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Chapitre 4: the children's (first) adventure

(third person)

four years later

the girls are playing in the forest near the house of the family. when the Elle was thirteen the girls decided to build a tree house so that they could have there own place.

they hated there parents, and not without reason. when the girls first arrived the 'mother', Lana was a kind and caring woman. she still is. the problem happen when Lana got pregnant. she and her husband dave needed room for the baby and pushed all three of us into one room. all three of them shared one little single bed, the sheets were washed every 28 of the month and we had one small blanket. but Ella said to the girls, "they were nice enough to take us in so we will work through this," when the baby came the girls were given a list of chores to complete every day and yet Elle said the same thing. three months after the baby was born Dave told them that food was costing too much so the would only have two meals a day and no snacks and yet Elle said "they were nice enough to take us in so we will work through this," sadly they did not stop there they continued to give the girls more work then they could handle well balancing the school work. Dave said "if you must drop out of school but you must never fall behind on your chores. Lana thought that this was enough so she went to dave and he said to her "you ungrateful bitch," he then continually punched her, till she blacked out.

afterwards, when Dave went out he reminded everyone that dinner was to be on the table by 6:30. right after he left the girls ran to Lana and helped her, the nursed her. after she was better two weeks later Lana came to them, she told them she was pregnant again and that the child survived the beating her husband gave her, the girls then forged a plan. in the middle of the night, they snuck Lana out and into the tree house where she lived the girls brought her food and water and continued to update the tree house. they then continued to hide Lana until the baby was a year old. then they would leave her on the tree house and would come back as much as they could.

now, this was no ordinary tree house. it had clean running water, electricity, heating. AC, a computer and a pile of tec Ella, Emma, and Lilly made. also, Tesa and Rayn would watch the child. the child was named Amy and with the six girls watching Amy she has never been alone. the tree house was not far from the girls home and on an abandoned property but Ella assured them that no one would go one it.

(Ella's point of view)

"Elle look, look" yells Lilly and Emma happily,

"what is it you to," I respond

"someone is on this property," says Emma

"what, Emma grab Lilly and Amy I'll climb the tree to see who it is," I tell them

Emma grabs the children and hides in the back of our tree fort.

I look out only to see someone. I don't know who they are but I recognize them. I look again and see another woman come over and start talking, "did you hear what happened to Lana and the girls," says one with dark black hair.

"Have you heard what happened to Amy," says the other woman asks.

"what happened to her," says the first woman.

"she was captured too, there aren't many agents left, we need the kids, there is no chose left, we have to pull them in, even though they are so young, don't you agree Kyla," says the second woman.

"are you sure, Elsa," says the woman named Kyla reluctantly

"do we have a choice," responds Elsa sadly

"let's call in Lana, she may have left but we have to wait till Elle is at least 18, Lana is our last agent but we don't have a choice," says Kyla,

Elsa sighs and the stats"fine but can we trust dave,"

"we don't have a chose, do we," sighs Kyla.

"Emma come here," I whisper

"what is it," whispers Emma when she gets to the window.

"them, do you recognize any of them," I ask her,

she has to know something we need some information to go on

"that's..." says Emma

and them baby Amy starts to scream,

"shit" I mutter.

the two women look up and then Emma yells

"Mommy,"


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there should be another chapter this or next week depends on how I feel. I did just recover from a concussion so I hope to be posting more. I also have a trip next week so I will not post as much but I will try but here you go for now

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