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Otaku_Fanfic_4722

muy buena hitoria[img=recomendar] ....................................................................... Espero con ansias el siguiente capitulo

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haakuman

Good story but I personally don’t like it. He’s weaker than he should be. It seems like Zenkai boosts do little or nothing and he doesn’t take advantage of this trait + senzu beans to power up.

4yr
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PUERKO_Senpai

the idea of ​​raditz being the protagonist is very good, but I don't understand how the author tries to make him weak; With all the knowledge that the reincarnated protagonist has, in all those years that he spent training with kami he could have used them better, such as giving shi** to dr. brief in exchange for a gravity room or request it to shen long, he could have traveled to yadrat or metamor to train in his techniques, visit the great patriot .......

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ManGanu

For me nice story dragon ball to waste my time 🤣🤣🤣 5c5ffttfudtudd6gyf87yhug87d7yss6s6e6w5wwdrtdfu8uxgxfittgifgiytre6y3asyfuugg9v8u7fdicuyh8ffy88dy8fugcgggficiggffticicuxttdruruzdtxigfhgduuggihgggg

4yr
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Jhonathan_Carrasco

I love this story with its setting,plot,characters,and main idea. My favorite character in dragon ball z would have to be Raditz,I just hated that they got rid of him that quick in the manga and anime. I love this story please keep it up.

4yr
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Jhonathan_Carrasco

I love this story with its setting,plot charactersand main idea of the story. I like raditz as a character and with he didn't diez in the anime and manga.

4yr
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Piotr_Uklejewski

******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************

4yr
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6ix6ix

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4yr
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5yr
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ravendxd

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5yr
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RadicalHuman02

I am rather intrigued by the concept of this story. But it seems the main character often forgets that he was reincarnated which is slightly upsetting.

5yr
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crywolfseven

I have been binge reading this story since I got off work this afternoon. I am truly loving it, I mean a few things early on were minor plot holes but all in all this is a truly amazing story so far

5yr
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IghorDias

Uma ótima fanfic, comecei a ler ser proposito e terminei em uma noite! Estou ancioso para os proximos capitulos... Por favor continue! *-* Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap ....!!!!

5yr
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Chronos1

This novel is great...its now my second greatest dbs..dbz novel to reread over and over...I practically binged read everything in three days.. It would be awesome to see more updates of this and see how far it actually goes into story development and to see non canon and canon characters appear

5yr
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Whiteel

Thanks for admin always for update be fighting............................ ......................................................................................................................................................be healthy

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5yr
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Melshan

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5yr
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Sirione

Good!!!..................................................................................................................................................

5yr
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ChakrasTiger

It's a very good story so far the only complaint I have is that some important parts are skipped besides that very good story keep up the good work.

5yr
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InsertPenNameHere

This is really well done. The storyline is the right level of different, but still close enough to the original that you appreciate the time and effort the author is putting into this novel while paying tribute to the original.

5yr
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jesusguero25

This novel is great it needs to up there in the 100's. It has an acceptable release rate. Strongly recommend. We want more chapters so give your stones.

5yr
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Kurosis

This fan pic is great!!! I've read loads of dbf fan pics but none of them have the post picolo and pre freeze sagas. the best part? the author isn't scared to mix it up a little the MC natural changes how things pay out and is comfortable with it(still cautious enough not to be on powerful peoples radar like beers or any god for that matter). Auther love what u did with goku this version is so much better than the rest wish this version could be in the anime oh and love the length of the chapters not too long or too short right in the sweet spot =) Anyways thanks for writing this i look forward to reading more plz don't drop most dbf fan fics drop around chapter 30ish

5yr
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draykan

My own first review. Man this is tough, guess all that can be said is check it out. This story is one persons journey through the world of Dragon Ball and how far he can go as the Saiyan Raditz

5yr
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Otaku_Fanfic_4722

muy buena hitoria[img=recomendar] ....................................................................... Espero con ansias el siguiente capitulo

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1yr
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Double_Panda

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4yr
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haakuman

Good story but I personally don’t like it. He’s weaker than he should be. It seems like Zenkai boosts do little or nothing and he doesn’t take advantage of this trait + senzu beans to power up.

