper and found gold! that's my mentality for when I start reading a new novel, keep the expectatives low so if the novel s*cks I won't be dissapointed, but if it's good It'll be a pleasant surprise. This would actually make for a really good hentai so I'm giving it 10/10, wait this only has up to 5 stars... still, it was very zukhulento hail the author 👌
The MC is pathetic but at least it's realistic, he's a virgin so he sucks at s*x and thankfully he's told that and they don't have s*x for like 10 hours in a row like you see sometimes, so I have to give it a high rating. It is quite a sweet story in the end with a tsun-tsun big sister.
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