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jersler
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Ive read the Novel till Chapter 1972 and will continue to read it. I think its just amazing and you should really give it a try :D I hope the Author will continue writing it because you cant find such a World Emvironment anywhere else. Also the MC Micheal is really good written :3

3yr
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Draconiain

I like this story a lot but something needs to change the point of privilege is we read ahead a set number of chapters for a price top privilege for the month is 50 chapters for nearly 2000 coins and you put out a little over 30 for Jan 2025 I understand things come up but the privilege price need to lower if you can't keep up with what is offered

18d
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SerpentiCat

Oh good gosh, this thing is still updating?! I still remember how horrendous it was to read.

19d
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Moyer
LV 14 Badge

Grammer make this unreadable, even with the newly edited chapters

19d
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hpoddar

the story is good but the writing style is bad. I have read it till around 4200 chaps. but the author keeps adding unnecessary 'twenty two and seventeen seconds' or 'six and half hours' ..... for all the things which seems to be added to increase word count and make the scenario seem idiotic. the mc is depicted as a half hour idiot, never a full one. he cooks in something and half hour, he sleeps for something and half hour, he studies for something and half hour, he makes breakthrough in something and half hour, he completes fights in something and half minutes, maybe he even shits in something and half seconds. total irritating. also his psychology is wierd. always goes around saying I will do anything to live and then goes and get caught in some cult shit 'jist to save others' and then at the end after saving them and having officials capture them for investigation says I pity them and hopefully they will be safe, like wtf. and another major issue is with the speaker pov as the novel is first person based, so the pov is not always very clear and the story becomes confusing.

24d
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phatlarry

Poorly written and protagonist becomes sadist out nowhere around chapter 358.

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29d
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Wold_Verna

I really like monster.Integration and something.I see that I don't really like is that I've just started on the first few 100 chapters of monster integration and there's never any guns in there.Even though guns are a perfect weapon that probably would be better weapons and bows before using bows in stay, I do like.This

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1mth
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Guyns_Ike

A Disappointing Waste of Potential To the author: you had the opportunity to craft a fantastic story, but sadly, you squandered it. Spoiler Alert: This book titled Monster Integration promises an exciting premise where humans gain power by bonding with monsters. However, midway through, we discover that this integration is practically pointless—people on the Central Continent don’t even practice it. The protagonist (MC) had the potential to be truly unique. He can create his own inheritance and is supposedly powerful. Yet in every fight, the author inexplicably portrays him as weak and ineffective. Instead of utilizing his vast knowledge and skills, his sole aim seems to be absorbing the Grimm's essence—like a vampire thirsting for blood. Even after mastering advanced combat techniques and undergoing intense training, he repeatedly falls short in battle. Worse, the narrative constantly bemoans his lack of proper fighting techniques, despite all his training and achievements. The MC's supposed strengths feel superficial. He excels at torturing himself, cooking, and bathing—oh, and he trains endlessly, though the story rarely shows any meaningful payoff from it. Accompanying the MC are three incredibly powerful companions: two monsters and a hidden being. Despite their immense strength, they are relegated to the shadows, unable to assist him even during critical life-and-death battles. Their potential, much like the story itself, feels utterly wasted. The book also falters in its depiction of relationships. One moment, the MC is focused on getting stronger; the next, he’s distracted by someone’s appearance or shallow romantic thoughts. This inconsistency detracts from the narrative and makes character development feel hollow. Even the core concept of monster integration is poorly handled. In the beginning, the MC was dismissed from joining higher ranked organisations for being able to only integrate with one weak monster, as higher ranks typically allowed more integrations. His first monster that was originally weak supposedly took that opportunity permanently. However, later in the novel, when he "births" a new monster, this once-important limitation is conveniently forgotten, leaving a glaring inconsistency in the plot. Despite his first monster companion having fire-based abilities and achieving high levels of fire comprehension, the MC never uses fire meaningfully. They’re integrated, yet the MC can’t access or utilize her moves. In summary, this novel is a frustrating waste of time. The premise held promise, but poor execution, inconsistent character development, and a lack of coherent world-building make it a disappointing read. Save yourself the trouble and skip this one.

