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Story is nice just need the chapters to be updated frequently well that's about that no .........................................................................................................................................
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Well, till now there are only few to none changes from previous version so looking forward to see updated story-line. Will update my review as it is based on old version as of now.
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Story is nice just need the chapters to be updated frequently well that's about that no .........................................................................................................................................
Need more chapters............................................................................................................................................................................
Well, till now there are only few to none changes from previous version so looking forward to see updated story-line. Will update my review as it is based on old version as of now.
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Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.