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The boy whom became greatest Blacksmith with cheat!
"If I not a hero, at least I'm a MC of my life! F*** you hero!"
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Écrire un avisA relaxing read, no stress! OP unconventional isekai protagonist. Story has multiple PoV/Interlude chapters. Reminds me of Isekai nonbiri nouka, instead of farming it black smithing. Slave harem of multiple race (beast girl, elves, hobbit, dwarf). Soon to be kingdom building. The only problem would be grammar, spelling and flow. I would recommend getting a editor/proof reader. The story idea while not innovating, is decent enough to read.
I like the story and how the MC isn't a submissive keep him an alpha. I also like the concept of having more people joining him (hopeful for an army of mixed species girls) Good job author.
Honestly havent even read it yet, but I know this is going to be a banger since in the synopsis Author-san used whom also that cover is just great
Love it. At first the quality of the grammar suck. It went better after a few chapter , but still need an editor for a better reading experience. The story is one of the best I have read. Love the character and the world structur. Hope to read more chapters soon. Continue the good work.
I would have loved the book if the grammar and spelling where checked again. It has an interesting story with a good flow, if the author could do a rewrite and make sure spelling and grammar are correct this book could be a truly enjoyable Read.
Sadly the author never finished this story - it had a lot of potential - he started jumping a little quickly before he quit the story but its definitely worth a read.
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Even though the spelling and grammar start off a little rough it does improve as the story continues, but yes it does need a little more work. Overall though this is a very good novel and I am really hoping for more chapters.
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Spoiler de révélationYour story is great and i very much like it so please author continue the story make more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more chapters l.😂😊😊😊
I like the story and its concept and how the MC used his power to help and also for his benefit but it just sucks for it to be dropped i hope the author change his mind.
Ok, so i just started reading this and i gotta say if this is a translation its trash, if it were minor things it would be fine, but the story has little to no flow due to the word choice. I really hope it gets better but ive seen stuff like this not get any better no matter how many chapters are released its unbearable, it seems like it could be a good story too, maybe they should get an editor because i can guarantee my highschool education is enough to fix 95% of these grammar mistakes, so finding an editor probably wouldnt be that hard.
Will he save the beast kin elves and other races and the elf that needs to save her sister with 5 super beast cores will she confront him and ask and what about the older princess who wanted to go to him.
Very funny lighthearted novel, I enjoyed reading it. Comedy version of cultivation or system isekai. Especially liked the mention the world has lots of hot water haha, important detail in fantasy.
It's great exept for the whole loli thing it's almost like he's doing children witch is a little bit sick just my opinion so don't take it personal also it take to long for more chapters and is kind of a let down.
the plot and the pace of the story is great!. The English can be quite hard to understand at times but over all while substituting some words in and out it reads just fine. -Thanks look forward to reading some more.
a solid 5 star if the author give a lot more time in checking and editing this story, i kinda enjoy it but i really can't give this story a higher rating than this.
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Overgeared with supernatural cheat abilities, living in a isekai at his own pace, Mc doing his own thing while being obliviously OP, Unique actions/dialogue of support characters you got yourself a potential hit! Im a fan of the winner in life, in a slice of life. So blacksmith-san being less than 2 months in the world he's got that world almost by the ball is right up my alley. His future actions and possibilities are limitless and i love that. What makes this so great is you add little things to this story that give it spice. like his old worlds girlfriend(s) secret or maybe yandere vs stalker battle vibes in the stories future. But Is mc the lead character or is it the new isekai world the Mc. The pov changes a cool and VERY WELL DONE, but like over half the few chapters don't feature the Mc. Its cool introduce new characters & backgrounds and plot points but i feel your excited to tell you're good story and are going too fast. Spaced it out a little or make chapters longer more in-depth so it doesn't feel like a forced progression. It's okay to show mc actions & character from the view of others eyes but i like the Mc to do more himself. So I just hope the mc doesn't get lost in the plot progression too much and let his unique personality gets to be known more. I REALLY like who your characters are! Each are unique and don't feel like they just happened to be part of many others in a crowd. The dialogue is on point and reasons for the character's action are both awesome & funny. Like how Sword hero Forced summon his self into another world to escape a crazy girlfriend is priceless! Each character has likeability & could have a spin-off or side story if you choose to would work. Especially the royal family princesses & crew. Just some suggestions... I like & appreciate the hard work! I hope you mass update sometimes. You have a interesting novel! You got my power stones! Keep it up! Good Job! VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!
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