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1mth
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Prabhas_Pahadi_8899

You idiot of a writer, why the pace of story is so slow?,if you don't have interest please don't write in such to waste our time. I started to read from the first chapter, I don't get it why you have to explain every point in fight, you can be true to the plot and add other extras but not you just have to waste your time to write is it to make extra long so you can earn more money, I don't get it but make me sad reading this novel of some stupid writer

1mth
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John_0
LV 12 Badge

The writing is atrocious. The author doesn't seem to realize that they can rewrite and edit what they have written. The first 20 or so chapters are especially egregious and actively detract from the story. 0/10 for execution.

4mth
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tota
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I enjoy reading it, enough said. If the translation was better it would be in the top 20 if not not 10 instead of the top 50 it is at now.

5mth
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SHADOW_AND_LIGHT

hello, Can you review my book----------------------------------------------------------------THE PART OF NO RETURN : FIRST HUMAN EMPIRE------------------------------ Please

5mth
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light_the_fox

could barely read this do to the grammar in this story needs some major edits at least for English unsure if its correct in other languages but English definitely not

5mth
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ALEXDJ

I don't know if you are reading this or not, but bro, the writer, can you tell me why the first person pov? 100% If the novel was in third person and had a narrator instead of MC's own thoughts, the ranking of this novel would be much higher and the readers would increase many times. It's really a shame. I think if I give the novel itself a score of 7.5/10, but when MC explains everything, the score of the novel will be 4/10. good luck Of course, if the novel is rewritten from the beginning in the third person, it will be very good. in a dream

5mth
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AidanCaesar

First, why did the non-privileged chapter release change? They are still releasing chapters but we can’t read them apparently. I like the book. It’s different from others in a lot of novel ways. Even if it has grammar errors and translation quirks, it is easily understandable. Way better than a lot of those mtl novels out there (though with AI, they are getting better). Main character always gets out of scrapes, but that’s every novel. And there are certainly many repetitive story arcs, but that’s a genre thing. And they are usually at least somewhat different. I didn’t like the weird teacher romance, but other novels are way worse. At least there are always new scenarios that keep it interesting and the greater world building is also more well-done and complex than many novels. I recommend.

5mth
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free_life

the story overall is readable, but it's very frustrating: 1 - starting with his first pet, and only one, in this story the first pet decide your talent your maximum level your speed of development, and here we find our MC chosing the weakest monster outthere as his starting one while having the choice of much much better ones, which limited him to a specialist and with the wickest talent. i read till 500 ch and to me if he chose anyother pet and used the ressources wasted on the current one he would have become OP, but no the mc should be a weakling. 2 - the moment he met his crush he started simping to her no dignity no nothing. so read at your risk

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6mth
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Chr_Rok
LV 12 Badge

Didn't get far before I had to drop this. But I still feel I have been generous with the stars. So, the reason I had to drop this book is primarily the grammar, but also the way the author writes generally. If you can look past obvious mistakes every few lines and what feels like a 14 year pokemon fanfic go nuts. Also, how the hell can you claim chapters are editted when even the first chapter is full of mistakes .. so gl reading this, and if you get past my highest chapter read: ffs get some standards !

6mth
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Aaron_Remotigue

Full of typing errors, wrong grammar, inconsistent information(especially on the current level of characters)

6mth
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ReneConrad

Please someone tell me that the writing is going to get better after chapter 1000? 🙏🏻🙏🏻 How is it possible that even after 1000 chapter, the writing quality is not improving? 🫠 The story is great, but man, I really wish it would have a better grammar.

6mth
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rana5044

Even since MC learned healing It's just copy paste & repeat everytime MC helps someone using his own resources that person will get some kind hidden potential unlock than. MC get trapped or caputred than breakthrough and escape just repeat it every few chapters.

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6mth
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Hardric_Tigre

este é um daqueles poucos livros que cria um gênero proprio, se tiver que escolher entre meus 3 livros favoritos com certeza será este. não é um romance clichê que o personagem ganha tudo automaticamente, ou se torna super forte do dia pra noite e sai solando tudo inclusive aliados. resumindo tem um mundo incrivel e personagem que ajudam a moldar estes cenários.

6mth
Voir 1 Réponses
Viktor_Zabrowski

Beside the obvious, grammar; lack of reasonable motivation; and redundant leveling system, the story still suck. There fight are boring and just overall torturous to read. The story might get better, but from what I see it take 1000 chapter. Good luck if you decide to read.

