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Chapitre 1: chapter 1 : the dream

" Hello? mom! mom!" a girl rushed down the stairs running from something . She fell down the stairs and this thing was getting closer and closer " who is it ? please .." the words got stuck in her throat she couldn't speak ".. don't hurt me ". she staired up the stairs her hand was trembling , she couldn't satnd on her feet. there was a shadow and the she found a women covered in blood carrying a baby in a white bed sheet . " please don't hurt me .. please " said the girl . But the women stopped and said " I won't hurt my daughter " . Then suddenly someone stapped the women from her back...

The face wasn't clear the whole body was in black saying " Lilly Lilly" walking down the stairs in a scary way " Lilly Lilly .. l..illy l..l.. Lilly ".Then it suddenly started to reach for her face but Lily was moving to the back .." no no no .. go away " Lilly said. Then it touched her face ..


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this my first novel I hope you like it *ps : am 12yrs old*

so please don't judge my writing and am doing my best ❤❤

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