4yr
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PUERKO_Senpai

the idea of ​​raditz being the protagonist is very good, but I don't understand how the author tries to make him weak; With all the knowledge that the reincarnated protagonist has, in all those years that he spent training with kami he could have used them better, such as giving shi** to dr. brief in exchange for a gravity room or request it to shen long, he could have traveled to yadrat or metamor to train in his techniques, visit the great patriot .......

4yr
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ManGanu

For me nice story dragon ball to waste my time 🤣🤣🤣 5c5ffttfudtudd6gyf87yhug87d7yss6s6e6w5wwdrtdfu8uxgxfittgifgiytre6y3asyfuugg9v8u7fdicuyh8ffy88dy8fugcgggficiggffticicuxttdruruzdtxigfhgduuggihgggg

4yr
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Jhonathan_Carrasco

I love this story with its setting,plot,characters,and main idea. My favorite character in dragon ball z would have to be Raditz,I just hated that they got rid of him that quick in the manga and anime. I love this story please keep it up.

4yr
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Jhonathan_Carrasco

I love this story with its setting,plot charactersand main idea of the story. I like raditz as a character and with he didn't diez in the anime and manga.

4yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Piotr_Uklejewski

******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************

4yr
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6ix6ix

Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet

4yr
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TurtleManiacc

MORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MORE

5yr
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ravendxd

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5yr
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RadicalHuman02

I am rather intrigued by the concept of this story. But it seems the main character often forgets that he was reincarnated which is slightly upsetting.

5yr
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crywolfseven

I have been binge reading this story since I got off work this afternoon. I am truly loving it, I mean a few things early on were minor plot holes but all in all this is a truly amazing story so far

5yr
Voir 4 Réponses
IghorDias

Uma ótima fanfic, comecei a ler ser proposito e terminei em uma noite! Estou ancioso para os proximos capitulos... Por favor continue! *-* Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap ....!!!!

5yr
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Chronos1

This novel is great...its now my second greatest dbs..dbz novel to reread over and over...I practically binged read everything in three days.. It would be awesome to see more updates of this and see how far it actually goes into story development and to see non canon and canon characters appear

5yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Whiteel

Thanks for admin always for update be fighting............................ ......................................................................................................................................................be healthy

Spoiler de révélation
5yr
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Melshan

Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém

5yr
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Sirione

Good!!!..................................................................................................................................................

5yr
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ChakrasTiger

It's a very good story so far the only complaint I have is that some important parts are skipped besides that very good story keep up the good work.

5yr
Voir 0 Réponses
InsertPenNameHere

This is really well done. The storyline is the right level of different, but still close enough to the original that you appreciate the time and effort the author is putting into this novel while paying tribute to the original.

5yr
Voir 0 Réponses
jesusguero25

This novel is great it needs to up there in the 100's. It has an acceptable release rate. Strongly recommend. We want more chapters so give your stones.

5yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Kurosis

This fan pic is great!!! I've read loads of dbf fan pics but none of them have the post picolo and pre freeze sagas. the best part? the author isn't scared to mix it up a little the MC natural changes how things pay out and is comfortable with it(still cautious enough not to be on powerful peoples radar like beers or any god for that matter). Auther love what u did with goku this version is so much better than the rest wish this version could be in the anime oh and love the length of the chapters not too long or too short right in the sweet spot =) Anyways thanks for writing this i look forward to reading more plz don't drop most dbf fan fics drop around chapter 30ish

5yr
Voir 1 Réponses
draykan

My own first review. Man this is tough, guess all that can be said is check it out. This story is one persons journey through the world of Dragon Ball and how far he can go as the Saiyan Raditz

5yr
Voir 4 Réponses