7mth
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Mr_Mortal

The story is quite good it's worth reading. But only if you are ready to experience a very badly written story. First grammar was bad then the author started writing wrong names of characters like around ch550 MC' s love interests was introduced named Rachel. She is the sister of MC's friend's girlfriend named Sarah . This writer wrote Sarah's name at many places where he should have written Rachel. After all those mindf*cks I am still reading this. I don't know why

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8mth
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Hedin
LV 3 Badge

Interesting world, decent characters, REPETITIVE. Everyone treats MC like trash, even when he brings top organizations multiple golden geeze and proves himself better, then their top tallents.Things are not getting any better.

8mth
Voir 1 Réponses
Jainam_Jain_3083

The speed of the story is a little slow, but the character and the world are written with lots of thought, and I hope to read the novel till its last chapter

8mth
Voir 1 Réponses
killrd3m0n_213

I just want to ask if Ellen or Jim are gonna come back in the story? Anwan, please respond.

8mth
Voir 1 Réponses
Krishna_Gautam_3285

The novel is really really good. Yah the grammer and sentences are quite troublesome but its not that much of a headache that people are making it. I've always longed for a novel like this and yeah, i really like it.

8mth
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Veritass

I've been reading this for what feels like years now and it's still good. Solid writing, good characters, great story !

9mth
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Gavin_Lepore

Very bad spelling almost unreadable. The idea was good but the author just messed it up. 1/10

9mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Yousif

I have read 3700+ chapters, honestly I don’t recommend you reading it it’s a waste of time you might ask why I reads 3700+ chapters and not giving up until now , will the start of the story is good and the events and progress is also good but when he ascends from his home world it’s kinda boring and repetitive events , slow progression in strength, lots of grammar mistakes , no new exiting events or anything. Just - need resources> enter ruins > fight and collect resources > add some hidden projects we don’t know anything about > progress a stage and repeat ( this cycle of action is started from early chapters till now ) then recent chapters he get kidnapped every 30+ chapters. No new event nothings. I gave up on hoping for something else

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10mth
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DarkDaoist

looks like author is in a dump and can no longer think of any plot besides kidnapping and ruins exploration. you should take a break and do a world building first and them comeback. latest kidnapping is utter nonsense he saw the raiders coming so he could've simply hidden himself, not the first time he hid from sky sovereigns using forbidden energy either.

10mth
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jersler
LV 14 Badge

Ive read the Novel till Chapter 1972 and will continue to read it. I think its just amazing and you should really give it a try :D I hope the Author will continue writing it because you cant find such a World Emvironment anywhere else. Also the MC Micheal is really good written :3

3yr
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Draconiain

I like this story a lot but something needs to change the point of privilege is we read ahead a set number of chapters for a price top privilege for the month is 50 chapters for nearly 2000 coins and you put out a little over 30 for Jan 2025 I understand things come up but the privilege price need to lower if you can't keep up with what is offered

18d
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SerpentiCat

Oh good gosh, this thing is still updating?! I still remember how horrendous it was to read.

19d
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Moyer
LV 14 Badge

Grammer make this unreadable, even with the newly edited chapters

19d
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hpoddar

the story is good but the writing style is bad. I have read it till around 4200 chaps. but the author keeps adding unnecessary 'twenty two and seventeen seconds' or 'six and half hours' ..... for all the things which seems to be added to increase word count and make the scenario seem idiotic. the mc is depicted as a half hour idiot, never a full one. he cooks in something and half hour, he sleeps for something and half hour, he studies for something and half hour, he makes breakthrough in something and half hour, he completes fights in something and half minutes, maybe he even shits in something and half seconds. total irritating. also his psychology is wierd. always goes around saying I will do anything to live and then goes and get caught in some cult shit 'jist to save others' and then at the end after saving them and having officials capture them for investigation says I pity them and hopefully they will be safe, like wtf. and another major issue is with the speaker pov as the novel is first person based, so the pov is not always very clear and the story becomes confusing.

24d
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phatlarry

Poorly written and protagonist becomes sadist out nowhere around chapter 358.

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29d
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Wold_Verna

I really like monster.Integration and something.I see that I don't really like is that I've just started on the first few 100 chapters of monster integration and there's never any guns in there.Even though guns are a perfect weapon that probably would be better weapons and bows before using bows in stay, I do like.This

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1mth
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Guyns_Ike

A Disappointing Waste of Potential To the author: you had the opportunity to craft a fantastic story, but sadly, you squandered it. Spoiler Alert: This book titled Monster Integration promises an exciting premise where humans gain power by bonding with monsters. However, midway through, we discover that this integration is practically pointless—people on the Central Continent don’t even practice it. The protagonist (MC) had the potential to be truly unique. He can create his own inheritance and is supposedly powerful. Yet in every fight, the author inexplicably portrays him as weak and ineffective. Instead of utilizing his vast knowledge and skills, his sole aim seems to be absorbing the Grimm's essence—like a vampire thirsting for blood. Even after mastering advanced combat techniques and undergoing intense training, he repeatedly falls short in battle. Worse, the narrative constantly bemoans his lack of proper fighting techniques, despite all his training and achievements. The MC's supposed strengths feel superficial. He excels at torturing himself, cooking, and bathing—oh, and he trains endlessly, though the story rarely shows any meaningful payoff from it. Accompanying the MC are three incredibly powerful companions: two monsters and a hidden being. Despite their immense strength, they are relegated to the shadows, unable to assist him even during critical life-and-death battles. Their potential, much like the story itself, feels utterly wasted. The book also falters in its depiction of relationships. One moment, the MC is focused on getting stronger; the next, he’s distracted by someone’s appearance or shallow romantic thoughts. This inconsistency detracts from the narrative and makes character development feel hollow. Even the core concept of monster integration is poorly handled. In the beginning, the MC was dismissed from joining higher ranked organisations for being able to only integrate with one weak monster, as higher ranks typically allowed more integrations. His first monster that was originally weak supposedly took that opportunity permanently. However, later in the novel, when he "births" a new monster, this once-important limitation is conveniently forgotten, leaving a glaring inconsistency in the plot. Despite his first monster companion having fire-based abilities and achieving high levels of fire comprehension, the MC never uses fire meaningfully. They’re integrated, yet the MC can’t access or utilize her moves. In summary, this novel is a frustrating waste of time. The premise held promise, but poor execution, inconsistent character development, and a lack of coherent world-building make it a disappointing read. Save yourself the trouble and skip this one.

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1mth
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Prabhas_Pahadi_8899

You idiot of a writer, why the pace of story is so slow?,if you don't have interest please don't write in such to waste our time. I started to read from the first chapter, I don't get it why you have to explain every point in fight, you can be true to the plot and add other extras but not you just have to waste your time to write is it to make extra long so you can earn more money, I don't get it but make me sad reading this novel of some stupid writer

1mth
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John_0
LV 12 Badge

The writing is atrocious. The author doesn't seem to realize that they can rewrite and edit what they have written. The first 20 or so chapters are especially egregious and actively detract from the story. 0/10 for execution.

4mth
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tota
LV 5 Badge

I enjoy reading it, enough said. If the translation was better it would be in the top 20 if not not 10 instead of the top 50 it is at now.

5mth
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SHADOW_AND_LIGHT

hello, Can you review my book----------------------------------------------------------------THE PART OF NO RETURN : FIRST HUMAN EMPIRE------------------------------ Please

5mth
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light_the_fox

could barely read this do to the grammar in this story needs some major edits at least for English unsure if its correct in other languages but English definitely not

5mth
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ALEXDJ

I don't know if you are reading this or not, but bro, the writer, can you tell me why the first person pov? 100% If the novel was in third person and had a narrator instead of MC's own thoughts, the ranking of this novel would be much higher and the readers would increase many times. It's really a shame. I think if I give the novel itself a score of 7.5/10, but when MC explains everything, the score of the novel will be 4/10. good luck Of course, if the novel is rewritten from the beginning in the third person, it will be very good. in a dream

5mth
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AidanCaesar

First, why did the non-privileged chapter release change? They are still releasing chapters but we can’t read them apparently. I like the book. It’s different from others in a lot of novel ways. Even if it has grammar errors and translation quirks, it is easily understandable. Way better than a lot of those mtl novels out there (though with AI, they are getting better). Main character always gets out of scrapes, but that’s every novel. And there are certainly many repetitive story arcs, but that’s a genre thing. And they are usually at least somewhat different. I didn’t like the weird teacher romance, but other novels are way worse. At least there are always new scenarios that keep it interesting and the greater world building is also more well-done and complex than many novels. I recommend.

