Convincing her (Jen and Lucas)

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PinkCotton

I've officially joined the shameless author bandwagon. I'm writing a novel that is mostly romcom and lighthearted. If your looking for something that will improve your mood and make you feel better about your day i'd definitely recommend this. Look at me recommending my own novel... :D Don't hesitate to review the novel, it's not an exam no one is marking your review, it will help me improve my writing and also give the story that much more exposure. Thanks ;)

LV 5

PinkCotton

Hi everyone, I have started on James and Laura's story. For those interested the story is called HER IRRESISTIBLE MANAGER. Please check it out.

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elynda

Oooo...very curiosity next scene....ohhhohhhh I so addicted to reading this story....... I think if all brother Lucas become love-dovey with best friend Jen so interaction story become so more full alive......but I hope...full hope this story happy ending and so little scene dramatically... Thank you author....your job very always great👍👍👍💝💝💝💝💝💐💐💐💐

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igue

Thanks author very good and explicitly written chapter's and the added characters are cool like to have more of James and Laura 💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟

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CailinMatthews

I have to admit that when I read the title, the synopsis and the opening chapters, I thought it was going to be a dominant vs stubborn female type of thing. For this, I'm sorry, author. I was wrong. The story is actually started pretty normal minus the backgrounds these characters have which is nice because all people are human. It doesn't matter if a person is a prodigy or a genius, we all connect. The romance is cute and realistic. I love a fantasy/daydream romance as much as the next person but it's the realistic ones that have lessons in them. All stories do but sometimes the little things are overlooked. This had both which is truly satisfying. The characters are interesting enough. I can't say much because it's as if we get to know them as they get to know each other which seems to form a major plot of the book. And I am here for it. It's easy to get into a relationship—espeically these days but using your head and not only your heart can be a challenge. I love a level-headed character. It's such a breath of fresh air. That's pretty much it. The only critique I have is to cut some corners. The descriptive narrative is good but not everything is needed to said down to the last detail. ;) Good luck on your journey!

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owotuntun

I like it😀😁😀😁😁😁😁😁😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😀😀😁😁😀😀😀😀😀😀😁😁😁😁😁😁😀😀😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😁😁😁😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀

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elynda

OMG......really amazing storyline....make me run imagination to flowing follow plot story....yess....this story really good development building story can rolling story more more attractive interested.

LV 5

fantasy_land

Another romance story worth reading! If you want fluffy cute scenes of romance in between day, I suggest you could try this one. The plot is good and developing slowly. Keeps the readers wanting for more. There are a few grammatical errors here & there but this story is too engrossing to make you notice it. Personally, I think you should use a more bright cover for attracting readers. But then again it's my personal opinion. Keep writing👍

LV 11

Everything_but_fun

Why did it have to end with Jen and lucas getting married I really expect for them to tell everyone that they are expecting a baby and experience the joy of Hellen and Diane and we don't even know if Alex and Michael relationship will progress please author add more chapters

LV 15

thebookworm

i love this story. It keeps you wanting more and it's very entertaining. You wont get bored with this, i just wish we could get a mass release.

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EternalBluePhoenix

I seriously love this story! This story is one of my all time favourites here on web novel. Jen and Lucas are such a cute pair! I recommend this novel for anyone who needs a break from all those face-slapping, revenge and evil stepmother/sister duo stories. This story is light-hearted and straightforward. If you want to lay back and enjoy some love-dovey scenes and a lot of steamy scenes with not only the MC and ML but also other characters then this story is for you. I love your work author and continue the good work! ☆

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igue

Am addicted to this novel the different characters are interesting and the suspense is cool💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟

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Ruchi_Kaur

I have started reading this novel since yesterday yet more chapters to read but this is novel is so good i can't stop myself from reading.. author keep it up!! And I will always support this novel

LV 13

krethia

So i just started reading this novel i think yesterday and as of the moment i love it already. I already caught up with the recent chapter and so far the story is really good. I thought I would not like it because I'm quite skeptic of the 'gap' but in the end I got used to it plus I think it shows a mature thinking in the relationship. This is a must read, it's a fresh type of story for those involving rich ceos and the like. Plus what I really love is the supportive family.

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serizawa

The more i read it the more i have become interested.There are no room for jealousy and proud .......wonderful family with love and caring......the most interesting in this novel is they are trusting each other loving and caring

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fbucaoto

Where to get the types of Lucas for a boyfriend? I wanna order one if there is available in the market he he he it's so lovable and so sweet . It's a rare type of guy a perfect boyfriend.

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elynda

Thanks for great story author.....I really curious and really enjoyed reading this story. I really envy with relationship main character hahaha....because to beautiful picturing relationship so warm full responsibility to understand each other.....💟💟💟💟💟

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Ketefatii_Anuch

I like how the story is easy to read that anybody at any level of reading could read and understand it. Even any elementary student can read it. Words are simple and meaningful. It gives the readers better understanding and makes it more interesting to read.Keeps reading flowing. Makes good pictures in the minds of readers. It is a great story line and Romance

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Stardustt

Good stuff! oooooooooooopppppoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooiioppppoooooooooooooojojijijijiuijkjkjiiiiiihuyutttyriyggigigigigigig I like the characters the best. Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo