Devolved: Path Of The Beast(novel is being rewritten)

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god_of_wheat

After reading 25+ chapters of this story I can finally get a proper review of it. it starts of quite well, slowly building up towards the peak at around the dungeon part. I love how to story flows and how the character gets op, but it seemed to go too fast for the explained power system in my eyes. HOWEVER, I now feel it will open up much more, giving the character a real 'video game' start. The humor gives me a good chuckle and laugh from time to time, and seeing how the Mc changes (mentally and physically) could have been executed to an even better degree, but was still satisfying. as for the world, I am VERY satisfied by how much detail is being put into the different animals and species of 'Farleng'. The grammar has gotten better, but I still find minor things here and there. I hope to see some progress and development from our Mc and his companion, and romance would maybe ad a sort of balancing element for the story as a whole. Can't wait to see more. (This novel deserves to be much higher than it should be. It it truly is a *hidden gem* in my eyes) Keep it up author!

5yr 6

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LV 5

Hahadavis

Dropped after the Mc who had a strong soul couldn't even get rid of the weak kid's soul and had to agree to some conditions with him....... Then signed a contract with the enemy who killed his body's parents after the author put plotarmor on the antagonist to make the fight longer REALLY smh!

5yr 4

LV 5

StenDuring

This review is part of a review swap and valid as of chapter 38. We have a big chunk of litrpg here. Status displays in your face every other page. This site (Webnovel) it most definitely a horrible place to publish this kind of story -- it's no fault of the author's. Suddenly the story is broken by a status display, and it's not formatted in a way that is forgiving on the eyes. Sadly it makes it all hard to read. The story follows the standard; die badly at earth, have a chat with a godlike being and get transported/reincarnated in a world with a game system. Memories from past life intact. It also belong in the horribly overpowered main character department. I don't like that, but I won't allow that to colour this review. The same goes for my general dislike of litrpg. The first 20 or so chapters depict a rather mindless slaughter sliced with a little story. Basically we're having an orgy of levelling up and huge chunks of infodumps hidden in status displays and ability information displays. After that the remaining part of the first volume follows a plotline where the main character gains a partner and experience an adventure, which eventually ends in another slaughter scene. The second volume is still in its beginning. There are elements of a magic academy style of story, and what could, or could not, be the extreme beginnings of a romance sub story. This part is in the extremely early phase, so I honestly don't know. If you love watching numerical data for your main hero, then here's your treat. Rest assured you'll never miss out on a single detail on an ability gained. If that's not your cup of tea, well stay away. Now for the stars. Writing: Four stars. It's a good read (if you like status displays) but it's executed with sloppy grammar and spelling. Updates: Five stars. The frequency of updates is simply insane. Story: Four stars. No matter if you like litrpg or not, massive chunks of status displays and info dumps in the form of ability descriptions grinds the story progression to a halt. Apart from that you have a good dungeon-crawl. Think Blizzard's game Diablo in words. Character: Five stars. There's a lot more than merely status displays and abilities here. This far in the story there are only two real characters, but they're both well fleshed out. World: Four stars. I've taken the stance that dungeoncrawling is the bloody version of a vacation in hell, and that is supposed to be a good thing in this kind of story. I refuse to hand out the fifth star, because I'm unable to see the details of the world through the spray of blood and brain substance filling my vision whenever I take a look. Lastly, if you get your kicks from brainless slaughter, look no further. It's all here.

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5yr 4

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LV 6

Earthshaker34

it is a great novel with a great author who reads comments and actually cares about his readers. the story is good, grammar is great as well with only occasional typos but that is nothing that can't be fixed. characters possess their own identity and are not there for the sake of it. stability of updates is great as well with chapters out on every day. Would i recommend this story? Absolutely.

5yr 3

LV 4

StressedByHW

The story is pretty good and the others are decent but I can’t read any longer since I’m not a fan of novels which mc works with someone who killed his loved one even if the enemy can revive the love one just not a fan but for others could be different

5yr 2

LV 5

AnthonyCerbic

I was alarmed when on transmigration the hero was offered "any" power, and sure enough, my fears came true. Expect senseless OP powerspiking non-stop, Korean-style. No balance, not even meager hint of struggle or feeling that MC is in danger. Up and Up, and Up, boosting stats and collecting skills like post stamps. If you are into shameless plot armor and constant winning of everything on your way - you might enjoy this.

5yr 2

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LV 10

DJRogue

Firstly this is the first time I have read a game role-playing type novel. It was an eye-opener for me. Good thing I like playing slash and kill type games (^_^). I felt like I was reading Diablo (the game) in a novel, but since I adored the game, I enjoyed the story. Some might find the book a bit on the gory side, but well this is a dungeon type role-playing game novel, don't know anyone who has ever entered a dungeon in a game and not had to slash and kill their way through. The game screen's that come up in the novel can be jarring but that is no mistake of the author, that is the limitation of using webnovel's platform - and the author should not be held accountable for it. All in all, if you like slash and kill with a side dish of gore and brains, then this is definitely a story to read. If you are a sensitive reader, then maybe you should find something different.

5yr 2

LV 13

Anone

Okay, I love this novel, I do. But the MC is annoying. There's been so many character change for him that I have no idea who or what he is. For someone who came from earth, even if he had a life as hard as he got, he should know better than to solve every problem with violence. There's no meaningful attachment to give the main character a sense of humanity. While he's character is well written and developed, he still comes off as bland. And hypocritical. The last person he should trust was that crazy elf, yet he does. He refuses to form an connection in the name of being betrayed by people, which is to say he looks down on people. Doing The same thing he complains about. Well written and with an exquisite world building, but to be honest I have no idea what the end game is. All he does is follow the direction of a person he knew killed his mother and then act like the rest of the world doesn't exist. Seriously! He's in a new world, he's supposed to explore, fall in love, get a harem, break records and build kingdoms. But 60+ chapters in and the only meaningful thing he has done is get stronger and hatch a duck. For a story so fast paced, this is incredibly slow. (Plus I'm a little tired of cliche anti villains without a shred of common sense. He's suppose to connect with this world, the evil elf can not be the only one capable of helping him.) But my rant aside. The story and the detail put into it is amazing. Though there are a few grammatical errors, it's negligible and does not hinder the flow of the story. Keep u the good work.

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5yr 2

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LV 5

Chryiss

After 20 chapters, I can ascertain that despite frequent misspellings and grammatical errors, you write quite well! It is very descriptive, so I can easily imagine Michael moving around. I still do recommend to proofread as sometimes the mistakes can be off-putting when trying to immerse myself in the story. With such nice writing otherwise, the technical errors are such a shame really! The grammar mistakes are typically sentence fragments, too; if that’s of any help. The DNA absorption idea is very unique; it’s my first time reading such a story! So I applaud you for that! Now, I will say it does seem rather OP, but I don’t mind that all too much personally. What does somewhat bother me is Michael. He’s a pretty good MC except for the fact that he’s TOO calm. As a human, and a young 15 year-old at that, I don’t rationally see how he can accept his body changing so much. I would think he would lose some sense of self or humanity, but he’s totally fine. For instance, at first he doesn’t want to change his appearance too much, so he doesn’t want a tail. But then shortly after he decides to have a tail... Overall though, good work! Keep it up! :)

5yr 2

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LV 11

MajestyGloxinia

Hello there fellow Author! I like the premise of your book! There are some grammatical errors in your writing ( past tense to present tense fallacy, misplaced apostrophes next to 's' ending nouns ). However, the thoughts you want to convey are crystal clear! The story is very descriptive ( though need some editing, try adding more onomatopoeia and make sure to separate it from the dialogue ), and I can see good development with your MC! ( Despite reading only 5 chapters ) Keep writing! I hope you improve more, I can totally see your passion for writing and for the story! Good luck!

5yr 2

LV 4

Jamison_C

Reviewing with the latest chapter in mind. Spelling needs to be improved. Readability is fine in general. Close to 80% of the paragraphs are easy to read. Author's strength lies in his vocabulary and thus variation in sentence variety. No long or choppy sentences can be found in CH 42 and the overall weaving of the sentences presents a nuanced feel. While passive voice is kept low, close to 50 adverbs were used throughout ch 42. One adverb for every fifty words seems high but that is just my opinion. All the best!

5yr 2

LV 10

lets_get_this_rice

(Ignore shameless 5star review) Hope whoever finds this novel has an enjoyable time reading it! Originally wished to improve my grammar, but I really got into writing the story. I'll be happy to hear if there is something which could be improved, as I want to become a better writer!

5yr 2

LV 4

god_of_wheat

LOVE it! A combination of all the genre's I live for. Plot Is very thick. grammar is improving. Well written characters. Detailed. And lastly THE FIGHTING IS GODLY

5yr 2

LV 14

CaptKay

I can't believe I haven't reviewed this book. It's as good as oxygen. Got me addicted and satisfied. However, your updating pattern is really discouraging nowadays. In all, it's a great story to follow up on.

5yr 1

LV 10

goobypee

Really amazing book, good story line and great characters. Although too many spelling mistakes in each chapter got quite annoying to read. But otherwise a great book.

5yr 1

LV 14

CaptKay

So far, this book has been ultimately engaging. Wow! No dull moments, action packed all the way. Well done Author. For me I feel like the book shouldn't end and it should be released twice a day. I'm always on the lookout for out, anxiously waiting for the next chapters.

5yr 1

LV 11

Jumpe

good going ................................................................................................................. .....................................................................................................................................................

5yr 1

LV 11

SouthToiletWizard

If you are a fan of litrpg and unfathomable stomachs, give it a read. Typical of the genre an OP system is put inside the mc's head by a mad god prior to a migration to a new world. A great time sink and a fun read.

5yr 1