5mth
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free_life

the story overall is readable, but it's very frustrating: 1 - starting with his first pet, and only one, in this story the first pet decide your talent your maximum level your speed of development, and here we find our MC chosing the weakest monster outthere as his starting one while having the choice of much much better ones, which limited him to a specialist and with the wickest talent. i read till 500 ch and to me if he chose anyother pet and used the ressources wasted on the current one he would have become OP, but no the mc should be a weakling. 2 - the moment he met his crush he started simping to her no dignity no nothing. so read at your risk

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6mth
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Chr_Rok
LV 12 Badge

Didn't get far before I had to drop this. But I still feel I have been generous with the stars. So, the reason I had to drop this book is primarily the grammar, but also the way the author writes generally. If you can look past obvious mistakes every few lines and what feels like a 14 year pokemon fanfic go nuts. Also, how the hell can you claim chapters are editted when even the first chapter is full of mistakes .. so gl reading this, and if you get past my highest chapter read: ffs get some standards !

6mth
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Aaron_Remotigue

Full of typing errors, wrong grammar, inconsistent information(especially on the current level of characters)

6mth
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ReneConrad

Please someone tell me that the writing is going to get better after chapter 1000? 🙏🏻🙏🏻 How is it possible that even after 1000 chapter, the writing quality is not improving? 🫠 The story is great, but man, I really wish it would have a better grammar.

6mth
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rana5044

Even since MC learned healing It's just copy paste & repeat everytime MC helps someone using his own resources that person will get some kind hidden potential unlock than. MC get trapped or caputred than breakthrough and escape just repeat it every few chapters.

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6mth
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Hardric_Tigre

este é um daqueles poucos livros que cria um gênero proprio, se tiver que escolher entre meus 3 livros favoritos com certeza será este. não é um romance clichê que o personagem ganha tudo automaticamente, ou se torna super forte do dia pra noite e sai solando tudo inclusive aliados. resumindo tem um mundo incrivel e personagem que ajudam a moldar estes cenários.

6mth
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Viktor_Zabrowski

Beside the obvious, grammar; lack of reasonable motivation; and redundant leveling system, the story still suck. There fight are boring and just overall torturous to read. The story might get better, but from what I see it take 1000 chapter. Good luck if you decide to read.

7mth
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Mr_Mortal

The story is quite good it's worth reading. But only if you are ready to experience a very badly written story. First grammar was bad then the author started writing wrong names of characters like around ch550 MC' s love interests was introduced named Rachel. She is the sister of MC's friend's girlfriend named Sarah . This writer wrote Sarah's name at many places where he should have written Rachel. After all those mindf*cks I am still reading this. I don't know why

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8mth
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Hedin
LV 3 Badge

Interesting world, decent characters, REPETITIVE. Everyone treats MC like trash, even when he brings top organizations multiple golden geeze and proves himself better, then their top tallents.Things are not getting any better.

8mth
Voir 1 Réponses
Jainam_Jain_3083

The speed of the story is a little slow, but the character and the world are written with lots of thought, and I hope to read the novel till its last chapter

8mth
Voir 1 Réponses
killrd3m0n_213

I just want to ask if Ellen or Jim are gonna come back in the story? Anwan, please respond.

8mth
Voir 1 Réponses
Krishna_Gautam_3285

The novel is really really good. Yah the grammer and sentences are quite troublesome but its not that much of a headache that people are making it. I've always longed for a novel like this and yeah, i really like it.

8mth
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Veritass

I've been reading this for what feels like years now and it's still good. Solid writing, good characters, great story !

9mth
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Gavin_Lepore

Very bad spelling almost unreadable. The idea was good but the author just messed it up. 1/10

9mth
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Yousif

I have read 3700+ chapters, honestly I don’t recommend you reading it it’s a waste of time you might ask why I reads 3700+ chapters and not giving up until now , will the start of the story is good and the events and progress is also good but when he ascends from his home world it’s kinda boring and repetitive events , slow progression in strength, lots of grammar mistakes , no new exiting events or anything. Just - need resources> enter ruins > fight and collect resources > add some hidden projects we don’t know anything about > progress a stage and repeat ( this cycle of action is started from early chapters till now ) then recent chapters he get kidnapped every 30+ chapters. No new event nothings. I gave up on hoping for something else

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10mth
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DarkDaoist

looks like author is in a dump and can no longer think of any plot besides kidnapping and ruins exploration. you should take a break and do a world building first and them comeback. latest kidnapping is utter nonsense he saw the raiders coming so he could've simply hidden himself, not the first time he hid from sky sovereigns using forbidden energy either.

10mth
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