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Lucky Child
Auteur: SnowAshalena
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Chapter 2: Two Encounters 5 years ago 
Overall this isn't a bad story. Despite being a one-chapter story where the poor girl becomes a rich girl in the first chapter... thus defeating the purpose of the story's title..... It's not a bad read. Check out my comments on the first chapter and feel free to add more of your insights there. Writing quality? Don't even ask, I'm being generous with the 1 star out of 5. I'm being really generous with my 1.4/5 rating, I would give a lower score because of the writing quality, but I want to at least give the author a chance.