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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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The story has a slow start so far and nothing within the first few chapter makes me care for the characters so far. I feel a bit lost in the plot as events seen to happen but it's hard to tell why or when. Overall, it seems too much is happening but not much to care for.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
The story has a slow start so far and nothing within the first few chapter makes me care for the characters so far. I feel a bit lost in the plot as events seen to happen but it's hard to tell why or when. Overall, it seems too much is happening but not much to care for.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.