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This didn’t really change much from the first time. I’m not sure if it’s the author or something but I still don’t like this Mc and System……………..
I really hope you continue this or redo it as this is the best book of the arrow verse I have seen and read but I get it if you don't, I hope you make more books as you seem like you got good ideas and you know how to use them to make people like your book
The only bad thing with this story, in my opinion, is the fact that there are slow updates and the conversations are pretty bland and make me want to cringe. Things like "Hi Alex." "Hi, Cisco." It ruins the story for me personally. Other than that, good job author!!
this story is good and I'm looking forward for more chapters or the remake and how the story will progress. please keep up the good work cuz I don't want see this dropped.
Are you dropping this please dont its a good story please dont drop this story. .
It’s good if u do ever remake it and go with super girl as is girl and only girl no harem he should only share his secret with her and make it a small more intimate they feel like only friends also have him stay in super girl for a while and only come back at the final fight between Flash and reverse
The thing you could do with the mc in the next book is have him going to Kara's world only when he remembers that she really needs the back up but the rest of the time he should be back in his world because he will need to help there!
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man please 😭😭😭🥺🙏🥺 🥺🙏🥺🥺🙏 update more chapters I can't wait anymore it's such a awesome story please update it man
another 5 star to catch attention another 5 star to catch attention another 5 star to catch attention another 5 star to catch attention another 5 star to catch attention another 5 star to catch attention another 5 star to catch attention
Giving author another 5 star review to catch their attention, where r u at. Also remember supernatural is part of dc universe set on another earth Also smallville and lucifer, could have mc accidentally jump to smallville when he was still in school have him be a teacher etc
I think its a very good story. It has an amazing story line and good characters but it takes like 2-3 months for 2 updates while it says you would give 2-3 updates every week. I think every thing is good but it would be better if you would give consistent updates.
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I like everything about this fanfic....this is one of the best DC fanfic I've read so far...Keep it up Author, you are doing a great job!!!!
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Me again couple suggestions for future chapters. I'd write myself if I was any good but I'm not. 1 when system is fully repaired give him a meta human ability so when the rest see Barry's speed it explain what his ability is - could be ability to temporarily take away abilities/ on condition that he defeats them or something 2 have him make a deal with ra's al ghul, in exchange for not destroying any cities for few hundred years, forgiving malcolm merlyn and for training him and arrow team he kills damien dark. This would stop alot of theplot of arrow example thea queen dying 3 he makes some deal with RIP hunter, he takes away vandalism savages immortality giving him chance to kill him, needs to be at certain point during what would be legends of tomorrow so they can team up or something
Hi writer I made a complaint about you for bullying. I dont know if this is considered a great novel for others but i love it and its pissing me off that you dropped it. Either get another at least decent writer to continue writing or keep writing it yourself
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
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It's not a bad novel..................................................................................................................................
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Slow and repetitive with quite a bit of nerving and from the looks of the reviews author likes to delete low rated ones. I extremely doubt that I'm the only person to dislike this.
Very good.When next chapter? -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Love it don't drop it please, can't wait for traing the flash. At one point have all flashes together, flash phantom kid flash female one and that old one. Change the costumes they where stupid the goggles and nothing else to hide identity. Only one hidden on show is the flash rest facial recognition could figure out easily who they are. Then again no ones done that for superman or girl
This is absolutely terrible it doesn’t have an ounce of character development and the system just makes the power system confusing and overpowered.
This didn’t really change much from the first time. I’m not sure if it’s the author or something but I still don’t like this Mc and System……………..
I really hope you continue this or redo it as this is the best book of the arrow verse I have seen and read but I get it if you don't, I hope you make more books as you seem like you got good ideas and you know how to use them to make people like your book
The only bad thing with this story, in my opinion, is the fact that there are slow updates and the conversations are pretty bland and make me want to cringe. Things like "Hi Alex." "Hi, Cisco." It ruins the story for me personally. Other than that, good job author!!
this story is good and I'm looking forward for more chapters or the remake and how the story will progress. please keep up the good work cuz I don't want see this dropped.
Are you dropping this please dont its a good story please dont drop this story. .
It’s good if u do ever remake it and go with super girl as is girl and only girl no harem he should only share his secret with her and make it a small more intimate they feel like only friends also have him stay in super girl for a while and only come back at the final fight between Flash and reverse
The thing you could do with the mc in the next book is have him going to Kara's world only when he remembers that she really needs the back up but the rest of the time he should be back in his world because he will need to help there!
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Spoiler de révélation man please 😭😭😭🥺🙏🥺 🥺🙏🥺🥺🙏 update more chapters I can't wait anymore it's such a awesome story please update it man
another 5 star to catch attention another 5 star to catch attention another 5 star to catch attention another 5 star to catch attention another 5 star to catch attention another 5 star to catch attention another 5 star to catch attention
Giving author another 5 star review to catch their attention, where r u at. Also remember supernatural is part of dc universe set on another earth Also smallville and lucifer, could have mc accidentally jump to smallville when he was still in school have him be a teacher etc
I think its a very good story. It has an amazing story line and good characters but it takes like 2-3 months for 2 updates while it says you would give 2-3 updates every week. I think every thing is good but it would be better if you would give consistent updates.
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(-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩___-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩)(-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩___-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩)(-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩___-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩)(-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩___-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩)(-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩___-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩)
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I like everything about this fanfic....this is one of the best DC fanfic I've read so far...Keep it up Author, you are doing a great job!!!!
Great novel .............................................................................................................................................................................................................EXP................................................................................
Spoiler de révélation Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaáaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Me again couple suggestions for future chapters. I'd write myself if I was any good but I'm not. 1 when system is fully repaired give him a meta human ability so when the rest see Barry's speed it explain what his ability is - could be ability to temporarily take away abilities/ on condition that he defeats them or something 2 have him make a deal with ra's al ghul, in exchange for not destroying any cities for few hundred years, forgiving malcolm merlyn and for training him and arrow team he kills damien dark. This would stop alot of theplot of arrow example thea queen dying 3 he makes some deal with RIP hunter, he takes away vandalism savages immortality giving him chance to kill him, needs to be at certain point during what would be legends of tomorrow so they can team up or something
Hi writer I made a complaint about you for bullying. I dont know if this is considered a great novel for others but i love it and its pissing me off that you dropped it. Either get another at least decent writer to continue writing or keep writing it yourself
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
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................................................................................................................................................Time To Drop this Book
Spoiler de révélation It's not a bad novel..................................................................................................................................
Spoiler de révélation Slow and repetitive with quite a bit of nerving and from the looks of the reviews author likes to delete low rated ones. I extremely doubt that I'm the only person to dislike this.
Very good.When next chapter? -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Love it don't drop it please, can't wait for traing the flash. At one point have all flashes together, flash phantom kid flash female one and that old one. Change the costumes they where stupid the goggles and nothing else to hide identity. Only one hidden on show is the flash rest facial recognition could figure out easily who they are. Then again no ones done that for superman or girl
This is absolutely terrible it doesn’t have an ounce of character development and the system just makes the power system confusing and overpowered.